Mini FF's ...Come show-off ur creativity - Page 3

ok now stop talking and write ur scenes 😃

first u write stupid 😆

I will soon follow u as always 😆

both of decide fast and write 😆 😆

Originally posted by: preethi

both of decide fast and write 😆 😆

ok let me wrie first😆.

its midnight.kk and su are sleeping.kk is having headache so she keeps changing sides on the bed.Sumit is very tired.So, he is very fats asleep.kk gets up her head is aching very badly.She tries 2 wake sumit but when she notices that he is fast asleep,she decides not 2 do so.

kk- ye bhi office se itna thaka hua aaya hai.iss waqt sumit ko uthaana thik nahin hoga.

She goes near the window and stands there for sumtime.Soon she starts feeling dizzy and is unable 2 stand properly.

kk-Kya karun samajh mein nahin aa raha hai.ouch...

sumit,in his sleep,puts his arm over kk,but notices that she is not there.He gets up.su-kk...kahaan chali gayi itni raat mein...kk....

he finds her standing near the window with her face to his opp side.He goes to her:

su-kk sona nahin hai aaj kya...holds her from back

kk-is still unable to say anything....sumit...

su-kya hua neend nahin aa rahi hai kya...and turns her face.

he notices that she is not well at all.

su-kya hua kumkum..tumhari tabiyat to thik hai...?

kk- su pata nahin bahut headache ho raha and i m feeling dizzy.

su notices that she is even unable 2 stand properly.so, he holds her in arms and carries her 2 bed, mekes her sit.

su-ruko..pahle to tum medecines le lo...

he gives her the glass but she is unable to hold it.Sumit holds the glass and makes her drink water.

su-wai8 i'll call the dr. pareshaan mat hona..

kk-sumit mumbai mein dr. ki srtike chal rahi hai...

su-damn it! par tumhari tabiyat....

kk-u i'll be ok.Tum chinta mat karo....

Her head aches.Sumit brings an oinment.

su-tum aankhen band karo main abhi sar daba dunga...

kk-su tum pareshaan mat ho...waise bhi tum thake ho...kal office bhi jaana hoga..so jao..

su-arre ajeeb ho tum.....kitna bolti ho...maine kaha na chupchaap so jao.

kk-smiles and closes her eyes.

su-massages her head and she feels much better.

su-pata nahin kaun kehta hai tumse din bhar jhansi ki raani bankar bhaag daud karne ko.kabhi to aaram kiya karo.din bhar bhaaagti rehti ho...aur tabiyat thik nahin thi mujhe batana nahin chahiye tha kya?

kk-hmmm....

su-kya hmmm?notices that she is asleep.so gayi kya kk?

kk- holds his hand....i luv u sumit...

su-i luv u too.he kisses her forehead....kisko daant raha tha...kabhi-2 to lagta hai ki mujhe jail ho jayegi......child marriage ke zurm main....

She sleeps like a child.Sumit kisses her-"ekdum bachhon jaisi lagti ho kabhi-2"

Originally posted by: nature

that's soooooo sweeeeetttt 😳.....
plz sum1 quikly continue wid such awsum scenes 😍 😉....

kyun tu kya kar rahi hai??? 😈

Henna will be back later on with her master peice... 😉

😆 😆 😆

Originally posted by: Henna042

kyun tu kya kar rahi hai??? 😈

Henna will be back later on with her master peice... 😉

😆 😆 😆

And reshu will be also back lateron with a classic piece😆😆😆

ok me back again u ppl call me lazy and see this is my second scene so now tell who is more lazy

This is a small scene between the parents and the 3 kids

Dhruv has just arrived from london completeing his studies and has a conversation with kumkum.Kumkum applying oil on dhruv head..

Dhruv:Maa i miss u soo much
Kumkum:I miss u too but u know who missed u the most?
Dhruv:Pata hai<Smiling>
Kumkum:Aacha kaun?
Dhruv:Papa aur kaun <both start laughing>
Kumkum:Tere aane ki khushi may your dad gave a days off to all the employee pata hai tujhe😃
Dhruv:Really maa woww lucky employees
Kumkum:Paagal<kumkum hits dhruv gently on the head😆>

Suddenly kumukm and dhruv here two people shouting and having a fight..

Kumkum:Dhruv go and see who is fighting ?
Dhruv:Mum its must be sharman and aashka only who else
Kumkum:But still go and see

Dhruv get up and goes to see and its unother then sharman and aashka both coming towards dhruv room

Dhruv:Maa i told u na its them only both r fighting like cats and dogs and r coming this way
Kumkum:Pata nahi when the will grow up<Both laughing 😆 >

Sharman and aashka come into the room fighting

Sharman:Aashka tu jaa go and do your modelling for two month jaa
Aashka:Shamran dont trouble me i am telling u
Sharman:Wat will u do ?<Giving a i am smart look>
Aashka:Maa see na this sharman he is troubling me from soo long 😆
Kumkum:Sharman behave your self.You both r not small anymore
Sharman:Maa plzz ab lecture mat dayna 😆
Kumkum:Hey bhagwaan kiya karu is ladke ka?
Sharman:Maa abhi toh u put oil on my head.
Kumkum:Wait let me put for dhruv first, then i will put for u
Sharman:Kiya maa this is not fair.. i am alwayz last<sharman giving a sad look>
Kumkum:Haa kyunki u trouble me alot that y
Dhruv:Kiya sharman let maa put oil for me na y r u getting jealous😉
Sharman:Wat bro tum bhi😛

All laughing and having a good time... Then kumkum suddenly remembers bout sumit

Kumkum:Aashka see if ur dad has finish his office work?
Sharman:Lagta hai maa is missing paa
Dhruv:Maa u r just 2 rooms away from him and ur miss dad
Aashka:Wah kiya pyaar hai
Kumkum:Tum teeno bohot badmaash hogaye hoo.Let ur dad come phir batati hu tum sabko

Just then Sumit comes into the room

Sumit:kiya baat hai kisko kiya batana hai?

Sumit comes into the room and sits beside kumkum

Aashka:Woh kiya hai na papa mummy was<Aashka looks at kumkum giving a should i tell look>
Kumkum:sumit tum in teeno ki baat mat suno bahot badmaash hogaye hai
Sharman Dhruv:Paa maa aap ko miss kar rahi thi
Sumit:Acha this is very good.Chalo mere late ane ka kuch toh faeeda huwa
Kumkum:Faidaa woh kase?
Sumit:Mujhe pata kaise chalta ki tum mujhe har pal miss kar ti hoo
Kumkum:Mujhe laga ki tumhey pata tha ki i miss not only every min but every second

Both getting a little romantic when suddenl all three kids say HELLOOOOOOO LOVE BIRDS HUM BHI HAI YAHA😆😆😆

kumkum gets a little shy😳 and all have a good laugh😆😆..

Dhruv:Chalo lets capture this moment on camera
Sharman:Good idea bro
Dhruv:Ruko i will get the camera and come

After sometime dhruv comes back with the camera and sets it and runs back
Sumit Kumkum on the bed Kumkum hugging sharman Sumit hugging aashka and dhruv in the middle of sumit kumkum hugging both of them

And everyone say cheezzzz

Well done shabu... 👏 for the first time u proved tht u r not a lazy bumb temporary okkkk... 😆

I will return with a classic piece bt only after henna... 😆 😆

oyeee u lazy ppl come on and wirte ur storys yaar 😆 😆 😆