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aanchal_c

@aanchal_c

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

eagerly waiting for the next chapter now.

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Arshaya

@ROBSTENLOVER

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

fab update.
Chalo ab ek toh aisa story mila jaha Jodha Jalal ko pain degi!
Wa8ing for nxt part

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Soumya

@baubles

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Wow! Awesome Pallavi!! Absolutely loved Jalal and Jo here..both of them hurt and yet cannot see each other in pain, love them!😳😳

Jalal did react and exactly the way Jo had wanted him to..great!! Can't wait to read the next part..though I know it's Jo who's gonna win, and somewhere Jalal is oing to be more proud n happy about her win though he might not say it..❤️

Update soon!!🤗

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Rutuja Deo

@Rutuja...

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Hey Pallavi 😊

What a nice SS yaar 😳 So much interesting scene

I really wish this will happen in show also,

Love to see Jo vs Benazir sword fight😳

Thanxx yaar for presenting Jo's smart move

Love the storyline soo much😊

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Pallavi!!!!!!!!!!!! 😛😛😛My Dear Superb!!!! U R an Awesome Writer... Amazing... Remarkable, Astonishing, Shocking, Wonderful, Incredible, Brilliant...yaar aur words yaad nahi aa rahe hai... Hindi me...shubhan allah... adbhut... aascharya janak... bahut sundar... ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I love Jodha's anger and smartness... The way she use reverse psychology on Jalal... Awesome! 😳I wish serial me bhi kuch aesa kare... I don't want Jodha crying baby😭... this is superb... Jalal ko accha sabak mila...😆😆😆

Vow you have shown Jalal's emotion really superb... kahi pe bhi chen nahi... and his anger...vah vah kya baat hai...

Pallvi I am guju... so in guju... bahu maja aavi gayi... 👏👏👏👏👏

One request... next chapter mai... uss kamini benz ka bura haal kar dena... Jodha ki talvar aur benz ka gala🤢😡... Meri atma ko shanti milegi...😃😃😃

Itna accha chapter den eke baad... tuje kese doubt ho sakta hai😡😆... Yaar tune to mera dil khush kar diya😊😊😊😊

Pallavi meri hindi itni bekar hai... tu ye padh ke dhire dhire se hasna...hi hi hi😆😆😆

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ash

@ashpat

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Wow. I loved how Jodha turned the tables on jalal. She is trying to find if he really wants to hurt her or just pretending. I am loving this. Pizzazz update soon. Thx for pm.

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bokul

@bokul

Master

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

wonderful update pallavvi

i so loved it

so jodha is playing a mind game on jalal

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Deepika

@dkorumilli

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Very nice. Thanks for PM

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Pallavvi

@Pallavvi

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy
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Oh my Gosh!!❤️! Wowww!!!!!!👏 I soo much wanted this scene!!! Yay! A big huggy for you Pallavi my sherni..🤗 Just loved it!❤️ The best part was Jodha insulting herself in front of that benaagin..to make Jalal realise😳...Wowww!!!!!!⭐️ Amazing😳...Loved it!❤️ Take a bow for stupendous heart-touching dialogues ⭐️ None can beat you in dialogues and your creative storyline❤️❤️! So Jalal couldn't tolerate Jodha speaking all that hun😳...Lovely!!❤️ Awesome! Wanted this scene sooo much!❤️ Just don't have enough words to praise your sheer excellence my SHerni.❤️🤗🤗..Next time I'll sit with a thesaurus!😛😳Cant wait for next chap!😳 Plzzz Update so0oon!!! 🤗🤗

Love you,

Your Khunkhaar Baaghin,😛😉

Nancy🤗

awww...nannu my darling...🤗🤗

i m really happy that you like it...😃⭐️

i was really unsure about this concept...😕

as it was something really different...😕

but u made my day with your comment yaar...⭐️😳

thanku soo much my khunkhar baaghin...🤗❤️

waise why will u sit with a thesaurus next time huh??😆😕😆