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@ramyvijay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#251

Originally posted by: anithu
ramya next update eppo😉😉

on the way... today or tomorrow... 😉

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anithu

@amrithatec

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Posted: 11 years ago

#252

Originally posted by: ramyvijay

on the way... today or tomorrow... 😉

Hmm thank u..By the way..ungalukku rajiyae paatha pavamaa illa..😆😆

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Ramya

@ramyvijay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#253

@ anithu... idhukku badhil... coming chapters la kidaikkum... porumai porumai..

will try to fulfil the expectations of everyone... as much as I can...

for both KJ and KR fans...

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Ramya

@ramyvijay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#254

CHAPTER THIRTY FIVE

Karthik in call with Jaya Dad.

Karthi : sollunga Sir...

J Dad : Sir ah.. ? maapla...

Karthi : sollunga maamaa...

J Dad : rendu vaaram munnadi en ponnu phone panni... romba sandhoshamaa pesunaa.. seekirame kalyaana velai aarambikkalaam nu sonnaa..

aanaa.. adhukku apparam enna aachu nu theriyala.. onnume solla maattenguraa.. andha pecha eduthaale.. pecha maathiduraa..

adhaan ungakitta pesipaakkalaam nu nenachen..

thappaa eduthukkaadheenga... ungalukkulla edhaavadhu prechanai yaa ?

Karthi : (silent)

J Dad : sollanum nu thonuchunaa sollunga... ennaala edhaavadhu panna mudinjaa seiven..

Karthi : adhu vandhu... oru china misunderstanding.. naangale sari pannikkurom.. naan pesittu.. Jaya va unga kitta pesa solren.. kavala padaadheenga..

J Dad : adhu podhum thambi.. romba thanks pa..

Karthi : edhukku thanks laam sollikittu.. ?

He cuts the call.

Vish : ennadaa machaan..?

Karthi : vidraa.. (upset)

He gives back the phone to Vishnu and leaves.

After an hour, all girls return from the session. Raji gets a call from the reception that her father is waiting. She goes to meet him.

Lakshmi comes to their place.

Laksh : hey... vaanga canteen polaam.. ivlo neram conference room la irundhadhu.. ore thalavali.. oru coffee kudichaa dhaan sari aagum..

Karthi : naan varala Lakshmi.. neenga poittu vaanga..

Vish : adhu... meesai vandhirukkaaru la.. adhaan..

Laksh : hey.. avanga reception la dhaan pesittu irukkaanga... ippa OK vaa.. ? varriyaa Karthik ?

Karthi : neenga munnaadi poi order pannunga.. naanga 2 mins la pinnadiye varrom..

While Karthik and Vishnu enters canteen, Raji and her dad comes out and they tend to meet each other.

Just to have a formal convo, Vishnu talks. Meesai as usual, talks briskly.

Vish : apparam.. Raji kalyaana velaigal laam eppadi pogudhu.. Sir.. ?

R Dad : hmm.. poittu irukku... neenga ellaam kandippaa varanum..

Vish : naanga illaama eppadi ?

R Dad : aamaa... nee illanaalum paravaa illai... Karthi thambi illaama eppadi..

Both Karthi and Vishnu blinks. Confused on what is he saying.

R Dad : oru china maattram... Raji ya America vukku anuppa ishttam illa.. adhanaala andha payyan vendaam nu sollittom..

Vish : enna Sir solreenga ?

R Dad : iru ppaa.. Raji inga vela paakura naala.. Chennai payyana paathaachu..

Vish : adhukulla vera fix pannitteengalaa ?

R Dad : mudivaana maadhiri dhaan.. avanga appaa ammaa tta pesi mudivu panna vendiyadhu dhaan baakki..

Vish : (mind voice) enna solla varraaru ivaru ? naan kekkuradhu ku badhil sollittu irukkaaru... ennaachu meesaikku.. ? onnume puriyalaye...

R Dad : payyana pathi kekkalaye neenga ?

Vish : adhaiyum neengale sollidunga..

R Dad : inga dhaan irukkaan andha singam..

Karthi : (looks at him)

Vish : (mind voice) yaara solraaru ivar.. ?

R Dad : enkittaye rendu dhadava kaiyya murukki kittu sandai ku vandhaare.. adhaan paa... un koottaali.. Karthik thambi dhaan... maappilai.. en ponnu viruppathukku kurukka nikka virumbala...

Karthi : (don't know how to react for this. Keeps quite)

R Dad : ennappaa... pesaama irukkeenga... ?

Raji : innum avanga shock la irukkaanga..

R Dad : oh.. aamalaa... sollaama ragisiyamaa vachi.. adhirchi kudukkanum nu sonnaappaa.. eppadi... inba adhirchiyaa ?

Karthi : adhu vandhu Sir..

R Dad : innum enna Sir nu sollikittu... urimaiyaa.. maamaa nu kooppida vendiyadhu dhaane..

Karthi : hmmm..

R Dad : sari.. Raji maa.. neram aagudhu.. oaarukku kelamburadhukku munnadi paathuttu polaam nu vandhen..

apparam.. unga appaa ammaa Benaglooru la irukkaanga nu sonnaa.. avanga phone number kudunga thambi.. naan pesuren..

Karthik hesitates..

R Dad : paravaala thambi.. neenga thayanguradhu puriyudhu..

Neenga modhalla pesittu sollunga... apparamaa naan pesuren... adhaan sariyaa irukkum..

Karthi : (mind voice) nalla vela.. enna sollanum nu yosichen.. avare sollittaru..

R Dad : apparam thambi.. naan edhaavadhu thappaa nadandhirundhen naa.. marandhidunga maapla..

Naan varren thambi..

Raji goes to send him off.

Lakshmi waiting in the table with the tea and snacks..

Laksh : enna pesittu irundheenga.. ivlo serious ah.. ? Raji appaa kitta..

Vish : serious ah vaa ? adhu namma dictionary la ye illa...

Laksh : indha nerathula indha dialogue thevaiyaa..? vishayatha sollu..

Vish : adhirchi kuduthuttaaru... Karthi ya maappilai nu kooppiduraaru..

Laksh : oh.. adhukkulavaa ? pona vaaram dhaan Raji kitta idha pathi kettaaru nu sonnaa.. semma fast dhaan..

Vish : oh.. unakku yerkkanave theriyumaa Lakshmi ?

Laksh : hmmm.. OK.. polaamaa ?

Vish : ippa dhaane naanga vandhom...

Laksh : sari... appa neenga irunga.. naan kelamburen.. (leaves from there)

Vish : machaan... ennadaa nadakkudhu inga.. ? rendu maams um orey nerathula orey vishayatha pesuraanga...

Karthi : (upset)

Vish : ennadaa.. upset ah irukka.. worry pannikkaadha machaan.. All is Well...

Karthi : ennadaa.. WELL-u ?

Vish : yetho yetho Kawasaki... atho atho Mitsubishi.. sowbhagyaa..

Edited by ramyvijay - 11 years ago

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suhasini

@Suha95

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#255

Ore sammaiyathula rendu aapa...!!

Ithu meesai ya ...😲

Ithey mathiri serial layum maryna nalla irrukum...!!

Super ramy..!!

Eagerly waiting for the next update..!😉

Edited by Suha95 - 11 years ago

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sathyakrs

@sathyakrs

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#256

Idhenna poti potutu aalaaluku 'maappilai' nu koopidranga...Nalla kulaparinga ramya...kadha endha pakkam pogudhunne purila...but interesting...👍🏼

KR ah KJ va ..???...

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Enigmatic_Charm

@Enigmatic_Charm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#257

Akka,Meesai ipadi maaruvaru nu naan ninaikalai🤣

Semma twist!!!!

Sikiram update panunga n thanx for the PM😊

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anithu

@amrithatec

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#258

hey ramya..ennappaa nadakkudhu..Onnumae puriyala..Messaiyaa idhu...In serial if it would happened...sema scene aa irukum...First of all raji eppo sethaaa karthikitta😆😆

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anithu

@amrithatec

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Posted: 11 years ago

#259

Thanks for the update ramya..

Sema interesting..Please update soon...enna seriyaa😆😆

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Ramya

@ramyvijay

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#260

CHAPTER THIRTY SIX

Karthi at the terrace of the their home looking into the sky and in thoughts. Lakshmi comes.

Laksh : Karthik.. vaa dinner saappidalaam..

Karthi : neenga ponga Lakshmi.. idho varren..

Jaya meets Lakshmi in the staircase.

Jaya : Karthik enga ?

Laksh : motta maadi la dhaan irukkaan..

Jaya : Ok. Thanks.

Jaya comes to the terrace and calls Karthik.

Jaya : Karthi.. enga appa call pannappa nee attend pannadhaane ?

Karthi : aamaa..

Jaya : adha yen enkitta sollala ?

Karthi : marandhutten..

Jaya : enna sonnaaru ?

Karthi : onnum illa..

Jaya : nejamaa ?

Karthi : aamaa.. nee meeting la irukken nu sonnen.. avlodhaan..

Jaya : idha solla unakku 10 nimisham aagumaa ? phone la evlo neram pesunom ngra duration laam irukku.. adha marandhuttu poi solriyaa ?

Karthi : (silent)

Jaya : appaa enna pesiyiruppaaru nu enakke theriyum.. kalyaanatha pathi dhaane ?

Karthi : Jayaa..

Jaya : vittidu Karthik.. naan avar kitta detail laa pesi puriya vaikkiren.. inimel idha pathi neeyum enkitta edhuvum pesaadha daa..

Karthi : Jaya please..

Jaya : please.. edhuvum pesa vendaam.. vaa dinner saappidalaam..

Karthik follow her as she go downstairs.

Next day @ office :

Raji seems to be very happy.

Raji : Karthik..

Karthi : (turns)

Raji : naan nenachu paakkave illa Karthik.. appaa ivlo seekkiram enna purinjittu namma kaadhal kalyaanathu ku OK solluvaar nu..

oru periya prechanai mudinja maadhiri irukku..

inime vera edhu vandhaalum naan easy ya face pannuven..

Karthik..enakku ullukkulla thonudhu Karthik.. nee thirumbi enakku kidaippa nu..

Karthi : Rajii..

Raji : ippa edhuvum sollaadha Karthik.. nee pazhayabadi ennoda Karthik ah maaruve nu enakku theriyum.. onnum avasaram illa.. nallaa time eduthukko.. naan wait panren..

adhuvaraikkum indha vishayatha pathi naan edhuvum pesa maatten..

adhuvaraikkum.. ennai pakkathu seat friend illa colleague nu nenachukko.. eppavum pola casual la iru..

please..yaaro maadhiri irukkaadha.. enakku kashttamaa irukku.

come on cheer up.. enga konjam siri..

Karthi : (smiles a bit)

Raji thanks him and leaves from her place.

Vish : eppadi machaan..? Raji ivlo confident ah irukkaanga ?

hmmm.. wait panni dhaan paakkanum..aduthu un life la enna nadakkum nu.. orey suspense ah irukku..

Karthi : dei.. en nilamaiya paathaa unakku comedy ya irukkaa ?

Vish : comedy illadaa.. Suspense thriller..

Karthi : (gives a look)

Vish : moodittu velaiya paakanum.. adhaane..

Friday : Karthi and Vishunu at their seats.

Vish : enna daa.. kalaaila irundhu.. orey dull adikkura ?

Karthi : onnum illa daa..

Vish : enkitta solradhukkenna ? sollu machaan..

Karthi : rendu naal ah Jaya va paakkave mudiyala daa..

Vish : comedy pannaadha daa.. inga paakkamudiyala naa.. veetla paakka vendiyadhu dhaane.. orey veetla dhaane irukkeenga..?

Karthi : aamaa daa.. aanaa kannlaye pada maattengira..

Vish : adheppadi irukka mudiyum ? chance eh illa..

Karthi : illa daa..enakkennamo.. ava venumne dhaan ippadi panraa nu thonudhu..

Back at home : Night

Karthi : Lakshmi.. Jaya va paakkave mudiyala.. enga ava ?

Laksh : ippo offlice la dhaan iruppaa..

Karthi : office la yaa ? ivlo neramaa ? edhaavadhu important work ah.. ? yen ivlo neram stretch panni work panraa.. ?

Laksh : hey.. ava rendu naal ah night shift la work pannittu irukkaa.. unakku theriyaadhaa enna.. ?

Karthi : hmmm.. sari ok. (mind voice) so.. purpose ah dhaan thalli irukkuriyaa Jaya ?

Next day : Saturday evening

Raji comes to meet Lakshmi at her home. Lakshmi opens the door.

Laksh : hey Raji. what a surprise..ippa dhaan en veettukku vara unakku vazhi therinjadhaa ? sari sari.. ulla vaa..

Raji goes in silently. Lakshmi takes her to her room.

Laksh : enna ? silent ah ve irukka Raji..

Raji : Karthik enga ?

Laksh : oh.. madam avana paakka dhaan vandheengalaa ? enkitta laam pesa maatteengalaa ?

Raji : sollu Lakshmi. Karthik enga ?

Laksh : inga dhaan avan room la illa vera engayaavadhu iruppaan

Raji : poi sollaadha Lakshmi..

Laksh : hey.. ennadi solra ?

Raji : enakku theriyum.. avanum Jaya vum Jodi ya engayaadhu poiyiruppaanga.. avan bike ah kaanome..

Laksh : shhh.. ippadhaan nyabagam varudhu.. vandiya service ku vittirundhaan.. adha edukka dhaan poiyiruppaan.

Raji : marubadiyum poi sollaadha Lakshmi.. vaasal la nikkuradhu Jaya scooty dhaane ?

ava vandiya inga vittuttu.. rendu perum onnaa Karthi bike la poiyiruppaanga..

Laksh : hey.. olaraadha..

Raji : appo..Jaya inga varala nu solla variyaa..

Laksh : hey Raji..Jaya inga enga veetla dhaan stay pannirukkaa.. adho andha room la..

Raji : oh.. appadiya.. ? eppayirundhu.. ? yen yaarume enkitta sollala.. ?

Laksh : unakku theriyum nu nenachen..

Raji : adheppadi.. yaarum sollaama enakku theriyum ? ellarum enna yemaathitteenga..

Laksh : appadi yellam onnum illa Raji..

Raji still upset on knowing this.

Laksh : Raji.. actual ah.. naan velila kelambittu irundhen.. konja things laam vaanganum..

Raji : adhukku ? enna kelamba solriyaa ?

Laksh : hey.. loosaa di nee.? neeyum en kooda vaa..

Raji : illa Lakshmi.. enakku mood u illa.. nee poittu vaa..

Laksh : inga thaniyaa nee enna pannuva ?

Raji : thala valikkudhu.. naan ingaye konja neram rest eduthukkiren..

Laksh : sari.. un ishttam.. paathuko.. naan poittu seekkirame vandhiduren..

Jaya is at terrace hearing songs.

Karthik comes and talks emotionally.

Karthi : eppadi Jaya unnaala appadi solla mudiyudhu.. thappu ellaam en mela dhaan..

enna.. uyiraa nesichadha thavira..nee endha thappum pannala..

enakku romba guilty ya irukku.. indha nelamai kku naan dhaan kaaranam..

naan poren Jaya..

Jaya : enga daa.. pora ?

Karthi : mothamaa.. poga poren.. (and moves back)

Jaya : dei.. yendaa ippadi ellaam pesura ? evlo bold aana aalu nee..?

Karthi : kaadhalukku munnaala..adhellaam onnum illa..

Jaya : Raji ya sollittu .. neeye ippadi pannalaamaa ?

Karthi : illa.. naa poren..

Jaya : vendaam Karthik.. sonna kelu..

He moves to the edge and stands over the balcony..

Jaya : (shouts) Kaarthikkk...