Ashlok FF:DESIRE CALLS...Chapt-24,pg-149 UPDATED! - Page 79

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pt311288






nethng and netym
i will be der to hlp u
i know u wil rock all the way
yo yo jeenia ...
i hope u wont mind calling me u jeenia


No i don;t mind ta ll dear but i m laughing we are discussing my FFs on someone else's FFs...
She must be thinking are these my storie's Fans or someone else...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Astha juice&astha biryani!! 😆 😆 I just couldn't stop laughing...
That was a lovely update...wish u could have completed the kiss part..
Will be waiting for the nxt part.thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Story with a suspense...hmmm...would be interesting to read what happens next...:-)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: HallyH

Oh n bout ur other FF
Im gonna read
I jus finished assignments for uni n all
Dnt think im ignorin ur PM
Sorry I didnt reply



Oh its okay sweetheart!🤗I didnt mind at all!😛U tk ur tym and no need to apologise!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pt311288

u r such erotic writer don know what to say
saying good and nice means just comenting ...


its actually breath taking update
i guess i can never write such erotic story ever in my life ...

but u make me wait alot plz dear make sure u will update as soon as possible



Thank u!Bt m really angry wid u!How can u say u an never write erotic story?Well if u wnt to m sure u cn!Nd if u need help or suggestiion m just a PM away my frnd!🤗M sorry I didnt read ur stories yet..Didnt get da tym to..Bt I'll read and comment!😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Yaar you write juts one scene and make us insane.how can someone write dark stories so perfectly? at least i can' i can juts think to write dark arts abut don;t think can meet to 1% of it...
Just loved it...



Jeenia!U can write too!I m sure u can!Nd if u need help or suggestion m just a PM away..Well I hv to read ur stories and comment too..😳as u see m so slow in update,I m kinda busy..But I will soon read and comment..Till dn alda best!👍🏼Nd thank u for such compliments!😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123


Thanks lot dear for Liking my work...
But i want to change my taste now..i have written nine FFs till date, all emotional.now i want to write something different...
definitely will try because i know, i have some true friends here who will help me in improvement...



Go ahead Jeenia!👍🏼M wid u too!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123


No i don;t mind ta ll dear but i m laughing we are discussing my FFs on someone else's FFs...
She must be thinking are these my storie's Fans or someone else...



😆I didnt mind at all dears!😃Go ahead both of u!I m waitn to read ur hot romances and dark stories!😛I'll squeeze out some time..Promise..😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

[Am I going too slow friends..?😕Do let me know if I need to fasten the pace,and if it's getting too boring..And thank u for such lovely comments everyone!🤗]


Chapter-17,page-113:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/97974960




CHAPTER-18.

Just when his lips were about to claim her soft ones,she turned her face to the side..But Shlok was not giving up so easily..

He kissed her cheek instead.Her soft rosy cheek turned rosier at his light kiss..

Shlok could not help it..He had to give in to his desire calls for this one unpredictable,crazy, yet adorable girl..

His lips kissed her soft cheek..Then his lips made its way down her neckline..Wet soft kisses,that made her moan out..And made him pull her closer and tighter up against his hard male body.

His lips licked at the sensitive spot on her neck.His body taking pleasure from the small moans that escaped her lips..

Shlok was losing control on himself,his senses and his body's reaction to her..His lips made its way to her sensitive earlobe..Kissing the curves and hollows of her ear pinna,and making her shiver in the process..

His hands snaked tighter round her waist,and pulled her closer into his body,which had hardened with arousal..

"Astha.."He whispered into her sensitive ears,as his lips made its journey down the column o her throat..Moist,wet kisses were placed up and down her throat which made Astha clasp him tighter,as her nails dug into his arms through his shirt.

This is getting crazy!Shlok!Stop before it's too late!His inner voice shouted out..But Shlok was in no mood to listen..

He had lots of creamy strawberry scented skin,yet to explore..Lots of area still to kiss and lick and take pleasure from..

He pushed her against the door now and set his hand free,as ne squeezed her wait,while the other cupped her cheek to raise her head up for better coverage..

Astha was dying or already dead..She was sure she had died and reached heaven..How can someone get so much pleasure while alive..

Zings of electric shocks were passing through her system,making her head spin..

Just when she thought the pleasure could not increase any further,Shlok increased it by a fold making her dizzier and dizzier in the process.

What was happening to her?!She thought,as another soft moan escaped her lip,as Shlok licked at her jawline,and tenderly bit on it.

This is heaven for sure!She sighed out,as suddenly his hand squeezed her waist,making her gasp out with renewed pleasure.

Her hands snaked round his neck,of its own accord,and her nails dug into his naked skin.

This cannot get any better..She thought in her aroused senses,when he kissed her way to the corner of her now tingling lips..

She braced herself to be kissed by him over there,when she realised it was not happening..

He kissed her all around her lips,but avoided kissing directly on the lips,making her senses go haywire with his teasing..

"Should I kiss you Astha..?"He whispered huskily..As he licked at a corner of her lips.."Or should I just stop..?"He Slightly bit into another corner,making her gasp with pleasure..

Astha knew she was going to die if he did not kiss her just then..She knew she would die if..

She moved her lips so that he had complete access to them..

Shlok removed his lips and stared down at the glowing beauty..She wanted him to kiss her he realised with a winning smile..

So be it..He would do just that..

His lips swooped down to claim her soft ones and claim his victory..

KNOCK!KNOCK!

"Sir!May I come in?!You had asked for these files.."Came a male voice from just outside the door..

Before Shlok knew how to react at the interruption,Astha had pushed him away..And before Shlok could blink,she had opened the door and ran out of the cabin,pushing the startled interrupter employee out of the way,in the process..

Shlok pinched the bridge of his nose,and turned and made his way towards the toilet to splash some more water onto his face..He needed to cool down..

The confused and baffled employee stood at the cabin door,baffled,with a pile of files in his hand..He first stared at the departing back of Astha,and then at the departing back of his boss,Shlok..

Then shaking his head,he decided to come some time later..

Astha sat on her desk,unable to believe what had just happened..Unable to take in the fact that she,herself had let the loathsome Agnihotri kiss her!And that also on that..

Her face coloured up as she remembered the sensual way he had kissed her..Driving her senses to the last boundary of craziness..

She covered her heated face,as waves of shame passed through her body..

How could she behave so shamelessly..How could she lat that hateful arrogant self-centred Shlok Agnihotri touch,and caress and kiss her so intimately..

Even now,as she thought about it,it made her skin crawl..

And he had said he was her boss now..No!She could not work for that man!She had to leave this place!Forever and for good!She just had to leave!

Deciding Astha,quickly typed and printed her resignation letter,and was about to sign it,when another thought crossed her mind..

No!If I resign Shlok Agnihotri will think he scared me away!I won't give him that satisfaction!

Slowly she straightened herself..Her eyes bright with a new light of courage and pride.

" Shlok Agnihotri,if you think you scared me..Then you are in for a surprise!I'll teach you the listen of your life!"Astha murmured in a determined voice,her lips curving in a smile,as she tore the resignation letter to shreds,and threw the pieces into the waste paper basket.

"Just wait and watch Shlok Agnihotri!Soon you'll regret the day you set your eyes on me!"

Shlok sat in his office leaning on his chair..

His eyes were closed..He sighed out once again,as he remembered the first time he had seen her..Her face turnedup, to the dark rainy sky..

Raindrops were washing away the mud streaks stuck to her face..He had been mesmerised when that smiling face with that creamy skin was exposed to his eyes..

"Astha Kirloskar..What are you doing to me..?!"He muttered in frustration..


Chapter-19,page-125:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98379725



Edited by TehsinaJFJ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Me firat one to comment. I really love it.ur story is getting interesting. It am wondering what wil aastha to shlik and finally aastha is falling for shlok.good work keep it work.could make ur ur chapters little longer if possible. Waiting for next update

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