Ashlok FF:DESIRE CALLS...Chapt-24,pg-149 UPDATED!

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Serviana

@Serviana

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#791

Awesome update!!! I really like your writing... so beautiful!!!

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Anusha

@Anusha16

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#792

woah!!!! hotness overload...

someone help me, I'm melting to a puddle...😆

seriously you're getting very good at this...sheesh i'm very embarrased reading this...☺️

I loved how astha thought she will never give the satisfaction to him that he scared her away..

between this to all girls who write hot and sexy ff's .

dont you guys ever feel embarrased while writing such stuff???

you people are so good... what about you teshina??

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sumana561

@sumana561

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#793

Nice update ...couldn't.stop.blushing 😳 plz continue with the same pace,don't fasten up things between them.thanks for the pm

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537048

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#794

ok so astha is on the mission to teach shlok agnihotri a lesson of his lyf

and shlok is frustrated dat wat is happening to him becoz of astha kirloskar

let see wat happens next

do update soon

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Riddhima

@Khushi_Dillse

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#795

Aastha you teach shlok Agnihotri a lessons...oohooo...

And Shlok frustrated his self...my dear you are in love...

You understand soon...

I was enjoying the update dear...it was superb...👏

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kulrudeep

@kulrudeep

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#796

👏👍🏼☺️ I simply loved the entire FF track!!truly mesmerising.It is gettiing so real that i was really getting goosebumps upon reading it!!I have read the other FF of urs as well,very very well written!!I loved it!!!!to the core!!!👏

Waiting for the update!!cant help to read what will astha do!!!!!

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saranyagulam

@saranyagulam

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#797

nice dear... I could feel the feelings of astha... keep going...

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jeenia123

@jeenia123

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#798

I m saying again and again...it's just awesome...loving it more and more

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maivelli

@maivelli

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#799

nt only shlok but i also get deeply affected by ur hot updates

god love this one and thnxs for the pm

and plz do update soon ...

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maivelli

@maivelli

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#800

Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ

Thank u!Bt m really angry wid u!How can u say u an never write erotic story?Well if u wnt to m sure u cn!Nd if u need help or suggestiion m just a PM away my frnd!🤗M sorry I didnt read ur stories yet..Didnt get da tym to..Bt I'll read and comment!😉

aww thnk u so much dear
i will definitely ask fr ur hlp if m to write smthing like this ...

its ok yaar if u dnt gt enuf tym i have no issue with that take ur tym...