RaBir FF Chapter 10 UPDATED. - Page 19

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Posted: 11 years ago
Feeling guilty dear. Having pleasure at the cost of your grades 😕 . It's a pleasant feeling to read your ff. But we can wait. Relax. Take care of your studies.
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am speechless ☺️
Thank u 🤗for all the lovely chapters that gave us some precious moments, and smiles on our faces even in the midst of low times.

And, for sure...concentrate on studies...i mean i just finished all the finals and had the worst semester when i wasn't even doing anything extra-curricular. so, hats off to u! best of luck. and waiting for the bitter-sweet last chapter.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter -10

Rachna goes to Adi's room but finds him asleep ...n then moves out..

She calls Kabir who doesn't picks his phone..

Rachna: this is nice ..come ..confess leave..didn't even give me a chance to say something..but I need to talk to him abot this now..

Rachna goes to Kabir's home..n eenters his room n finds him taking clothes out of almirah..

Rachna: wt r u doing?

Kabir: well ..I already made a place for u in mah heart but now I m Making space for u in my Room..

soon u r coming here na...Miss. Garg after becoming Mrs.tripathi.

Rachna shys away ...

Kabir gets closer to her n says : r u gonna shy this way even after getting married..

Rachna turns to him n puts her hand around his neck

Rachna: God knows...may be...

Kabir: I like the bold Rachna whom I had seen an hour before..

Rachna hugs Kabir

Rachna: I love u ..

Kabir had not expected Rachna to openly confess her feelings..but she did which overwhelmed Kabir..

Kabir putting his hands around her.

Kabir: I love u too..

Rachna: but how r we gonna talk to our families..

Kabir: we will talk to them tomorrow itself...I can't live without u now even for a second..

Rachna: hmm...Kabir I trust u..

Rachna leaves after sometime n goes to home..

Next Day

Kabir comes at Garg's place ..

Dayal: beta tum..

Kabir: gud mrng uncle..I need to talk to u..

Rachna also comes there..

Dayal: Yes say..

Kabir: uncle..u m8 get angry at me for saying this but wt I m going to say is r8 n truth..

Dayal: come to the point...

Kabir: ok ..uncle..

Rachna goes near Kabir n holds his arm...

Dayal find it fishy..

Kabir: Rachna n I love each other n we want to marry...

everyone is stunned...at this ...

Dayal is unable to believe his ears..

Kabir: uncle..I know is a shock for u but we really love each other...

Dayal is furious and is about to hit Kabir when Adi stops him..

Adi: uncle wt r u doing...??

Dyal: did u hear wt this guy said...

Adi : I heard uncle but this isn't a way to deal with it..

Rachna : Adi..I really wanted to talk about it ..

Adi comes near Rachna

Adi: wt did u think??I don't know anything!!

Rachna : Adi plz..

Adi: come..on Rachna u call me a frnd n expected that I won't understand u ..I a;ready knew this thing was going to come..I had realised ur love for Kabir at lucknow itself..n I just gave it a fire...

Dayal: stop ..this nonsense now...u people consider marriage as a child play ...if u klnew why the hell u got engaged to her n why did u send a proposal

Adi: I didn't send a proposal uncle ..I never did...My parents sent the proposal without my knowing it..n I came when u people were talking about it..uncle Rachna is my friend...I didn't expect her to say yes..I thought she wud confess feelings for Kabir..but I don't know what made things go the other way round...

Rachna : Adi..!!

Adi: of course Rachna u r most imp part of my life n I can cross any limits for u..(turning to dayal) their love is true bless them uncle...

Dayal : I don't know what to say ..u people are getting on my nerves..

Shail(to dayal): if they r ready then we shud agree...After all we need Rachna to be happy...

Dayal : I guess u r r8..Shail...

Rachna hugs dayal...

Everyone is happy n Rachna n Kabir's Marriage is fixed...

One year later ..

Rachna & Kabir are a happily married couple..n are throwing the party fo their first anniversary..

Nitya & Adi r specially invited ...

Adi aska Nitya for a dance...

Nitya : ya sure..n they start dancing...

Kabir n Rachna smile...seeing them..

Kabir: an another story of love n passion is on its way...

Rachna : hmm...I love this feeling Kabir...of being with u...

Kabir & Rachna r in their room after the party is over..

Kabir takes out his shirt and cuddles Rachna from back...

Rachna is surprised n shocked ...

Kabir: u asked for time to take our relationship to next level...bcz u wanted to complete ur graduation...but now ur finals r over dear ...lets give the xam of love...

Rachna blushes..n tries to move away but all in vain as Kabir is no mood to let her go ..

Kabir slowly moves his hands down hers which makes Rachna feel an unknown sensation...

Kabir turns her towards him and she closes her eyes..

Kabir lifts her n carries her to his bed


iN the moonl8 their love gets a new height..


well i didn't describe the S.R scene to let ur imagination run wild...but for anyone interested...its their in the next comment ...

Edited by angelinasingh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
He brought his hand to her face and began caressing her face...her cheeks.His talented fingers were creating havoc on her senses especially when those magical fingers traced her bottom lip and parted it.She moaned in pure delight and pulled him closer..He smirked seeing his effect on his beautiful wife.She expected him to give her his kiss but he suddenly withdrew She smirked and began placing kisses on his face and chest.She knew that he can't resist her.She smiled inwardly and continued her torture.Kabir was turned on.. all his control vanished when she placed a peck on his lips.He wounded his arms around her and pulled her closer to him making her soft body crush with his hard one.As her clothes were preventing him to feel her body against his,he began untieing the doris of her blouse one by one. .Whenever he saw her wearing such sexy blouse,he felt an urge to untie them by himself.As he untied her doris(all the while kissing her),his hands went to her belly and began caressing it.He moved her pallu slightly and started drawing circles on her belly...especially her belly button..He began taking her saree which was tucked inside her underskirt.He brought his lips to her belly and began placing open mouth kisses on her belly.He looked her face...her eyes were closed... he knew that she was enjoying all these just as he..His fingers itched to untie the knot of her underskirt and he did so...and then Rachna cud not bear it anymore eran away to washroom ...and closed the door ...Kabir was now frustrated ...his wife had defeated him ...he pushed the door and entered the washroom ...he carriedMadhu forcefully to his bed ...and Rachna just looked at his well tanned body .. n then they finally consummated their marriage
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow That Was Really 😳 Iam Glad Rachna& Kabir Got Married At Last.
Thanks For Writing This FF.
Loved The Ending.
(:
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SilverFairy

Wow That Was Really 😳 Iam Glad Rachna& Kabir Got Married At Last.
Thanks For Writing This FF.
Loved The Ending.
(:


thank u
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Posted: 11 years ago
I will miss ur FF but studies r important hope ur grades increases
Thankyou for lovely Rabir FF
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Posted: 11 years ago
so hot update...i am blushing..now...☺️

but why u ended it so soon????????????
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: brat2008

Where are you sweetie🤗just want to give you a big mama bear hug😃

Awh ! The MU did not last long ,😆They kissed & made up☺️how cute was that
By the way !! What is happening with Adi & Nithya😆have all the naughty thoughts going thru😉

Dayal😡As usual grrr

Saari duniya ek Taraf , ladki ka Baap Doosri Taraf🤣


Keep writing & studying too😈

Loved it , next update?????

i m in delhi di ..come i m waiting ha ha
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Posted: 11 years ago
Perfect ending and so hot i m blushing now, u made my day.sad it ended soon but i can understand ur situation.thanks to have give us a lovely ff i think i ll keep reading again and again. Good luck for ur studies.

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