RaBir FF Chapter 10 UPDATED. - Page 17

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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg you seperate them 😭 I hate this Adi and his family. I thought Adi knows that Rachna admires kabir then why he is coming between them 😡

I hope Kabir do something to get Rachna back. I can actually visualize all the scenes. Love your FF. Don't dare to discontinued it 😈

Update soon dear and thanks for PM
Edited by Antimayan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awh !!!! Nitya & adi 😡 Kabab mein haddis😆
MU track😕
How do you manage to explain so well, the entire scene starts playing visually for me😃

Poor kabir ------ full devdas mode - Talli😆

God I love this guy Yaar
Hope the MU clears soon & we have good romantic moments btw them☺️

Thank you for updating😆
You forgot to pm me😈
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice! I'm actually loving this! This misunderstanding will make their feeling grow stronger to the point where they can't take it anymore!!!I love it! Jealousy, intense, passion, everything was in it! Can't wait read the next chapter 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh no! I thought, Adi was aware of her feelings. Or is he just pretending and acting as a catalyst to bring them together? In both the cases, I don't want the misunderstanding to last long. Poor Kabir 💔
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh nooo

please rachna dont do this, ufff cant belive this...

what will happen to nitya???
would it be kabir who saves her,

i want rabir together...

great work and thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh No Not Fair Poor RaBir.

):
I Want Them Together.
Not Apart.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter-9

Adi & Rachna tell the family that they want to get married soon ...Everyone is happy listening their decision...

Dayal announces that they wud get them engaged tomorrow evening..

Nitya's place

Kabir has fallen unconcious & Nitya makes him lie on the couch nearby n sits on the sofa thinking how Rachna cud do this? She remembered Rachna confessing that Adi was just a friend ...

Next day..

Everyone is getting ready for a grand celebration...

Kabir's Dadi has got invite from Garg's for Rachna's engagement...and she agrees to come to bless the couple...Kabir had woken up with heavy head to find himself at Nitya's place...

Kabir: Nitya..I m really sorry ..I came here all drunk..I just didn't know where to go..so I just..

Nitya: Its all r8 but I thought u believed in fighting Kabir n u got whatever u want..

Kabir: What does that mean..

Nitya: u always tried to avoid me when I talked about Rachna but today Kabir u need to stop urself u need to stop her before everything finishes..

Kabir: I don't wanna talk about her...Every girl is the same..

Nitya: oh! Really then why did u turn up here .? I m a girl too...Kabir accept the fact that u r head over heals in love with Rachna and f8 to get her back in ur lyf ..I will talk to her...her sister came this morning ...She is getting Engaged Kabir n u can't let this happen..

Kabir : I have to go home Dadi is alone..n he turns to leave..

Nitya: U can't run away like this Kabir ..

Garg's place

everyone is busy Rachna is sitting in her room n thinking what happened ...

Nitya comes there ..

Nitya : Rachna I need to talk ..

Rachna : but I don't think anything is left to talk about ...

Nitya : wt r u saying ..n most imp what r u doing ...u..oh! God Rachna I thought u r in luv with Kabir...n now this..

Rachna : oh! U knew that well that comes as a surprise to me..

Nitya: wait what r u talking about ?

Rachna: well u know ur frnd loves him n even then u r cuddling him

Nitya: stpo it Rachna ..

Rachna : stop being gud...NItya ...I m Getting late ...Adi m8 be waiting for me..

The ceremony starts ..

Kabir and his Dadi arrives..

Dadi: yeh kya shail ab humari pyari Rachna bhi humse dur ho jayegi aur hum apne is khadood pote ke saath akele reh jayenge...Rachna & Kabir awkwardly look at each other ...but turn away as they fear of getting their emotions revealed through tears..

The ring ceremony starts Rachna & Adi exchange rings and Kabir pretrends to be happy while Nitya looks on...

She is unable to bear it n leaves...

The ring ceremony gets over N Rachna goes to her room ..she sits down when Aditya comes in ..

Adi: hello ..

Rachna : hi...

Adi: are u happy Rachna ?

Rachna: wt do u mean Adi?

Adi: I didn't see u smiling Rachna ..

Rachna: oh! Adi ..I was just thinking ...

Adi : Thinking about whom...?

Rachna : mah family adi !!

Adi: sure ...

Rachna : of course I m tired just want to be alone.

Adi : f9 I m going to market u need something..

Rachna(to herself): peace ...to adi : no ..nothing..

In The market ..

Nitya is walking on road like dumb ..she has no idea where she is going the past 24 hours of ;life had changed everything..she once had feelings for Kabir but she did move on in life after realising that Kabir wud never reciprocate her feeling..AShe was the happiest person when she saw Kabir falling for Rachna ...n now everything was messed up ..n she was half responsible for ..it She was unable to see wt the future had in store for all these 4 lives which now stood at crossroads...

Suddenly a car came n was about to hit her when a guy pulled her to him..

Guy: u okay? Madam...

Nitya : ya ...u here?

Guy is adi...

Adi : why the place hasn't banned me ..r8..

Nitya faints suddenly n Adi gets worried n takes her to a doctor..

Doc: well sir she is f9 ..just she is stressed ...

Adi: thnks sir..

Adi drives Nitya to her home ...n asks her to be in her room...

Nitya: wait man..this is my place ..

Adi: n doc advised u too rest..U r rachna's friend if she comes to know then she wud taunt me ...u sit ..I will get u something to eat..

Nitya(To herself): How lucky is Rachna !! she got Adi ..wait what I m talking about ...Igot this opportunity to talk to him...

Adi gets her a dish n makes her eat it n leaves to attend a phone call...

Meanwhile Kabir is at his studio thinking of what the situation had become n WHAT H CUD DO ..wHETher he ad any options...

Rachna is in her room sleeping when she turns and puts her hand on the other side of bed n feels something fishy ...she turns on the side lamps n finds Kabir lying besides her and looking at her ...

Rachna: u?? n Gets up in a flash of second..

Kabir: I don't thnk I need to take time from u to meet u..

Rachna: get out now...

Kabir grabs her and pulls her closer

Kabir: u sure u want me to leave..

Rachna: leave me ..or else I will shout ..

Kabir: really the shout..'

Rachna: wt do u want?

Kabir: u...I can't let any1 take u away from me..

Rachna: stop ur nonsense n leave..

Kabir cups her face and takes her hand in his n kisses them gently ..He THEN Slowly movs towards her and Rachna gets up from the bed..n one last time asks him to leave ...

Kabir gets up again and goes near her & cuddles Rachna from back n then speaks in her ears.

Kabir: really u want me to leave..

Rachna doesn't say anything n just closes her eyes..

Kabir puts his hand around her waist n slowly moves her hair away n kisses on her collar bone...

Rachna never saw that coming n just pushes Kabir away..

Rachna: Kabir just stop this ..n leave..

Kabir: stop ...why bcz u fear of loosing urself to me..u fear the truth to bhe revealed...I luv u Rachna ...n u know it even then u r getting married to someone else..

Kabir gets closer to Rachna n puts his hand on her face ..n slowly goes towards her n moves to get near her lips n then he kisses her lips..Rachna too responds with equal passsion ...and they are just lost in each other ...till they fall short of breathe...they just move aspart to get in some air...n Rachna hugs Kabir n Kabir hugs her tightly back...

Rachna gets concious n asks him to leave ...immediately...

Kabir complies n leaves ..

Rachna sits in her room numb thinking wt just happened..she thinks about Adi..

Rachna(to herself) : how cud i do this ...hw cud i do this to Adi!! I can't cheat him..I need to talk to him...now..

Next chapter:

Rachna n Kabir together tell all people about their relatuonship n feelings..

Dayal is infuriated is about to hit Kabir when Adi stops Dayal...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: brat2008

😆

You forgot to pm me😈

so sorry dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
I m so sorry to tell u people...writing has taken toll on my studies n maah grades r going down😭😭😭..n I can't afford poor grades...so I will stop writing soon...tomorrow will be the last chapter..
managing econmics with mathematics..has made me ...just like hell.but I may write short stories which i wud let u know
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Posted: 11 years ago
They kissed they kissed they kissed . . . Wow that was very bold of kabir . . . Its ok dear grades are more important. Study well

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