ASYA SS: 3 years later. Completed - Page 17

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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG ... This was brilliant... N fabulous... So Zoya will get all the letters now... Hope she clears out Rashid'a name as well from the historical case... Plz update soon... Eager to read more...
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Posted: 11 years ago
i just came across this story
i must say i am in love with the track ..beautiful

what abt ayaan


will u show some relationship btw zoya and haider?


pls add me to PM list
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb 👏 is now everthing ok between asya???
zoya knew now that skeleton was her mother's...
& confusing when major talk abt zoya & when abt rehaan 😕
continue soon
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i have always wanted a story where zoya would be in defense.. its a different concept, which i liked it very much... do add me to ur pm list
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amazing loved it...
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brilliant :))
pls continue sooon! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA

Amazing, awesome, beautiful, excellent update.
I just love the hug.
So now zoya went to search KV. Hope she finds Asad's love letters.
This Farooqui & Farooqui confuse me. I have to read it again to clr my confusion.
Can i request one thing pls give me ASYA now.
Thanks for pm.
Update next part soon. Cant wait to read.


When he talks about computers he's talking to Zoya and if he's talking in general, he's talking to Rehaan :)

The purpose was to create confusion haha
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: arorasurbhi

superb 👏 is now everthing ok between asya???
zoya knew now that skeleton was her mother's...
& confusing when major talk abt zoya & when abt rehaan 😕
continue soon
thanks 4 pm


Ahahah the point was to make it confusing like Nuzhat says ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Here's a FULL ASYA part Haha, I know everyone was eagerly waiting for this. So here you go, :)

PART 9


Zoya stripped and searched the house down completely, and finally came across a memory card. She asked the evidence team to take it in. She sent the teams on their way, the two officers that came along stood by the door as she asked them to give her a minute after clean up. She looked around the house that wasn't lived in anymore and reminisced about the times she had spent here. How her and Mr. Khan fought, hated, and eventually loved each other. She thought about the morning, and how Asad had hugged and kissed her. She knew she was wrong to just give up on life based on something she had heard, but how couldn't she take him seriously, when he sounded so serious. But then she remembered all those times when he told her the meanest things in his anger and later apologized. Wasn't this just like those times? If she forgave him then, why couldn't she do the same now? She hadn't even given him the chance to explain yet. She decided that she was going to talk to Mr. Khan. Yes, meeting him made her resolve to stay away from him weak, but today, when he hugged her, her resolve had broken. She wanted to be with him, no, she needed to be with him.


During the search, the mailman was passing by, saying that there was another letter for Zoya Farooqui. The house has been locked and he hasn't ever seen people here so he kept the letters with him. She asked for them, and told him that she was Zoya Farooqui and she lived here for a while. He took her to the post office and came back with two big boxes of letters, "There's about 1100 letters in here, always from the same person and always for you." Zoya was confused, so many letters? She took the boxes and sat down in the waiting room. She picked one of the first letters, and read the sender's name Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan, M.D. Dilshad Constructions, 5th Ave. Manhattan, NY 90345. Her heart picked up the pace, she looked at all of them, and they were all from him. She couldn't believe that the man, who she had thought hated her had written so many letters to her. She went back to find the oldest one, it was dated back to May 27th 2014, and opened it.


"Dear Miss..Zoya,

Salaam, How are you? I just wanted to tell you that I miss you. I know I made a decision and I left. But, I still miss you a lot. I wanted to speak to you, but I can't seem to get a hold of you. I asked Appi and Jeeju as well, and they wouldn't reply.. I know you're mad at me but please Zoya. I need to speak to you. I don't know why but I feel like you're not okay..I can feel you near me in New York, but I know it's not possible since you're in Bhopal. Yet I can't stop myself from looking for you. Please just return my calls, I just want to know that you're okay and hear your voice..just once.

Mujhe pata hai, ki humari mohabbat itni kamzor nahin hai Zoya. Agar humne muqaddar ko saath mein haraya tha. Toh hum yeh ladayi ka bhi samna kar sakte hain. Mein laut aaunga Miss. Farooqui, bas ek baar bula dijiye. Mein abhi New York mein hoon, we opened up a new branch here, and I've been working on it. Agar aap kahein toh mein yeh sab chodkar aa jaaunga, bas ek awaaz de dijiye..

I miss you, and I love you,

Your Mr. Khan."


She saw that there were tear drops that blurred a few words, it showed that he had been crying while writing this. She couldn't stop herself from crying, it was dated to a day after she had tried to commit suicide. He had felt her, he felt her dying.

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Zoya drove back with the officers to the Siddique Mansion, and saw that they had found other things related to the case along with a blueprint to create a music ball exactly like Zoya's. The officers collected everything as needed and left to analyze the evidences. The Major nodded at Zoya as she walked in. She told her Salaams and apologized for hiding her identity from them. As soon as she was finished, Asad walked upto her and asked, "wo..wo actually...now.." Zoya smiled, trying not to giggle, and said, "Allah Miya what's wrong with you Mr. Khan? Yes Mr. Khan we can go for a walk now. I need to speak to you." Asad was relieved and took her hand in his as he walked out of the mansion to the garden. They sat at the bench where he had last met her 3 years ago when she was mad at him for leaving her here, trying to apologize for leaving her here.


After a few minutes, Asad took her wrists in his hands and asked slowly while stroking her right wrist that had a scar, "..you..you tried..to..why Zoya?" Zoya didn't expect him to ask her straightaway, but she understood and said, "Because..I didn't want to live with the burden anymore..I couldn't see the hate I thought I'd see in your eyes because I didn't come with you.. I swear.. I know I made a mistake..but..but when I he..heard," she couldn't continue, she started crying furiously. Asad took her in his arms and said, "I didn't mean it Zoya, if you would've stood there for another minute you'd hear me apologizing to Ayaan for saying such mean things without realizing.." Zoya looked up a little shocked, she got out of his arms and tried to continue, "but what you said was tru.." Asad put his hands on her lips, "No Zoya, it was far from the truth, you're not the reason that all this happened, don't even think so, you didn't separate Ammi from me, she took her own decision, like you said that night, you were just supporting her. Zoya.." he took her hands in his, "you need to understand, that your life..your life is very precious to me, meine yeh pehle bhi kaha hai, aur ab bhi yeh baat kayam hai ki aap mere liye, meri jaan se bhi zyaada hai" Zoya gasped and looked at his eyes, they screamed love and longing. She couldn't take in anymore, "That day..when phoopi had second thoughts...about..about leaving..I .." she closed her eyes, and continued really quickly, "I encouraged her to take the decision as she would be happier but I swear Mr. Khan, I'm sorry Mr. Khan, I'm so sorry, I didn't..I didn't think it would separate us..I was wrong..I'm so.." but was stopped as she was hugged by him again. "Please stop apologizing, hum dono se galtiyan huwi hai Zoya, lekin ab nahin," he took her left hand in his and said, "is baar humare beech kuch nahin aayega, mein aapse waada karta hoon" and he kissed the ring. He smiled and said, "You kept your promise Miss Farooqui, aapne issey apne aap se door nahin honey diya, kash aapne aisa hi waada mujhse apney appko door na karne ke liye kiya hota. Miss Farooqui, I'm so sorry meine aapko yahaan chor kar chala gaya."


"I found your letters today," said Zoya with watery eyes, Asad looked up at her, a little surprised but sheepishly smiled a little. "I can't believe Akdu Ahmed Khan wrote me so many letters," giggle Zoya trying to make this a little lighter. "Did you read them?" "Just the first one..how ironic, you wrote it the day after.." "Hmm..I don't know why but somehow mera yeh pathar dil ko pata tha ki aap takleef mein hai" said Asad looking at a distant point, "you know Zoya after that day, I've felt like that a few times?" Zoya looked up frowning, wondering why he felt like that, and remembered how she had been hurt a few times. "..maybe because of my job? I've been hurt a few times," Zoya shrugged and replied. "Kyun Mr. Khan? Aapne kabhi mera phone ya emails ka kyun nahin reply kiya?" whispered Zoya as she snuggled into the crook of his neck, Asad looked away, and said, "wo...actually after I went to New York our company had to suffer a big loss, due to some hacking issue and we had to get rid of all our emails and numbers, and it was so stressful, it took us a while to get the company back on it's feet, us halaat mein meini apni contact ki saari cheezein delete kardin thi, aur mujhe nahin pata tha ki koi mujhe contact karna chahega bhi ya nahin...tab meine aapka number rakha tha, bohot baar phone kiya tha, lekin..apne na kabhi phone uthaya na calls return kiye" "Mujhe? ..oh.. wo mera phone kharaab ho gaya tha tab mujhe change karwana pada, phir mein wahaan ayi tab mera number badal gaya tha.." Asad looked at her with wide eyes, "kya?" He couldn't believe his luck, here he had been trying to contact her, and she was trying to get a hold of him. But he knew that the main reason for all the pain was that he left her, that's why he was mad, it wasn't muqaddar who separated them, it was him. He knew he would never be able to forgive himself, but at this time he knew he couldn't mope right now, he needed to be with Zoya, for Zoya.


They remained quiet, both felt a little light after the talk, Asad looked at her from the corner of his eyes, and slowly put his arm around her. To his surprise, she took it rather nicely, smiled and snuggled into him. They both sighed together, Zoya looked up at him at the same time as he looked down at her. They both saw each other's eyes, Asad leaned down a little hesitantly but when he saw Zoya trying to reach up as well, he took the chance. He kissed her lips, softly, her lips felt sensous, he had never felt this good in all his life. She was on cloud nine, she was mentally dancing, as she kissed him back with the same feel. The kiss wasn't just full of love, but full of passion and longing, at the end of it they ran out of breath and broke apart. They looked at each other and smiled, Asad took her hand and asked her this for the third and hopefully the last time. "Mis..Zoya, I know this isn't the most romantic way, but I want to be sure about this, about us..Zoya, will you give me the chance to rectify my mistake and make up for all the lost time?" Zoya looked at him with tears in her eyes, and nodded as she was too overwhelmed to speak. He was so happy, a huge weight had been lifted off, suddenly he was pounced on by an overly excited Zoya. They both fell laughing, she looked embarrased but then she felt his hand on her neck. She was pulled down into another kiss.


This time they were disturbed by a very shocked Rehaan, "WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON?!" he exclaimed, making Zoya jump away from Asad like she had touched fire. They both looked down at the floor like it was the most interesting thing in the world. Rehaan walked upto Asad with his jaws clenched, Zoya was terrified, she thought he'd hit Asad. She was about to scream when she saw Rehaan take Asad in for a hug with a huge smile on his face, and she relaxed. Asad felt relieved for two things, one that Rehaan hadn't hit him, and two Rehaan had accepted their relation. "So Bhaijaan and Bhabhi should be informed hey, about what your 5th attempt at this?" Rehaan asked Zoya pretended to count in the sky, and was hit by her in the chest playfully. "Ah Farooqui, you're stronger than you were before, now it actually hurts princess!" Zoya laughed and hugged her brother. She could feel that he was about to cry, when she looked up at him and shook her head. He nodded and told them that he was going to inform everyone else about what happened. Before leaving he said, "Farooqui, we're still.." "On the case, I'm aware, I'll meet you at my place in two hours, we still have to figure out who.." "Yes Zee I know" Rehaan smiled and walked away. He turned around one last time, and he saw Asad and Zoya walking hand in hand, smiling.


Asad and Zoya continued their conversation of catching up, and Asad had asked about her being shot. She easily said that it was a part of the job that she had took upon herself, she was okay just that she now had two more scars. Asad smiled and said, "You're still the most breathtaking woman I've ever seen." Zoya felt butterflies in her stomach after so long, she couldn't stop smiling. "I love you Mr. Khan," Zoya said, after staying quiet for too long, Asad flashed his dimples while smiling widely and replied, "I love you too, Miss Farooqui."

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Even though they still have a long way to go, and they still need to heal from the separation and the misunderstandings. They know they could heal each other, they need each other, and they could fill each other's wounds with their love. And this time, they would make sure nothing came between them. They'd stick together, forever.


I hope I met all your expectations 😳


All rights reserved. No part of this document may be reproduced or transmitted in any form or by any means, electronic, mechanical, recording, or otherwise, without prior written permission from the author. (c) Narmeen aka neemasya

Edited by neemasya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
finally...i read 8 & 9 both in one go...and this feeling is so awesome...it feels like a long update...😆

coming to the story...take a bow...👏
written so beautifully...
Asad's realizations...their heart-to-heart connection...too good & lovely...👏

Zoya reading Asad's letter...finally...when u sent her to KV...laga hi tht she'll read the letters...and it did happen...
and 1100 letters...woww...amazing...😃
hope to see some more letters read by Zoya...

9th part ws the best...loved AsYa's convo...
finally the air is cleared...evrythng sorted out...😊

and Zoya nearing to solve the murder of her ammi...hope she tells abt it to Asad soon...
and lets see hw it shapes out...

hope to see AyRa convo...although Humeira has moved on...
wish ek baar they talk...may be AsYa try initiating a convo betwn themm...😉

thnks fr the pm...😊

and i dint notice...i'm d 1st one to comment...yuhuuu...

and I have UNRES
the comment just bfr the 8th part..

Edited by angel2930 - 11 years ago

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