SaRa FF: Pyaar ishq aur mohabbat (completed-pg-15)

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Hey everyone 🤗 (did anyone remember me 😉 )
i am Preethi the same girl who write SaRa FF's 😆

jokes a part, i know many are angry on me for not completing my other FFs but seriously guys i am running out of ideas to complete those FFs I am trying by best to complete them


in the meanwhile, i started writing a new story "Pyaar ishq aur mohabbat" on SaRa... i thought i will post this FF only and only if write the last part and guess what, just now i completed the last part of this FF (their is no Epilogue of this story.)

I will post the whole story in just two days 😳 ... there wonot be any chapters, it will be like a continuous story 😊

so lets start with character intro 🥳

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Page -1 Two parts
Page-3 Two parts
page-4 one part
page-5 one part
page-6 one part
page-7 one part
page-8 one part
page-9 one part
page-10 one part
page-11 two part
page-13 one part
page-15 three part (The End)
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Indira Sharma(21 years): Independent but shy girl. She loves her family. She is the only daughter of Inder Sharma and Kutumb Sharma. She is apple of their eyes. She has three brothers who adore her. She loves them equally. She never went against her parents or brothers. She is always obedient daughter and sister. Engaged to Rishi Diwan.


Sameer Diwan(30 years): The man who never smiles or lost his smile when his wife deceived him. He became a successful business man but very arrogant. Elder son of Yash and Gayatri Diwan. No one goes against him. His words are like final decision in their family and business.


Rishi Diwan(26 years): Younger son Yash and Gayatri Diwan. Fun loving but obedient, his character is very much similar to Indira Sharma. As Indira never went against her parents or brothers, Rishi always obeyed his brother and respects him. He is engaged to Indira Sharma.


Sumer Sharma(32 years): Indira Sharma elder brother, very much similar to Sameer Diwan. Both are business rivals. He hates Sameer to core because he always lost in business infront of Sameer. Ego clashes are on peak with Sameer Diwan. He adores her sister, Indira Sharma. He did not marry, he want Indira to settle down first. Indira is his priority. Many told him to marry but he is hell-bent not to marry because he donot want to divide time between Indira and his wife-children. His words are like final decision in his family.

Munna Sharma/Sunanina/Ishaan: Indira Sharma middle brother, sister-in-law and nephew.

Vidith Sharma/Seema Sharma: Indira Sharma younger brother and sister-in-law.

Inder Sharma/Kutumb Sharma: Parents of Indira Sharma.

Yash Diwan/Gayatri Diwan: Parents of Sameer Diwan.

Tanya Diwan/Kapoor(30 years): Ex-wife of Sameer Diwan who deceived him after marriage for money and modelling career.

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Story starts:

"OMG tomorrow is my engagement and till now my engagement lehenga is not ready. Bhabiii" Indira Sharma starts shouting from dressing room of the boutique.

Sunaina who is eating apple "aree kya hain Indira, how is the lehenga"

Indira "bhabi, my blouse zip is not working properly, please call the designer"

Sunaina "wait she is busy with Seema's dress. I will call her".

Indira tries once again but no use. She is frustrated, she wants to shout on someone but it is not her character. She never spoken in loud voice, or curses or scolds or says a single bad word to anyone. She never knows what is getting angry on anyone. She grownup as princess and she looks like a princess. Her long hair, deep eyes, flawless skin, her lips are of perfect shape. She is 5.5" height with perfect curves. People say "bhagwan na bahut fursat se banaya hai isa". Indira leans to the mirror, folder her hands tapping her fingers. Indira remembers 10 days back Sumer came home happily saying he bought a match for Indira.


10 days back:


Everyone is waiting at the dining table for Sumer to join them.

Sumer smiling at Indira "Indira I bought a match for you. His name is Rishi Diwan" everyone is shocked except Indira, because Rishi is brother of his brother's rival Sameer Diwan. Indira don't know about his rivalry with Sameer, she feels Sumer is saint who can never do wrong, so she feels everyone are his friends. Sumer never shared his business frustration at home mainly infront of Indira.

Inder "But Sumer Rishi is Sam-"

Sumer "I know but Rishi is very good person unlike his brother" he told to himself I will make sure Rishi shifts from Sameer's house or throw Sameer from the house where my sister stays with her hubby Rishi'

he continues "In this world it is really very hard to get good guys who are ready for arranged marriage. He is very down to earth person and perfect for my sister. He has no bad habits or any bad past" he turns towards Indira "Indira if you want check about him on internet or here is his profile. Tell me your opinion"

Indira feels sad, she donot want to marry now. She wants to be independent, wants to do job however small it is. Want to see outside world. She done her B.com and then became calm. Her college life is not that great fun. She always goes in her car and returns back in her to home, no group studies, no movies or picnic with her friends nothing. She asked Sumer about doing job. Sumer allowed her to takeup the job in his office; she knows how the job will be. She donot need to do anything just sit in the chair others will do your work. Indira want to cry and bang her head on the table to see the royal treatment of her colleagues. She left the job in a week. Indira wants to do higher studies but now Sumer bought a match.

Seema who is her sister-in-law and friend tries to say "Sumer bhai but Indira is just 21 years. It is too early for her to marry and-"

Sumer cuts her "Indira what is your opinion" his voice became as if he want to close the case. Vidith places his hand on Seema to stop her. Seema looks helplessly at Indira.

Indira tries to smile a little, Indira "bhai, I donot have any objection with the marriage. I will marry whoever you show but I-I want to do higher studies and want to work-"

Munna "work, ahhahah you left your job in one week. Job is not your cup of coffee Indira"

Indira feels like crying "it's not-".

Kutumb stops Indira "aree high studies or job you can do after marriage if your husband wants"

Seema feels encouraged may be Indira can do what she wants once married. Here she cannot open her mouth infront of his elder brother. Who knows may be everything will change after marriage'

Seema "yes yes Indira, she is right. You can do studies or job after marriage" Indira smiles at her sister-in-law still confused.

Sumer voice softens "Indira, there is no force. It is your life" Indira knows Sumer can never force her. She knows he rejected many matches already which came for her. Indira "it is your wish bhaya. I have faith in your decision"

Sumer "great then, I already done whole background check of the guy. He is going two months away from India for some business deal after 15 days so better to get engaged before he goes. Once he comes back we can arrange for marriage" Seema mutters great'. Indira looks at Seems with a what' expression. Except Seema and Vidith everyone is happy with the match where Indira is confused. Seema and Vidith want Indira to see the world but they cannot go against Sumer and cannot make Indira understand it. Indira is blind love for Sumer; it is not like Sumer is taking advantage of it but indirectly it is affecting Indira's wishes and dreams. Seema makes Vidith understand that may be after marriage Indira can have her freedom. Indira meets Rishi the following day. She likes him, as both their likes and dislikes are same. They continued to meet daily to know about each other more. Indira and Rishi engagement is fixed after 10 days, they want to wait as Rishi's elder brother. Sameer has to return back from US. Indira never saw his elder brother but did not question about him. She liked her in-laws Yash and Gayatri. Who adored her just like Inder and Kutumb. Indira family is happy to send Indira into Diwan family. Sumer and Yash makes a business deal along with the engagement for which Rishi is going abroad. This is a marriage cum business deal for Sumer. His first step to become even in business with Sameer Diwan. Sumer tried many ways to beat Sameer at last he decided to go with relationship. Donot think he is using Indira, he never does that. Sumer genuinely liked Rishi for Indira and business deal is added advantage.


Present:


Indira is fedup waiting for her bhabi, sits on the small stool checking the duppatta she places on the stool. On other side Sameer Diwan enters the boutique, his attitude and authority shows on his face. He walks as if he owns the world. Every girl passing him is staring at him but Sameer is oblique to their looks. He is very angry on his mistress who is ready to create rumors that she is pregnant and Sameer promised to marry her. He comes to know that she went to boutique to buy wedding dress on his credit card as a proof. He cannot allow her to do that, he came straight from airport to stop her from buying the dress and breakup with her permanently. He never allows third person to involve while he breakups with his mistress, that is why he came himself before she can do any more damage.

Sameer mobile rings "where is she?"

someone on phone "in the last dressing room sir with her friend/sister, please wait I will-"

Sameer "no need I will take care" and cuts the call. Sameer walks towards the dressing rooms. Everyone in boutique are busy with their work to stop Sameer. Sameer reaches the last one and knocks at the door. Indira immediately rises from her stool opens the door and turns says "zip is not work please check"

Sameer is about to shouts stops seeing Indira's face in the mirror. Sameer cannot take his eyes off her, she is looking beautiful, he still did not noticed the undressing state of Indira. He is busy is seeing her face, his eyes slowly started travelling to the length of her body in the mirror. Indira still did not notice Sameer, she is checking her lenhenga waiting for the designer to check the zip. When she did not get any response from the lady she rises her face and see Sameer's face in the mirror.

Indira shouts "aarrrh" and turns towards

Sameer "who are you?" Sameer comes out of his Trans and shouts "who the hell are you?"

Indira "mein-mein"

Sameer "kya mein mein kar rahe ho, who are you and what are you doing in this room and where is she?"

Indira opens her mouth but couldnot say any word, no one talks with her in such a tone.

Indira swallows "mein Indira Sharma" says like proudly child.

Sameer "so? What are you doing with her?"

Indira "with whom?"

Sameer gives a impatient sigh "see, cut the crap. I know your type. Tell her I wonot bend for such blackmail. She is my mistress and from now she WAS my mistress. I donot want her services and you can tell her that. And-" Indira is too much confused to utter a word, Sameer continues "if you are interested to become my mistress I donot mind. You have a sexy back and figure"

Indira mouth almost drops to the floor then she puts her hand at her open back, Indira "OMG" and goes back and leans on the mirror, she gets angry (first time in her life lol) "how dare you to talk with me like that. Whom do you think you are? Donot know how to respect a girl and if I tell my brother then he will-" showing her finger at him.

Sameer "why? You cannot save yourself, you need your brother to fight for yourself"

Indira donot know what is Sameer saying "kya?"

Sameer by now understands that it is some wrong identity case, it is clearly written on Indira's face that she is innocent.

Sameer "by your expressions it is clear I mistook you for my mistress friend, a guy is talking wrongly with you. Cannot you defend yourself, waiting for your brother to teach me a lesson. Women " smiles sarcastically "Because of people like you, women are tagged as weak-"

*Slap*

Indira slaps Sameer pointing finger at him "just get lost you bas***d before I call people and make a scene"

Sameer clenches his jaw, rubbing his cheek turns to walk away but stops turning towards Indira says "you look beautiful but when you are angry are look more sexy" and walks away from there. Indira cannot believe she slapped a guy just now and used foul words for a man. She did two things which she never did in her life. Indira sits with a bang on the stool still shivering then slowly it sinks what Sameer said "who is he, in first meet bought the worst in me. whoever he is I hate him, if he comes once again infront of my eyes I am going to kill him. He did not even said sorry after knowing I am not the girl who he is searching for and said I am looking beautiful and sexy" she stares at her reflection in the mirror. Sameer is the first guy dared to compliment her, no guy dared to come infront of her and flirt with her in college with fear of her body guards and her brother. Thought Sameer way of complimenting is wrong Indira heart skipped a beat when he said that to her without any hesitation. Indira slowly sits on the stool still looking into the mirror.

Indira "am I really beautiful and se-" she clears her throat and bites her lips. She suddenly hears "yes you are looking sexy" she sees Sameer standing at the door folding his hands. Indira gasps loudly and stands at once taking the duppata in her hand covering herself. But she cannot find anyone at the door.

Indira "am I day dreaming about that stupid fellow, oh god I am using so many bad words" she slaps her cheeks slowly saying sorry to god. Indira's mother kutumb never allowed her to say a foul word. Indira takes a deep breath saying "forget it as a bad dream, I am not going to see that guy again in my life", she shouts "Bhabiii" with irritation.


From the moment Indira return back from shopping started behaving like irritated child. Seema and Sunanina are confused with Indira's behaviour.

Seema "what happened Indira, you are behaving weird"

Indira snaps "matlab"

Seema taken back with rough answer "I-I mean behaving irritated"

Indira seeing Seema reaction, calms down, closes her eyes cursing Sameer once again "sorry bhabi, mood teek nahin hain"

Sunanina "periods hain kyaa"

Indira is about to say no, says "may be bhabii, may be they are on the way. So mood is very- you know" Indira donot know why she donot want to tell about Sameer to anyone. Indira still cannot take his image away from her mind. He is the most handsome male she has seen, she cannot even deny that even in her angry mood.

She shakes her head thinking she gone mad, she knows she can never meet him in her life then why to think about him, he insulted but to get her reaction which made her surprise and proud of herself for reacting. She donto know if he bought worst or good in her. She still confused.

Continues...
Edited by -PD- - 11 years ago
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Sameer after coming out of the boutique gets any calls; the informer tells him that she escapes as soon as he entered the boutique. This time Sameer takes the correct address of her and goes to her. Sameer pays her heavily and breaks the ties with her forever. Sameer decides never to marry or believe a woman in his life who tries to make him emotionally weak or blackmails him emotionally. He learned lesson in a very hard way. Sameer in his college days was a spoilt brat and never cares for anything. He had a girlfriend Tanya who is a pride to him because she is the stunning beauty; any guy will kill to have her as girlfriend. One day Tanya informs Sameer that she is pregnant. Going against his parents Sameer marries her at the age of 20, which they registered once he turns 21 years. Due to the gossips and rumors college restigates Sameer. Yash and Gayatri feels bad on Sameer's behaviour, at that time Yash is just a rising business man. Sameer decides to help his father in his business. Sameer is natural business man, he got his decision making talent from his grandfather. After marriage Tanya miscarries which makes Sameer depressed, Sameer has a lot of dreams about his baby. He pulls back and starts working with his father. But unfortunately their business goes into losses due to his father few investment decisions. Tanya starts spending money like water which increases losses. Sameer use to fight with Tanya everyday. Tanya blames Sameer saying she couldnot have her modelling career because of Sameer, she feels she is struck with this unwanted marriage. Sameer decides to divorcee Tanya. Gayatri tries to make Sameer understand that marriages and divorcee are not a game. But before Sameer can stop Tanya solds Sameer business secrets to his rival which leads complete downfall of Sameer's business. Sameer gets angry and slaps Tanya, she logs a case of domestic violence on Sameer and gets divorcee from Sameer claiming a lot of alimony. Sameer and his father sell his father given property to pay Tanya. Yash and Gayatri never pointed a figure at Sameer but it is Sameer's guilty which killed him. Yash decides to bring back Rishi who went to US for further studies. But Sameer asks his father to give him just one year to bring back the business into the track. Yash has no confidence in Sameer but he did not express it. Sameer knows his parent's wonot believe him anymore but he knows he deserves it. Sameer was 23 years old at that time. He started working on the left over business and made it 20% successfully by the end of first year. From then there is no looking back, he made right decisions and took right steps at right time. His luck also favoured him with his hardwork and made Diwan Inc., the legend and Sameer the unbeatable business man. Sameer never allowed women to boss over him or effect their emotions on him. He became rock for women tears. He just keeps mistress for his physical needs but with a strict rule no commitments. When he feels his mistress is expecting something more from him, he sends her away with good amount and gifts. He dated many good looking models and actress but all are strictly flings, no serious relationship. Models and actress know linking up with Sameer will boast their career, so they donot mind the no commitment' rule of Sameer. Yash and Gayatri tried to marry him but Sameer decided never to marry again. Fed-up with Sameer they want Rishi to get married to give them grand children. Rishi knows very less about the struggle of Sameer as he is never at home. He is always either at boarding school or studying in aboard. Rishi knows that Sameer had a broken marriage and bought their business to such a level, and few more rumors like Tanya left him for money, case logged against Sameer for domestic violence. But Rishi never questioned Sameer or anyone. Rishi is very down to earth type of guy. He has his share of fun during college days but still very obedient son and brother. He agree for arranged marriage as he didnot find anyone perfect for him till now, moreover seeing Sameer love marriage result Rishi didnot dare to take the step. Sameer never got involved in the personal matters of Rishi. Sameer knows his parents are searching for a good homely girl for Rishi. They informed Sameer about Rishi's engagement. Sameer promised to return one day before his engagement.

Sameer reaches home at the night, Gayatri "Sameer you came back in the morning and coming home now"
Sameer "hey mom, good to see you. Kuch kaam tha"
Gayatri "kaam kaam kaam when will you take rest beta"
Sameer "mom, my work is my rest. Chalo how is the arrangements going on and who is the girl"
Gayatri is shocked "you donot know about girl till now, your father didnot inform you"
Yash clears his throat "No, I didnot inform him. If I tell him about girl, he will not agree"
Sameer looks bored "dad, i am not going to marry it is Rishi so why will i oppose"
Yash "are you sure?"
Sameer "daddd"
Yash laughs "fine, she is Sumer Sharma sister. Indi-"
Sameer cuts him "what?"
Yash "i told you he will oppose this marriage"
Sameer "dad it is not matter of opposing but Sumer? Why do we need to make match with Sumer family"
Yash "because i hate this rivalry between our families. They are good people, just for your both rivalry i donot want such a good girl to miss becoming our daughter-in-law. I liked her when i saw her in some party. I thought she is perfect for yo-" he immediately clears his throat "i mean she is perfect to become Diwan family bahu. So i went with proposal to Sumer and he agreed happily"
Sameer "and the girl, Sumer might have not asked her but might have told her to agree" he clenches his jaw.
Yash "Sameer, now we are going to be a family. I want this rivalry to -"
Sameer "I donot mind with this marriage but i will never accept him in our business"
Yash "but-"
Sameer "I donot want to hear any more" Sameer leaves from there. Yash didnot get chance to tell Sameer about their business deal. Yash "god how stubborn hain Sameer"
Gayatri laughs "Yash, let him take rest you can tell him slowly. Media hogi tomorrow prepare your son to be sensible infront them"
Yash "goddd".
Sameer "hey Rishi, whatsup, so ready for the engagement"
Rishi "hey bro, you are back". Rishi and Sameer hug each other.
Rishi "thank god you came back, i thought you wonot come back on my engagement"
Sameer "how can I miss my younger brother engagement". Sameer and Rishi talks about Rishi's engagement, then Rishi project everything. Sameer goes back to his room, changes to his night suit and sleeps on the bed. He closes his eyes, immediately Indira's face comes into his mind. Sameer suddenly opens his eyes. From morning he is busy to think about Indira, now when he is free his mind when back the incident happened in the morning. Sameer cares his cheek and smiles not bad, fire brand hain, i should meet her once again'. Sameer closes his eyes sleeps waiting for the next day.

Sameer and his family goes to Indira's house. Sumer receives everyone with respect. As soon as Sameer enters the house the atmosphere around Sameer and Sumer changes.
Sumer "Welcome Sameer"
Sameer "thanks Sumer". They both know they are acting for the sake of families. Once receiving is done they left in opposite directions. Sameer is bored, starts looking around and suddenly sees Indira coming along with some ladies.
Sameer "this girl" then he sees Indira going towards Rishi with a smile.
Sameer "Indira Sharma, oh Sumer Sharma sister". Sumer announces the engagement of Indira Sharma and Rishi Diwan. They didnot allowed Media into the party, but just spread the news of their engagement. Sameer is still staring at Indira.
Gayatri kisses Indira's forehead, "come let me introduce to my family, ya Rishi ki dadi hain Kiran" Indira takes blessings of Sameer's dadi, Gayatri "when you came last time to our house, dadi ji went to her friends town and Sameer, their he is" Indira turns to see Sameer coming towards them. Indira gasps looking at Sameer.
Indira "Sameer"
Gayatri "hain Sameer my elder son" Sameer comes near Indira without takes his eyes off.
Sameer forwards his hand "Hello Miss Indira Sharma, I am Sameer Diwan"
Indira hesisates for a while then places her hand in his hand. Both Sameer and Indira feel a little current passing through there with the bodies. Indira immediately removes her hand.
Sameer so she is going to be Rishi's wife, fine lets strike out her name from my life' Indira walks towards Sumer. Gayatri gives engagement ring to Rishi and Kutumb gives the ring to Indira. Rishi puts the ring to Indira. Indira takes the ring and about to put the ring she turns to see Sameer looking at her. Indira shivers alittle, she bends her head and puts the ring to Rishi. Everyone claps and blesses the couple.

Indira I need to talk with Sameer about the incident happened earlier'. She atlast finds Sameer at dinner filling his plate. Indira starts walking towards the dinner. Kutumb stops her "where are you going Indira"
Indira "maa oh mein, hain dinner for dinner" she lies.
Kutumb "aree wait let Rishi come" Indira realizes she just told lie to her mother.
Indira god i lied to my mother, what am i doing'. Thought is it a very small lie but Indira never lied to her mother or her family. She may hides her likes and wishes but never lied.
Indira glares at Sameer from the moment i saw Sameer, i started doing all stupid things, I stood half dressed infront of him, i slapped him, i said foul words and now i lied. Donot know what he is going to do next with me' she takes a deep breath Indira you are over reacting now stop it' Indira turns towards kutumb who is searching for Rishi "maa, i just drink some water and come"
Kutumb "ya lo water" she takes a glass from passing waiter and gives Indira. Indira tries her best not to roll her eyes and says "maa something has fallen in water, i will just go there and drink some water and come" before kutumb can say something few ladies comes and engages Kutumb in their talks. Indira escapes from there and sees Sameer is eating peacefully sitting on the table. Indira thanks her stars to see Sameer sitting alone. Indira stands beside him drinking her water. Sameer didnot even noticed her or she donto know if he is acting. Indira clears her throat. Sameer turns his head and bend as if he is not interested to talk with her. Indira holds the glass tight as if she wants to throw it on his head.
Indira "listen, i am talking with you"
Sameer eats from his plate as if it is the most important work than talking with Indira.
Indira gets irritated "I know whatever happened in the dressing room is wrong"
Sameer "good"
Indira "kya? Anyway, I will forget everything if you say sorry and i wonot tell anyone"
Sameer "i never say sorry to anyone. If you want to tell the tale of dressing room then you are most welcome"
Indira "I cannot believe you, if i tell the story everyone will doubt you not me... You idiot"
Sameer turns his head "then keep quiet"
Indira "I cannot believe you are such an arrogant b-" and stops there.
Sameer "wow, my dad things you are a homely type of girl but here you are using colourful words for your honawali hubby's elder brother. Such a shame" Indira cannot believe her ears, Sameer is blaming her.
Indira "I hate you, tumsaa baat karna bhi bekar hain. I never want to see your face again"
Sameer "your wish wonot be granted"
Indira "kya"
Sameer "you are marrying my brother, so if not every day but atleast in parties and family get to gethers you need to see my face. So better if you forget everything and behave like a good girl and never expect me to say sorry to you or anyone"
Indira goes from there fuming. Indira stands in cool air when Rishi approaches her. Indira becomes conscious of herself. Rishi takes her hand caring her palm. Indira bends her head not able to meet his eyes.
Rishi "did anyone told you, you looks so beautiful" immediately remembers Sameer telling her you look beautiful and sexy' Indira raises her head with a jerk "JI"
Rishi "what happened? I just complimented you thats all"
Indira blushes "sorry" Rishi smiles moving close to her, places his hand on her cheek "i am so happy with this engagement, you have all the qualities i am looking in a wife"
Indira smiles "thanks"
Rishi "I am going out of India for some work as soon as I come back we will marry. Where do you want to go for our honeymoon"
Indira heart starts beating loud, she feels shy, she never spoken with anyone about all these things.
Indira "I-I donot know, I wan-"
Rishi cuts her without hearing her fully, "Paris? I love Paris"
Indira "ok" hides her wish immediately. Rishi "i want to kiss you"
Indira blushes without raising her face "no, someone will come"
Rishi "its ok i am your fianc"
Rishi comes close to Indira. Indira feels uncomfortable, she wants to say no but it is too late Rishi closes the distance between them and bends his head to kiss her. Indira turns her head at the last micro second. The kiss lands on the corner of her mouth. She closes her eyes. Rishi smiles kisses her cheek again "I hope by the time i come back the place of my kiss will change"
Indira tries to smile but she is very nervous. Someone calls Rishi. He goes from there. Indira takes a deep breath "thank god, kiss and all. Oh god i need to ask bhabi what to do during honeymoon and all. So that i wonot disappoint Rishi ji. Today he want to kiss me and i was not prepared. Donot know if he felt bad"
"no one will feel bad", Indira hears the voice and jumps under her skin. Sameer comes out of the bushes.
Indira "what are you doing here? Sharam nahin aathi tumha"
Sameer "I came first here, you followed me and then Rishi"
Indira "I followed you? Mujhe koi kaam nahin hain kya ki mein tumha follow karunge"
Sameer "exactly my point why are you following me"
Indira "I am not following you"
Sameer "fine then lets go"
Indira "wait"
Sameer stops stands without turning towards
Indira "say sorry now, or i will tell Rishi that you saw everything here".
Sameer turns towards Indira "kya bologi that i caught Rishi and you kissing" Indira opens her mouth and closes it immediately, then remembers Rishi saying they are about to marry.
Indira "nahin sunaa Rishi ji naa kaha we are about to marry, so no one will say anything. If anything wrong Rishi ji will support me"
Sameer "Rishi ji naa kaha,Rishi ji supports me. ku tumhara koi personal defence nahin hain. Cannot you stand for yourself when i am accusing you"
Indira feels like crying hearing his tone once again "ya meri life hain and who the hell are you tell me what i should do and what not" she bursts out.
Sameer acts as zipping his lips "fine" Indira starst walking from there.
Sameer "suno" Indira stops turns "kya"
Sameer "you really never kissed and donot know about honeymoon, i mean wha-" Indira cuts him pointing finger at him "shutup"
Sameer "what can i do you are talking so loud"
Indira is confused oh am i talking so loud' she immediately clears her throat "meri marji i will talk loud and speak in the mike, who are you to tell me", she talks away from there. Sameer shakes his head and stands looking at the moon. Indira stands near food counter cursing Sameer. Seema comes "Indira"
Indira turns at once shouting "kya hain"
Seems gets shocked "what happened? I never saw you like this"
Indira closes her eyes "sorry bhabi i am tired"
Seems "its ok chalo lets eat everyone are waiting at the dining table" Seema takes Indira. Indira notices Sameer didnot joined him.
Kutumb asks "where Sameer ji"
Gayatri "he already has his food. He cannot stay hungry for long time. Sorry for that"
Kutumb "aree that is ok" Indira sits beside Rishi. Whole family is having fun where Sameer is not even near them to share the conversation. Indira didnot liked it, she starts searching for Sameer unknowingly.
Rishi "kya huvaa"
Indira "kuch hain kyu"
Rishi "looks like you are searching for someone"
Indira "nothing like that". Indira kya hogaya hain mujhe, i didnot even know what i am thinking and what i am doing, as if everything happening on its own will' Indira shuts her mind and starts concentrating on food and conversation.
At mind night everyone leaves Sharma Nivas. Indira notices Sameer already left without even wishing anyone.
Indira "how rude, he didnot even tell me that he is going. I mean didnot tell papa or mama that he is leaving. Why do i care. But when i am with him mujhe kya hojatah hain. I behave out of my character, i get angry, i scold him, i demand him, I-, oh god why i become something else when i am with him" Indira is confused with her own reaction.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#5

wow Preethi dear awesome FF dear 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
Welcome Back Preeti Di 🤗
I miss your FAnFuctioN
Love the intro n I can't wait for more 🤗
I just hope with your surprise return Rati Di makes such a surprise return soon 😛

Welcome back 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
very nice and well written keep up the good work dear 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8
Wow nice storyline,I loved it,but hamesha Rishi ka dil torna zaruri hai kya😡

At first in mistake and now in this one.

Dil torne se paap lagta hai😡

One suggestion or rather say request,at least sometime give a sweetheart role to Sam,what is this all the time he has a bitter life.Thats not fare.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#9
Thank God that you are back with your writing.
I have been missing your writings.
Fabulous story,interesting one.
Please continue other ff's also & try to pm me.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: clementina


wow Preethi dear awesome FF dear 😃

thanks dear 😊

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