Khwahish!!!! update 4 on pg 1!!! - Page 7

btw what is this one minute parts......with 25 sec drama 😆

amu~

Originally posted by: yamulya1

btw what is this one minute parts......with 25 sec drama 😆

amu~

yes nazuuu we wait for so many days for update and u update only little like star t.v serials.😕

great update Naz 😃 but it was short!! 😒
For a moment i was confused but then realised it is a *flashback*. The best part was when u got nikhila injured at the very first. 😆 . Thank goodness he atleast said thanks leaving his arrogance behind 😳
continue soon 😃

great part naz!!!okay one doubt!!!it started witht he current part and then it was the flashback right???got a little confused over there.
continue soon 😊

Originally posted by: Iqbaladdict

brilliant parts, i don't kno how i missed part three hun, but awesome, nikila kaa abhi baja bajaa diya, 😆 😆 😆 , bohoot achi baat hai, god i'm so mean, ain't I. I love the way u described Shiv, amazing,work, 👏 👏 👏

thanx dii....even i can imagine him...man he looks soo dam hott wid those police sunglasses n white shirt tucked in.....oooowwwoooo 😳 😳 😆

Originally posted by: yamulya1

nazir bachi, what is this accident silsila...bichare log, bass, tou unhe isi tarah satathi reh, one day they will disagree to enact in ur ff. 😆

and when u go back to flashback - can u specify tht ur going by having a subheading or some hint or sth. i was kind of confused when reading.

where come shiv driving a car when he was badly wounded. 😆 but then reallised tht its ur flashback.


good job naz, gauri being a Doc, is what makes me glued to this ff...ofcourse for obvious reasons 😳

amu~

🤣🤣🤣 amu ki bachchi.....tujhe toh best critics ki award milni chahiye 🤣

actually i imagined those incidents as like im watching a movie n wrote it...so didnt feel like mentioning the flashbac thing.....😳 well next time i'll mention.....ummm well....my ff has to do more wid flashbacs...so....😳 i better mention things tht r present 😆 😆

Originally posted by: sum2005

yes nazuuu we wait for so many days for update and u update only little like star t.v serials.😕

awwww sorry guyz😳 will try n make short but regular updates .... will tht do? 😉 😆 😆 jk 😳

Originally posted by: jiya imdad

great update Naz 😃 but it was short!! 😒
For a moment i was confused but then realised it is a *flashback*. The best part was when u got nikhila injured at the very first. 😆 . Thank goodness he atleast said thanks leaving his arrogance behind 😳
continue soon 😃

thanks sweety....so glad u liked it 😳 😃 yeah...i want him to b a mix of arrogance n sweetness 😳 😳

will try n update soon....actually im messed up wid assignments..class tests...n midterm 🤢 wht a life 🤢 😆

Originally posted by: shivgauri

great part naz!!!okay one doubt!!!it started witht he current part and then it was the flashback right???got a little confused over there.
continue soon 😊

ooops sorry yaar for the confusion...wanted to create a high thought drama 😳 😆 😆 😆

thanx macha 😊 glad u liked it....will try continue soon 😉 😃

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great update........
waitin for the next one...