Ramleela:kriyaansh SS(ch 1:pg 4)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi d3ians!m bck wid shaks reentry..most of u here know me already nd 4 the rest am tina nd m a huge fan of kriyaansh nd d3 bt left d3 wen shaks left it..i already wrote an FF on kriyaansh nd few other OS nd thngs...hope u like this 1 too...the story wud b ttly different 4m movie ramleela if tats what u guys r thinking...plx do cmnt,like nd even throw sandals nd tomatoes if u dnt like...waitng 4 ur feedback...
CONCEPT:
kriya ghai belongs 2 the famous ghai family whose father ws dr samrat ghai nd mother smriti ghai..his father ws killed by mistake by reyaansh singhaniya's father ravi singhaniya when he has gone on his hunting trip nd dr samrat ws attending 2 a patient in a village...(it has a secret story 2 wich ll b revealed soon) so the ghais nd singhaniyas r enemies 4m tat day...the ghais r gud reputed nd respectable ppl nd well educated so they dint prefer killing or anythng bt mr ravi had 2 spend smtime in jail bt in court they proved tat he is innoecnt nd the bullet hit dr samrat by mistake...
both kriya nd rey r living in US for their studies nd studying in the same college nd same class without knowing their reality,even their families r unaware of all this...
ll their ways ever meet nd hw ll their families react 2 that???
4 tat nd much much more stay tuned 2 my SS...
 
guys ur feedback plx...should i continue or nt???
tina


INDEX:
CHAPTER 1:pg 4
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Arya.100 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
res
unres.
BANG ON Concept.. ya..

i really missed ur work... *DIL SE REY* 😭

bt Im hapy ur back wid a

super rocking concept.

Rey and Kria ki equation is

Amazing yaaa... <3

I'll be waiting fr uh to update... <3 <3
Edited by Dewdrops.ShaKun - 10 years ago
Shukti_19 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#3
Fab concept
plz update d 1st chappy asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
#4
Interesting cncpt...family enemies nd kids will be in love...amazing..pm me nd update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#5
interesting... waiting 4 1st chap...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6
Concept seems sumthng
New n interesting ...👍🏼
Do cont soon...
N
Do pm me
I hve sent u buddy request...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
awesome concept
pls pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thnks every1..
ll try 2 update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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so u r back with a story...thank u so much..
interesting concept...
update the first part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome fan concept..

update n pm  me wen u do...

eager to read abt d ss...