Ramleela:kriyaansh SS(ch 1:pg 4) - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting concept tina
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amazing concept...
i would love to read more...
update soon...
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welcum bck tina!!

interesting concept...

n do continue...!!!!!!
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awsum cocept tina..
loved it..
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different and amazing concept... do continue soon and pm me
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thnks every1...
sorry m taking tym cx i hav a challange 2 complete 1st..
ll update aftr tat
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tinatartari

thnks every1...

sorry m taking tym cx i hav a challange 2 complete 1st..
ll update aftr tat

will wait till then...meko pm karna
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 1
so guys!m here wid the 1st chapter..writing somethng on kriyaansh after such a long time..dunno hw it ll turn outta b??fingers crossed...pms later...

she quickly ran to her class as she was gettng late and it was sir james class who never let anyone in after 5 mins,and she wanted to attend his class as today's topic was on EKG which she always feared of and it was necessary to attend as she planned to become a cardiologist in future like her dad..she loved her dad a lot but he was snatched from her by destiny or the singhaniyas...
yes she was kriya ghai,a medical student of 1st year in harvard..it was her dream since childhood to be a dr like her father and graduate from HMS...now she worked really hard for that and finally landed up in there..
kriya and sharon were identical twins but sharon was never interested in studies from the start..she wanted to be an adventurist...rock climbing,ice skiing,hiking,sky diving were her passions from her childhood..she also loved to explore different cultures and learn different langauges:probably the only common thing in both sisters...so kriya used to search for one thing and tell sharon about it or vice versa..
but after her pre-meds kriya left for US to study while sharon remained in mumbai to persue her carrear in arts..

today kriya got late for her class in the morning as she woke up late..though medicine was her passion because it connected her to her dead father in a way,but she was a lazy kid from the very beginning and getting up early in the morning was the thing she hated the most...
she was running so fast that she didnot see anything coming her way..suddenly a faint image appeared before her eyes and before she could stop,she collided with the person..boom..and she closed her eyes fearing she ll get hurt but she didnt..the guy put his arms around her waist to protect her from falling down and she opened her eyes just to see a pair of eyes looking deeply in her eyes..their eyes locked and she saw he had deep brown eyes..
he muttered something which she couldnot hear but that was enough for her to come back to her senses..she was too ambitious to fall for some guy at that moment...
kr:i am sorry..
guy:its ok..but why are you running so fast??any emergency??are you an intern?
kr:no i am just a medical student..1st year..i was getting late for the class and since its a very important class and i dont wanna miss it thats why i was in a hurry..
guy:lady then you should have to wake up early..thats not the way to go about..haste makes waste..
kr:yeah..i m sorry...
guy:you better be..be careful next time..
kr:ok..bye..
and she sped off...
guy's POV:
what kinda girl she is?speeding off for class..if she was so interested,why could nt she wake up early in the morning??anyways what has i to do with that??lets leave it..i better go to my duty reyaansh or my consultant is going to insult me...

kriya just reached the class at the nick of the time..dr james was about to close the door...she rushed to her seat and got seated there..

PRECAP:
the singhaniyas nd ghais become friends...

hope you like the 1st part..any suggestions,feedback,criticism is most welcome...have a good day
tina
Edited by tinatartari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i thought ki u forgot about it...
amazing chapter...
kria on the footsteps of her dad...great...
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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the chapter was damn great ... means finally kriya and reyaansh have meet
face up... the precap seem good... do continue soon and pm me

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