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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: arwakantawala

Beautiful Update and loving the chemistry between Asad and Zoya waiting for the next update egarly.


Update on its way😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Prizi

Part 4 was awesumm.. Luvd hw asad taking care of him


😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Shubh007

Awsome story,concept and updates...😊

Really like it...😊

Waiting for nxt part update soon...😊

Pm me when u update...😊


Thank you dear
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: starslinedup

I just read Ch3-4-5..n I was ...oohin n aahin all throughout..it is indeed a very sweet and heart warming story..I truly enjoy the care n concern that Asad has for Zoya and Zoya's spirit...ur doin an awesome job potraying these characters n their growing relationship...but hey..longer updates pls...cos abhi shuru kiya..n I just get into it..n its over...😭 I wanna read more...sonext time...ho sake to lambe updates please👍🏼 but ya..awesome 👏


lamba updates than this😲 you know i am soo lazy😆 i dont even know how i penned down the previous updates😆 at present my full concentration is on being regular on my updates.😆 once i get the flow, i will update longer parts😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Prizi

Ishq vishk is my fav movie too.. Nd shahid is my fav actor yea ofcourse after KSG.. awesum part

Thats the first hindi movie i watched. So it holds a special place in my heart along with Shahid and Amrita😳 how i wish they both get married
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Dearies,
I am back again as I promised😳 if you like this please show me some love so that i get inspiration from you all and write better and better😃 here you go with the update.








Chapter 6: I love you

Asad stared at his computer screen for the umpteenth number of time trying to concentrate. The huge pile of used coffee cups discarded in his dustbin showed the magnitude of the problem he was going through. Now, don't you think that it's some work related issue, because it's clearly not. It was not work which was in his mind for the past one week, but it's her, Zoya.

After that night Zoya started avoiding him like plague. She didn't even speak to him properly. First he thought she was embarrassed as when they got up in the morning they found themselves in a spooning position in the couch. Hell, even he was embarrassed. But as the days passed by he realized there was something more to it than what he is seeing.

And now he reached a stage where his work had started affecting because of his constant thinking about Zoya. Every time he tries to concentrate all he can remember is her. He was frustrated like hell. He resort to his favorite black coffee as stress buster, but were of no use. His favorite drink was tasteless for him thus ended up in dust bin.

He closed his eyes and started rubbing his face with his palm. He felt so useless. He was neither able to concentrate on his professional life nor on his personal life. He banged his fist in table and got up. That's it. He decided to confront Zoya as he needed some answers. And he knew; only Zoya can give him his answers.


***(@)***


As she sat there on her studio trying to finish her sculpture, her mid wandered back to that morning. She got up on that day only to feel some weight on her. She was alarmed first, but as previous night's events came into her mind, she relaxed. Asad had his hand kept on her abdomen while their back touched. His other hand on was cushioning her head and he had his face buried deep into her neck. As she processed all these sensations, she realized that they were in a spooning position.

She felt color rush into her cheek as she thought about that incident, even after one week. For the past one week she made sure that she avoided him at any cost. It was not easy, but still she managed to do that, not for herself, but for him, for his happiness.

She was broken out of her thoughts when her fingers dug into the clay. She sighed in frustration as it was nearly 10th time she was trying to make this sculpture but always end up losing herself in Asad's thoughts. She cleaned her fingers and again started to reach for the clay when all of a sudden someone held her wrist and yanked her around. A scream escaped from her mouth as her delicate body came in contact with a hard male body.

She started struggling but soon relaxed as she understood it was him, Asad. In the next minute Asad crashed his mouth onto her savoring her lips. A numb Zoya stood there in his arms, her hand clutching his collar tightly for support. He started kissing her aggressively pouring out all his frustration and feelings. His lips feasted on her rosy ones like an angry lion. After a minute or so he broke the kiss still not letting her go. He looked down and was satisfied with what he saw. There was Zoya standing with her eyes closed, her lips swollen, her hand still clutching his collar for support. He slightly ran his thumb over her swollen lips and he noticed her shivering. Putting a flock of hair behind her ears he whispered,


"I love you Zoya"


Her eyes flew open at his confession. Her doe eyes widened in surprise and shock. She looked at him intently.

He expected her to jump up and down with excitement, at least he expected her to bless him with her blush. But all his dreams and hopes were shattered as he saw Zoya taking her steps back. As she turned to go she again found herself trapped in his arms. This time she could feel the tremors of anger in his grip.


"Where are you going Zoya? Not today. You have avoided me enough. I want to know what you feel for me"


She tried to struggle free from his grip but he was too strong for her.


"Asad please... I... I don't feel anything for you..."


Even though his heart ached to hear that he pulled her even more possible.


"Liar... you are lying Zoya... I know you love me. Don't you Zoya?"


Tears surfaced in her eyes. With all her might she pushed him away from herself and he stumbled backwards.


"I... I don't love you Asad... I don't... Love... You..."


But he was not ready to accept failure. He knew her long enough to look behind the facade she put up. He gathered her once again in his arms much against her protest. He snaked his one arm around her waist holding her in place. With the free arm he wiped the tears that were flowing from her eyes.


"You are again lying Zoya. If you don't love me, why are you crying? Why its soo difficult for you to say that you don't have any feelings for me? You know, I know and we both know that you do feel something for me. A feeling which brings color in your cheek with my mere presence, a feeling which enhances your dimpled smile with my talk, a feeling which sets your body on fire with my single touch, a feeling which screams right now in your heart that you love me... don't deny it Zoya... don't deprive us of this beautiful feeling... Please..."


Zoya didn't know how to stop the treacherous tears that were flowing from her eyes mercilessly. Even though she felt so blissful to hear such things form the man she loved, she knew better than to just give into that dream like situation.


"Asad, you don't understand. You are making it difficult for me... I... I am not suitable for you... I... I am blind... Always a burden on others... I... I am okay with it. But... But I don't want to be a burden on your life... You deserve someone better, who can see you, who can look into your eyes and understand your emotions... I am far from what should be your love... you deserve the best... Please Asad... Please let it be..."


His anger was at peak hearing her confession. He never ever for once thought that this was the reason behind her behavior. He tightened his grip on her arms. He pulled her up so that she was standing on his feet, their front parts fused into one.


"How can I let it be Zoya? The better life you are taking about will not be better if you are not in there. And how can you say that you will be a burden for me when you are the most independent girl I have ever seen? And even if you start depending on me, I don't have problem. I would love to be your support... I want to pamper you... I want to spoil you with my love... I want you to dependent on me so that I can have the privilege of being close to you all the time. You have to understand one thing Zoya, you will never be a burden for me. And if you think because of your little speech I am gonna change my mind then let me make one thing clear, it only made me adamant on making you mine. You are mine and I am not letting you go without you confessing your feelings. I don't mind standing here with you in my arms forever..."


He saw her doe eyes filling with more tears while a cute pout adorned her face. She crashed her body into him, sobbing freely on his chest. And he knew, he has won her heart and love.

They stood there for what felt like eternity. She cried and he pacified. When she felt there is no more tears left for her she gradually detangled herself from him. He wiped the tear stains off her face with his sleeves. Chuckling he pulled her nose with force while Zoya let out a whole hearted smile.

He drank in the sight in front of him. She was an angel who was sent to earth just for him.


"You know something Zoya... it was this smile which drove me crazy, which made me wait, which made me smile in my lone room, which made me fall madly, Madly in love with you, my the mantally the sick buoy!"


Apna toh chaahaton mein yahi usool hain,

Jab tu qubool hai, toh tera sub kuch qubool hai...
Edited by rosamale - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg..such a intense n beautiful update. .

Da way asad make zoya to confess hr flings z so beautifully written

Zoya z so best on hr denial part..

M so hooked to ur story. ..

Love da lst 2 lines..

Apna toh chaahaton mein yahi usool hain,

Jab tu qubool hai, toh tera sub kuch qubool hai...

👏


Btwn m frst..yippiiee

M more happy now ..bcz I gt frst placed to comment on dis part particularly

Love

Shreya
Edited by shreya11mehra - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update...Finally Asad confessed and made it clear for her that she will not be a burden to him even if she is,he wud love to be close to her always!❤️Update soon...
Edited by manognasai - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautifully written...loved loved loved the whole confession🤗...continue soon😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra

Res

Omg..such a intense n beautiful update. .

Da way asad make zoya to confess hr flings z so beautifully written

Zoya z so best on hr denial part..

M so hooked to ur story. ..

Love da lst 2 lines..

Apna toh chaahaton mein yahi usool hain,

Jab tu qubool hai, toh tera sub kuch qubool hai...

👏


Btwn m frst..yippiiee

M more happy now ..bcz I gt frst placed to comment on dis part particularly

Love

Shreya


As i have said in my previous updates,that line in red is not my creation dear, its from shayari website😳 my hindi is not that good as i tend to make grammatical mistakes but i dont mind as it is not my mother tongue😳

I am happy to know that you liked the chapter. thanks for commenting

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