AFTER RUKKU CONFESSION- MY SS part -2, page 4, updated.

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As we know frds that today is confession day of rukku. And I don't know what cv has planned for us. So I am sharing here my thought what I really want after confession. Please frds read it and give your opinion. I will accept your all thoughts whole heartdly .

It is my first SS. I hope you will like it.

After rukku confessed the raghu, she run from there.raghu was shocked. what she has said to him... Raghu came near to his bed and finally slept as he was totally drunk.

Next morning, raghu woke up and rubbing his head because he drank so much and he is not use to be for that.

Raghu (thinking)- ye ruksana kya bole raat ko..??? wo mujhe pyaar..??? ..assa nh ho sakta ruksana. Mene to tujhe hamesha dost mana hai bas...or pyar wo to apun only miss kaul ko kerta hai. That time he heard some footstep near to him.

Raghu- without looking back, arre ruksana tu aa gye, mere ko tere se kal raat k bare main kuch baat kerne ka hai. And started to speak ...

Dekh ruksana tune mujhe kal raat ko merne se bachaya lekin kya matlab asse zindagi ka...??? Or tu kya bole k tu mujhse pyar kerte hai ...haann. Dekh mene tujhe hamesha apne dost mana hai or hamesha manuga lekin pyar apun only miss kaul ko kerta h or ye baat tu bhut acche se jante hai...arre kuch to bol ya sirf sunte he rehege...but he didn't hear anything ...(again saying without looking back)

Raghu- acha to gussa hai tu bhi mere se isliye baat nh kerege

Arre tune he to mujhe realise kerwya th mere pyar k bare main...bhul gye..?????

Aaj antara mere sath nh h to kya hua, main uska sath kabhi nh chod sakta.. aaj main agar zinda hu to bas isliye wo mere se nafrat kere or mujhe mere gunaho ke saja mile. Main use bas kush dekhna chata hu. Mujhe pata h wo mere ko kabhi maaf nh kerege lekin main tera pyar accept nh ker sakta...aab main kise k pyar k kabil nh hu...bas antara ke maffi mil jaye or mujhe kuch nh chaiye .

Raghu was saying all these things with teary eyes. And was expecting that ruksana will say something but again he didn't hear anything.

Raghu looked back in shouting manner...dekh rukhsnaaa...now he was totally blank because it was antara there who was listening him with teary eyes.

Both were staring each other with painful eyes...(mahi moment)

Raghu- main wo antara wo ..mujhe laga k ruksana hai,,...tune bola ku nh mujhe..pata nh kya bakwas ker reha th itne der se...???????

Antara didn't say anything agin and came down to her room.

Raghu was left there alone again...!!!!

At other side----

Ruksana(monologue)- mene ye kya ker diya..??? main jante hu k raghu sirf antara ka hi..aab to main uske dosti k b layak nh hu. Mujhe aab apne ghar LATUUR chale jana chaiye.and finally she went.

On terace, raghu- yr main b na miss call ko hurt kerne ka world record bana reha hu. Kitne baar apun rulayga usko..??? aaj fir wo he galti. Ek baar peche mud k dekh leta raghunath to itna riata nh felta...

Lekin aab kya haa..aab jo hona th ho gya lekin main apne is galti ke mafi to aaj he manguga antara se..or started to come antara's room. He was about to enter the room, but stopped as he heard satya and antra's voice from inside..

Satya- kya hua jaan ?? ro ku rehe ho...u know I hate tears..

Atatra - dekho sahib, ham is room k bahar pati patni hai. Room k ander tumhe ye janne ka koi haq nh h k mujhe kya dukh h ya main ku ro rhe hu...kitne baar samjane padege tumhe ye baat ..????now please go and leave me alone.

Satya moved away in anger ...raghu was listening from outside and hide himself so satya couldn't see him. Raghu was shocked and happy also . he had no belive on his ear that what has he listened just now .??

Raghu- iska matlab ye sab jhuut hai...mere miss kaul ne satya se shadi nh kere , or na he wo satya ko apna pati mante hai. Isliye antara ne us din marriage paper per bhi sign nh kiye th..

He was about to enter in antara'room to talk to her but again he stopped to listen antara's voice

Antara (to herself)- mujhe bura ku lag reha hai ruksana ke baat ka..??? agar wo raghu se pyar kerte hai to mujhe kya..??? mera lagta he kon hai aab raghu..?? and started to cry...!!! Ruksana ke himmat kase hue MERE RAGHU se pyar kerne ke...??????she didd't remember that what was she saying.

Raghu- shocked to listen...MERA RAGHU...matlab ye aaj b mujhe apna mante hai..main sab samaj gya miss kaul. Apn dono he is aag main jal rehe rehe. Tujhe aab or nh rone duga main..and finallywent from there...

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It is not complete guys. I will continue it if you like it.

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I liked . Lovely . Really nice . 😊
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Originally posted by: liana2304

I liked . Lovely . Really nice . 😊

thank you. i really wish this to happen..😃😃😃
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smaggy superb kash aise hi ho jaye . it will be awesome. ok pls continue it pls
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Originally posted by: richurachna

smaggy superb kash aise hi ho jaye . it will be awesome. ok pls continue it pls

yes i will continue it dear. i really want haapy ending of rantara. and i can't tolerate so much pain because of cv. so now i have started in different ways...😃😃
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Yes its awesome yaar...plzzz continue...
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lovely dear 😳pls continue😊
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Its really good yaar loved it.. keep on writing..
Its amazing..
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kash aisahi ho yaar ddej mein...i wish this happen ...superb ...loved it...i hate Rikhsana
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thank u so much my dear friends. i am grateful to all of u.
me too can't accept rukku and raghu so i thought new concept. and it is not end. only rantara matters for us so i will write only which can justify the love story of rantara...😃

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