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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww...sooo sweet and romantic!! The last couple of lines has got me really very excited for the next part! Please update soon and pm me please!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I like it please continue 😊
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PART 2. RAGHU BHAI (LIMIT KA GUNDA) IS BACK

Raghu came out from the naik sadan and sat in his jeep and gives order for tea.

Raghu- chacha, ek chai (tea). Dhundh cum, cheene nh (less milk, without sugar).

Raghu (monolugue) - ye miss kaul apun se gussa hai , haq banta h uska. Lekin itna jharar sahib ne he bhara hai uske dimag main werna wo us se jhutte shadi k liye b kabhi ready nh hote. Aaji sahe boltr th, ye bappa na sahe time main akaal de deta hai apun ko. Thanku baapa. Aab na mere or mere miss kaul ke kismat apun khud likhega. Or sahib tu dekhna aab..tujhe tere asli jagah nh phuchaya na to mera naam bhi raghunath nhe. Aab main tujhe batauga ke is basti ka bhagwan bhi raghu hai or antara ka sab kuch bhi sirf raghu...!!!

Aab fir se apun wo he purana wala raghu bhai banega or apne sare old golden moments tere samne lauge, fir dekhta hu tu kab tk mujhse nafrat kerne ka natak ker pati hai.

Lekin ek baat hai jo apun nh kerne wala hai or wo hai tujhe miss kaul bolna...?? Tune mana kiya th na mujhe bolne ko aab tu he bolege mujhe fir se tabhi tere ko is naam se pukarega. (remebers dandiya night, when antara became very angry on raghu when he called her antara )

Machmuch- bhai oh bhai,,keha guma hai. Raat ke daru ka nasha abhi tk nh utra kya tere ser se...???

Raghu- machmauch apne basti main sab teek chal reha h na. (while smiling)

Machmuch- bhai , basti main sab teek hai. But apun ko tu abhi bhi teek nh lag reha hai. Or tu ye hans ku reha hai..?? mene to koi joke bhi nh mara abhi.

Raghu- apun na fir se phle ke tarah apne kaam p focus kerte hai. Tujhe tera wehe purana wala raghu bahi nh chaiye kya...haan bol??

Machmuch- apun ko to apna bhai bas kush chaiye.

Raghu- teek h machmuch, to fir aaj se he kaam p lag ja. Main teek hu. Or aab sab kuch teek hone wala h apne life main. Mera sala (brother in law) bannae ka hai na tere ko.haaan bol

Machmuch- haan bhai ye to apn kab se chata hai.lekin aab ye kase hoga..??? mere tek he yede bhen antara th jo aab sahib se shadi ker chuke hai.

Raghu- machmuch, tujhe tere bhai p bharaosa hai na, to bas jo main bolta hu wo ker. Baki ke baat main tere ko baad main samjhauga.

Machmuch-teek hai bhai, bolo. Kya kerna hai mujhe??

Raghu- tujhe aman ko dhundna hai. Keha, ku kase...??ye sab baad main batauga. Bas tu use kehe se bhi dhund nikal.. or haan is baare main kise ko pata nh chalna chaiye. Teek hai tu aab main bhi sone jata hu. Bhut raat ho gye hai.

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In naik sadan :

DM- arre antara, dinner ready hai ya nh? Or rasika jaa raghu or satya ko b bula lla dinner k liye..

Rasika - arre bantiya, ja sahib or raghu dono ko bula la, main serving kerte hu.

DM- shouting on rasika.. mene tumhe bola hai na jane ko..bantiya k pas or bhi bhut kaam hai.

Bantiya - koi nh mai, main sahib ko bula lata hu or raghu bhai to aaj dinner nh kerege, abhi thode der phele he bahar se aye th or mujhe mana ker diya bola bhuuk nh h

DM- acha teek hai. raat main kitchen k kaam se free hone k bad raghu ko ek glass milk de dena.

(All finish their dinner and go back to there room.)

Antara in kitchen- bantiya, raghu ko mai ne milk dene ko bola th na, de diya tumne ?? peya ya nh usne ya so gya asse he??

Bantiya- nh bhoji(bhabhi) main abhi nh gya, wo mujhe kuch kaam th bhar ka to...

antara- acha teek hai, tum tumhara kaam kero, raghu k liye milk main le jate hu.antra takes the glass of milk and was about to leave, she saw raghu was coming from terace.

Antara- raghu, wo mai ne tumhare liye and just handing over the milk, ..

Satya- jaan, so sweet of you. tum mere liye milk lene gye th, thanks. And takes the glass from antara' hand.

Antara- haan sahib , wo main tumhare liye he laa rehe th. Raghu was just watching with hiding smile.

Bantiya- bhoji, apne wo milk de diya kya raghu bhai ko jo aap abhi le k gye th ya main le jau..

Satya- ohh, to ye milk raghu k liye th. Sorry brother aab to mene le liya.

Raghu- koi nh sahib, tu he rakh le.wase bhi milk mere personality ko suit nh kerta hai and leves the place.

Satya- dekha antara, tum us raghu k liye ye milk le k jaa rehe th, or wo attitude dikha k chala gya.

Antara- haan sahib, tum he pilo ye milk, ye tumhare personlity ko he suit kerega..

(Rantara rock. Satya shock)

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Next morning,

Raghu was in his old look..( u can imagine guys) with googles,and scarf in his neck. .and was coming down.meanwhile antra was also doing some work in hall area.antra felt the presence of raghu and turned behind to see. She was mesmerized to see his raghu. And looking at him without blinking her eyes. Raghu saw her but ignores.

DM- kya baat hai raghu, aaj bhu kush lag rehe ho. Chalo aao breakfast ker lo.

Raghu- haan mai aaj bhut kush h apun. Wo kya h na, new year anne wala h to apun souch reha th k basti ko renovate kera lu. Bhut time se apne kaam p bhi dhyan nh diya to bas wo he fir se sab kuch purana kaam kerna chata hu... by saying looks at antara.

Satya- basti ko renovate ke need nh hai..ku faltu paisa waste ker reha hai??

Raghu- wo kya hai na sahib, tu naik sadan main he rehta h din bhar, bhar to jata nh ke tujhe pata ho k bhar kya ho reha hai...isliye tu apna kaam ker or mujhe apna kerne de.

DM- acha teek h aab tum dono fir se shuru mat ho jana. Chalo breakfast ker lo.

Raghu- nh mai, mujhe bhuk nh hai or wase bhi aapp jante ho na k mujhe tikha pasand hai or aab yeha sahib ke taste ka kahna bana hoga...and raghu leaves.

Antara in deep thought, and remebers those old memories. Phele jab basti ka renovate hua th. Or kase raghu ne use roka th basti se jane se...

DM- arre antra kis k khayalo main kho gye..?? mujhe or tere pati ko to breakfast serve ker.

Antara comes out from her thoughts and serves in a anger mood.

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In basti. Raghu and machmuch were busy in their work. Raghu was guding the labours.

Raghu- aayyyeee pappu dhyan se..or sab kuch ek dam teek se hona chaiye.

After ometime Antara comes out from the naik sadan and straed to move . sees raghu there

and thinks - raghu, aaj rok k batao mujhe baasti se bhar jane se.

Machmuch- ohhh yedi, keha ja rehe hai tu..?? tujhe dikhta nh hai kya,?? Barrycads lage hue hai. nh ja sakte tu basti se bhar.

Raghu was listening all and came to them,

Antra- dekho, ye sab hatao yeha se, mujhe kaam hai. mujhe laundry se mere or sahib ke clothes lane hai.

Raghu- machmuch, hata de barrycads yr, dekh apne wajah se na kise ka kaam nh rukna chaiye or na he kise ko apn rok sakte hai. jane ne

Nachamuch- lekin bhai, agge khatra hai,, yaad hai na phele b ye yedi jane wali th to kay hua th..???

Raghu and antra looks at each others for a moment ,raghu caomes from his thoughts and says

Machmuch- phle or aab main bhut ferk hai. jaane de, apun ko kya..???

Antara was burning in anger. She was not able to digest harsh word from raghu. Tears comes in her eyes.

Raghu can see easily but ingore it and move ahead like only his basti and his work matters for him.

Antra was also leaving for laundry shop, sudden she sees a bundle of sticks was about to fell down on raghu.

Antra- pulls raghu towards her and shouted, raghuuu...

Both were in each other's arms. Antra was holding his collor with closing eyes.

Raghu was just seeing him and smiled.

Antra came in her sense- raghu, tum teek to ho,,

raghu - main teek hu mrs. Naik. Mujhe kya hoga?? Aap teek hai.

Antra- chodo mujhe..mujhe jana hai..

Muchmuch- oyyye yedi, tu chod mere bhai ko, dekh bechara hands up ker k kahda hai, tune pakad rekha hai use to. Or haan mere bhai ke jaan bachane k liye thanks.

Antra- jiske jaan bachaiye hai, use bolna chaiye, tum ku bol rehe ho..??

Raghu- (looks for a moment to antara )- dekh mujhe na thanks bolna nh atta hai mrs naik. or wase bhi kise ne mujhe bola th k mujhe thanks bolna suit nh kera to main nh boluga..

Antra was burning in anger and remebers that only she told him these lines and losts those moments which they spent in gaurage. A little smile comes on her face.

Raghu sees the little smile on her miss kaul's face and says to himself- miss call ye to shutruwat hai, tu dekh main tujhe apne sabhi purane din yaad dilauga.

Macumuch- dekh yedi, aab tu ja yeha se, werna wo laundry wala chala gya to tera sahib uske purple kapde keha se layga...??? Use b to ye he suit kerta h na...chal ja aab

Antrs leaves and raghu was watching her with smile.

Precap- antra' b'day in naik sadan

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow maja aa gaya smaggy.. it was awesome.. best part when sticks fall its antara who saves raghu.. reverse of what happened before.. LOL .. šŸ˜‰
Edited by SweetiePie25 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SweetiePie25

wow maja aa gaya smaggy.. it was awesome.. best part when sticks fall its antara who saves raghu.. reverse of what happened before.. LOL .. šŸ˜‰

haan raghu ke strategy hai ye ...šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜† mene mention b kiya hai.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Smaggy

haan raghu ke strategy hai ye ...šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜† mene mention b kiya hai.


yeh i read it.. nice idea..
Edited by SweetiePie25 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Wow awesome update yaar...it was simply perfect... :):)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Lovely update 😳 happy to know that our raghu is back 😳 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Smaggy wow yaar its jst amzing..
Loved it ..pretty gud so Limit ka gunda is back..
Rantara rock satya shock love dat line..hehe..
Really gud..pls pm me d next time update soon..
Keep writing..:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hayee smaggy😳apna raghu bhai bole to bada smart nikla re...šŸ˜‰
ms.kaul ko apne golden moments yaad dila raha hai.šŸ˜†nice😳
very lovely update!šŸ˜›

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