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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: lehr

congrats for the new story dear

interesting prologue
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continue soon

thank you dear 😊 will update soon
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will update soon
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beautiful banner and prolouge..
waiting for the story..

cont soon..

thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 1


Maan Singh Khurana, the name itself is enough to make people shiver out of fear. He is man of his own rules, want everything as per him choice and don't spare anyone who cheats him. World's 5th richest person and No. 1 business tycoon. He has his branches all over the world or says he is the king of construction business. An architect by profession from one of the best university. He is ruthless business man and when it comes to family also he is ruthless. He don't care about anyone except himself, his family is only his brother Dev Singh Khurana and his dadimaa savitridevi singh khurana. It's been 10 years he met them. He loves to be alone, doesn't have any friends, not interested in girls but changes his girlfriend every week. He doesn't go behind any girl but they come to him for his money and fame. Till today he didn't get into any physical relation except with one girl as he found her sexy and hot.

"This is your grand son's profile dadimaa, what does he think of himself dadi and why you are worried about him when you know he don't care for us. In these 10 years even once did he talk with us, no? Then why you are worried about him dadi. Dadi, you are my only family and I can't you like this. Tell me what should I do, I will do anything for your happiness" asked a very frustrated dev. He want to see his dadi happy but she will be worried about maan and is falling ill frequently. Dadi held dev's hand and told "I want to see maan before I die" "Dadi please don't talk like this" dev closed his eyes and sighed heavily. "Fine dadi, I will bring back your grandson and it's my promise" told dev.

"And you think he will come if you ask" came a voice. Dadi and dev looked at her and smiled sadly. "Answer me dev, will he come?" she asked again. "He should come not for me for dadi atleast" told dev. She smiled and told "he won't come dev, never ever" she told. "But why geet what happened that after the death of mom and dad he didn't even talk with us" asked dev. "Ask your brother when he comes" told geet. "In this birth it won't happen" told dev sarcastically. "It will happen and that's my promise" told geet. "What do you mean and What you are doing to do?" asked dev scared, whatever she do and she did for this family is all in extremes and dev loves geet as his elder sister, if anything happens to her because of his brother then he won't spare anyone and first of all he won't allow geet to do anything which is dangerous. "I am going to Canada" told geet. Dev eyes popped out like his nightmare has come true.

"Absolutely no geet, you are not going to meet him. I promised dadi that I will go and get him back, geet at least let me do something for dadi" requested dev, even dadi too is worried with geet's decision and on the other side she is happy at least by seeing geet, maan may change his decision and come back to delhi. Dev is scared for geet, after reading so many news about MSK and ruthless behavior with others, whatif he does anything wrong with geet. And if anything happens to her he cant tolerate, all these years she is their only family. "Nothing will happen dev, I will be alright" told geet, by hook or crook she has to go to Canada for maan and she will go no matter what. "Geet..." dev tried to say something but geet stopped him. "Dev, I know maan in and out more than you know him. Let me handle it dev. I promise nothing will happen to me and I will bring your brother back she then looked at dadi and told "Dadi, you don't worry. Soon you will with your family happily" Dadi patted her cheek and hugged her. But dev is not happy with geet's decision and he has no other option other than to agree with her. And he knows that once geet decided no one can change her decision.

"I am going by today evening flight" told geet and looked at dev who looked back at her angrily. Geet smiled at him and hugged him. "Don't worry dev, I will be alright" told geet. Dev too hugged her patting her head. "Hmmm" he replied. Geet broke the hug and asked pouting "Don't you help me in packing the luggage" Dev smiled forcibly and told "Ok"

Dev helped geet with her packing, time flew very fast that it's time for geet to leave India. Geet took blessings from dadi and bid good bye to both. She did not allow dev to come to airport at least. Geet reached airport and soon boarded the flight. She got the window seat, she is looking out of the window. Everything is looking beautiful and peaceful but not her heart and mind. "10 years maan, 10 damn years. Even once you didn't call me, but I was calling you endless times and how many mails I kept but you didn't even reply to one at least. Now I can't wait enough maan, I am coming to you but not as geet but I am coming as your MISHTY. I won't dis-close my identity to you. I will make you realize who I am and what you missed all these years and you have to come back for me, for dev and for dadi. Your geet is coming to you maan, may be you are MSK but soon you will be only my maan" thought geet and wiped her tears. "No geet don't cry, you should be strong for your maan" thought geet and smiled slightly.


Precap: MSK...


Here is the first part of TERA SAAYA, Hope you like it 😊 Waiting for your feed back..


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Edited by _GoldenStarz_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing start ...
geeet going to canadato bring maan back ...very intresting start ...plz update next part soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update...looking forward to the rest of the story..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg amazing awesomelovely starting yar:))))))
eagerly waiting fr next update:)))))
Edited by sona-rai - 11 years ago

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