SwaRon OS : The Time with an Author. - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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i loved it
the beginning was adorable
rahul is such a jerk splashing sharon with water just to get rise out of her
and then jumping on her bead to play ludo with her at 2 in the night.But I loved their bond it was truly how siblings are.
Sharon's "you're gay" cracked me up.I loved their convo and him calling her santa and ambulace was hilarious yet sweet.
Sharon's appearance was neatly described and I loved her traditional yet casual look.
Swayam's description was nice too.
She fainted😆should have expected that since he was a celebrity.
Intriguing concept Update soon I really want to see how their first meeting goes

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: SwaRon_rocks

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liked d title though i cant c any relevance..maybe swayams an author out here..
the bro sis scenes and bond was nicely penned..
lol ambulance?santa?
overall liked d build up u gave..now m eager to read further..
wasnt this supposed to be updated on sat??which sat?a yr ltr?😆
do update soon and thanks for d pm:)

Dont tell me i didnt mention that he is an author 😆
Shit, Im screwed
ill update it tomorrow. i have written half 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start
WOW loved the part between Sharon and her brother
I'm guessing Swayam is the author...well it sounds like he is
Please update soon...because I'm starting to think my Saturday isn't yours :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh i loved this os.plz update soon & pm me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Aishaa..


<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Dont tell me i didnt mention that he is an author😆</font>
<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Shit, Im screwed</font>
<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">ill update it tomorrow. i have writtenhalf😳</font>


when will ur tomorrow come??maybe a decade later 🥱
Dude plz update this and UDL if u have time 😳

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