SwaRon OS : The Time with an Author.

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SWARON OS : The Time with an Author



She got up with a jerk when the chills sent her a small little sensation. She glared at her brother who was standing there with a devilish smirk plastered on his face and a bucket yet half filled. She threw the sheets on the other side of the bed and went towards the cupboard to get herself a change. Carrying the change in her hands she made her way to the bathroom. Within a spam of five minutes she was back with another pair of nightclothes enveloping her.

Her brother still stood there but now in fits of laughter. A Winnie the Pooh nigh suit, he shouldn't be that surprised. After all Sharon was always a girl like that, not at all like his other girls. Glamour was way too far from her. She shot her brother yet another glare and took out another blanket from one of the chests. Carrying it to the bed, she unfolded it and wrapped it around herself. Soon she fell in deep slumber.

He made an exasperated face and left the room. Seemed like his plan of annoying Sharon tonight backfired. He went up till his room and took out a comic to entertain himself. Not getting any sleep again, he made his way to Sharon's room. This time he went up till her bed and started jumping high. The same old days, he still remembers during weekends he would irritate Sharon till she wouldn't give up and play snakes and ladder with at 2 in the night. But this time, the difference was he wasn't 8 but 18 but he still wanted to play Ludo with her. " Get up Sharon" he said as he continued to jump. Her changing sides and moving around was like an indicator that she was going to get up any time soon. Though how was still a question. It went on for another ten minutes till he gave up. Seems like she did really want to sleep so he left, this time deciding not to come back.

She got up by the sudden blaring of the phone. Throwing her hand out of the blanket she switches her phone off. She slowly puts off the blanket and gets up and sits on her bed. Another session of all the stretching and the rubbing of her eyes, she makes her way into the washroom. She brushes her teeth and takes a quick shower. She gets herself dressed in a pair of white jeans and a red tank top. She brushes her hair and leaves it open letting it fall down leaving behind its curls. Picking up the phone, she makes an exit form the room.

"Good morning Santa Claus"

Shut up Rahul. That was a bad joke"

" Aww sissy, you don't need to worry. You can always appreciate my skills."

" Stop testing my patience or I'll"

" Come on sissy, look at you. White jeans, red tank top and black hair. What do you expect me to call you then? An ambulance? Well I wouldn't mind doing that"

" Just shut up Rahul. I'm getting late for college. I dont have time for your lame jokes"

Sharon goes towards the kitchen and gets herself a pack of cereals and a glass of milk. She puts them in a bowl when she finds her brother staring at her.

" Now what?"

Why weren't you getting up yesterday night?"

" I didn't want dark circles today atleast. And neither was I interested in attending any game of ludo."

" Ah. There you go. Whom did you wanna meet? A new boyfriend? I hope he is hot unlike the previous one!"

" You're gay?"

" Naah, I just care for my sister a little too much."

" Which is simply not required. Mind your own business and butt of from here"

" hey watch out, this house is mine as much as yours"

" Chill bro. I'm leaving now. I'm done with my breakfast. Make sure you lock the door before leaving and don't forget to carry your keys. Mom said she has an overnight duty in the hospital today and dad is out of town. Now see ya. Bye"

" atleast tell me whose the unlucky guy is"

" Swayam Shekhwat, happy?"

" Holly shitt. Wait"

Too late. She was already out. He couldn't believe it. His sister was going to meet her dream man, FINALLY. He was happy for her but at the same time jealous. Why couldn't god fulfill his wishes instead of his moron sister's? Anyway he packed his bags and taking the keys of the house he left for his college too.

She entered her college with a wide smile spread over her face. The fact that she

Was going to meet him was just making her more and more excited by each passing second. She then realized she didn't follow up about the gifts from her friend. She messaged her and kept her phone back in the bag. She found her way to the class and seated herself on one of the last benches. Soon one of her bestie joined her and the class ended. As it was a long lecture, it was already 12. And she was given the time of four so she had to reach home by 2. Another lecture should be good for the day. Deciding on all of this she moved towards the canteen and joined her gang of friends. Soon it was time for her second lecture and she attended that as well. It was already two so she left in hurry and on the way picked up the required items.

She got back home and ran to her room. She had purpously not informed too many of her friends as she didn't want too much of commotion and spying happening all around. She shutters off her thoughts and goes to the bathroom to wash her face. Se then puts on her salwar suit that was a white pretty one with silver sequins all over it. It had a plain dupatta with some balls hanging towards the end and the salwar was of a plain white comfortable material. Soon she got herself dressed into it. She wore a pair of white jhumkas and some silver bangles to accessorize herself and there she was almost ready. She takes a quick glance into the mirror and she was nearly looking perfect. Opening her drawer, she takes out her lipgloss and kajal and applies along with a slight glint of blush. She didn't how to use the other stuff so she let it be this way. She puts on pair traditional silver flat ballets. She takes a final check in the mirror and she looked fine. She couldn't look any better though. She checked her phone and it was 20 past 3. She decided to leave, as it would take her another 30 minutes to reach. She picked up her car keys and left.

She reached the monument, yeah monument. Quite a weird place to meet but she didn't mind. As if the place would matter much. She looked around but she should have guessed, he was a celebrity and celebrities do take time. She starts walking around a little to not look like a stupid bore standing out there when suddenly her eyes fall upon a guy. He was dressed in a loose V-neck black tshirt with a pair of dark blue jeans. Cool funky pair of glasses was accessorizing it a little. She recognized him in an instant and her heartbeats grew faster as he started approaching towards her. By the glares he was receiving from her, it seemed he recognized her. He came upto her and passed a small little smile" Sharon right?" listening her name form his mouth made her faint that very instant.


[Quote] so guys hope you liked it. all the criticizing is welcomed because i know i hell deserve deserve it badly for this one. seems like i should stick to writing emotional one sonly :P i think they come out the best :P. anyways this is dedicated to Kashmi for her birthday. sorry im late, screw the exams and spare me :P Hope you liked it. This was i know quite a filler and it was just a build up for the chapter 2 that shall be posted on saturday. Scroll down for a note

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Posted: 12 years ago
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firstly for pms, add ..Aishaa.. to ure buddy list.
secondly sorry to all my readers, i know it has been months since i have updated any of my stories and thats just because of the mere fact, EXAMS! well they're getting over tomorrow so i shall be free and you can expect updates from now on. Being overloaded with plenty of work from my personal side to even updating stories, i have decided to follow a pattern that has been based on the response received on each story. I would be updating my stories order wise. and till first story story has not been updated once, i cant jump to the next. this way i can ensure all stories are updated. ill try to give 2 updates a week but for now expect 1 for each :P
the order goes like


so for example till i dont update undesired love once, i cant update incompatible love or unforgettable stayover. and then till i dont update unforgettable stayover, i cant update undesired love again. this would ensure regular updates and wouldnt make me bored with one story.

and yes, the best assistant ever should be complete din the coming week. sorry for the delay for that.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I told you I told you I'd love par sunta kaun hain ban jao judge and pass karo verdict on your own..😆.
I loved it honestly rahul is such a cartoon waking sharon up at 2 in the morning to play ludo with him and throwing water at her to get a reaction from her..😃. I like the bond they share as brother sister very adorable..😳. Siren se ambulance bana diya sharon ko hehehe..😛
I like sharon's look I could imagine her in the salwaar she must be looking a million dollar swayam bachhu ul have a hard time resisting her..😛. The same applies to sharon a black V-neck tee and denims cool look..👍🏼.
You're forgiven babe the first chapter was worth the wait I could'nt have asked for a better start then this..
I can't wait for saturday to come mhan..😊.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet16cash

I told you I told you I'd love par sunta kaun hain ban jao judge and pass karo verdict on your own..😆.

isliye when dad suggested me to become a lawyer or a judge i refused it that moment 😆 im too judgemental. but this time im right and ure wrong. it was quite suck and i know that.
I loved it honestly rahul is such a cartoon waking sharon up at 2 in the morning to play ludo with him and throwing water at her to get a reaction from her..😃. I like the bond they share as brother sister very adorable..😳. Siren se ambulance bana diya sharon ko hehehe..😛
i forgot about the siren part. ambulance just came naturally. i had not thought from it from before. red and white always either remind me of santa or ambulance. thats why i used it here 😆
I like sharon's look I could imagine her in the salwaar she must be looking a million dollar swayam bachhu ul have a hard time resisting her..😛. The same applies to sharon a black V-neck tee and denims cool look..👍🏼.
i think you've forgetten he is a writer. so he is veyr mature. its gonna be quite easy at the first go.
You're forgiven babe the first chapter was worth the wait I could'nt have asked for a better start then this..
I can't wait for saturday to come mhan..😊.

yey, now i can happily part tomorrow :D Aisha is veyr happy Kashmi liked it :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update
I m quite suprised that sharon wore salwar to meet swayam,a celebrity... dont know why...
But very well written
And cute bond between sharon and rahul 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nyccc n short like it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start 😊
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice os... it wasn't terrible at all...
the bond between sharon and rahul was cute!
thanks for the pm.
take your time for the updates of your other works.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice work

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aisha it was amazing os as always 👏👏👏
with completly unique piece of work...and great bro sis appearnce was nicely plotted...i love it
bro are always like this
😆

for title 👏

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