Hum Tho Chale The Dost Bane Jane Kaha DILL MILL GAYE (part4 updated)

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Zosad

@Zosad

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Posted: 12 years ago

Guysss i just wanna right a ss HUM TO CHALE THE DOST BANE JANE KAHA DILL MILL GAYE on armaan and ridhima

Characters:

Armaan Malik ; Ridhima Guptha ; Muskaan ; Rahul ; Atul Joshi ; Anjali Guptha ; Nikita ; Siddanth Modi

Plot:

Anjali and Ridhima are daughters of Shashank and Padmavathi .Anjali is 7 years old while Ridhima is 6.

Armaan who is also 6 years old stays in neighbourhood of ridhima with his grand parents as his parents stay abroad.

Armaan, Ridhima, and Anjali are good friends and are from same school.

Armaan and Ridhima are classmates too of 1st standard along with Muskaan and Rahul.

While Anjali, Atul and Nikita are classmates studying 2 nd standard.

Though they are of different standards they used to have a lot of fun.

Ridhima's mother Padmavathi used to take tutions .And all this whole used to go...

Part 1 - PG 1

Part 2 - PG 2

Part 3 - PG 4

Part 4 - PG 5

Edited by Zosad - 11 years ago

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Zosad

@Zosad

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Posted: 12 years ago

Here comes my first part
Part1

Armaan, Ridhima, Anjali daily go to school along

with each other come home with each

other.They used to have lots and lots of fun.

Armaan's parents and Ridhima's parents used to

have good relation and even moreclose relaton

with his grand parents.

Every day evening Padma (Ridhima's mother)

used to take tutions and almost all the

classmates of Ridhima and anjali used to come.

In school during lunch hour all of them Ridhima

Armaan Anjali Muskaan Rahul Nikita and Atul

used meet and have their lunch

They enojy while reading they enjoy their

education.

Around 6:30 tution used to get completed and

they used to play till 9'0clock and return home.

Always there used to be competiton in

education among Ridhima Armaan Muskaan

But this didnt effect the friendship of Armaan

and Ridhima.

But muskaan used to feel jealous whenver

others top the claas instead of her.Ridhima knows it but still she loves her friend.

Shashank and Padmavathi love each other but

shashank is not that kind of a person who

readily expresses his feelings.

There used to be small sometimes very large

fights thattoo frequently.

This used to disturb Ridhima very badly

But once she starts reading or playing she

forgets about them

Since its childhood and childhood crushes are

quite common.Ridhima has crush on

Armaan.She's too crazy that she used to think

she will marry only Armaan not any other.

later Armaan's grandfather got some serious

health problems.So Armaan's parents decided

to take him to US for better treatment and to

continue Armaan's further studies there only.

Meanwhile Ridhima's Father go tranferred to

Mumbai from Dehradun.

So Ridhima and her family bid goodbye for

Armaan and his family and left for mumbai.

They dint know whats happening aound them.

Later Armaan with his grandparents left for US

Am writing it right from there childhood.And ill finish their Childhood wala track soon.Pls do comment and let me know how's the story

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PreetLuvKSG

@PreetLuvKSG

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Posted: 12 years ago

it's awsome 👏

cont. soon love it 👍🏼

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

I love this concept :)

Please continue soon and please pm me when you update

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@attraction.101

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

I just found it today

Awesome concept

Plzzz cont soon

And add me to ur buddy list and do pm me

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Zosad

@Zosad

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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 2:

6 years later

(Ridhima is studying 7th standard)

Ridhima: (on phone) Muski 6 years completd since we met and you are saying every year that this year ill definitely come ...what is this yar

Muskaan : Ridhzi what can i do my father couldnt get leave and when he gets leave he will be like iam tired i cant.

And u know my mom she will not go to my aunts house without my dad

Ridhima: Acha theek hai now count down begins (Both at atime) "10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 Happy New year !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Ridhima simultaneously wishing her family members and hugging her Sister Anjali

Anjali was too in contact with Nikita and Atul

6 years were finshed since Ridhima left for Dehradun but still she and Anjali are in contact with their friends

Muskaan : Acha ridhima Rahul is calling ill cl u later bye enjoy

Ridhima: OK wish Rahul also from my side im a little bit busy tell him ill cal tomorrow mng

As Padma dont like talking to boys at that time

Anjali :Ridhzi u know nikita is coming here during her vaccation.Actually Her Family is planing a vaction so niki suggested dehradun

Ridhima : Wow di its awesome..We gonna have fun.How we used tohave fun during those days even till 9 10'oclock in the night

Anjali: Yah..nowadys mom is not allowing to go out even after 8

Ridhima : leave it na dad is there na he wil support us all the time

Anjali: Ridhi did u remember how u i Armaan used to fight play

Ridhima: Ha di (smiling at her stupidity of having crush on armaan )

Ridhima never told her di or her new friends or muskaan none that she had a crush type of thing on Armaan

Anjali: Why are u smilimg

Ridhima: Just remembered those days di

Padma : Come on enough now sleep its 1'oclock enough for now we will celebrate tomorrow

Anjali : u sleep we will talk for sometome and then we will sleep

Shashank: nahi beta sleep for now we will talk tomorrow mrng

Ridhima : OK chalo di we will sleep come iam going to our room (signalling Anjali that we will go to room and talk there)

That night when all slept (Including Ridhima and Anjali)Anjali got a call Ridhima heard Anjali talking to someone

and she also know who isthat someone but Ridima didnt wake she is acting as if she is sleeping

Guys I know this part was a bit boring but iam sure that ill make the next part interesting pls do comment so that i can know whether i need to continue it for long or for a short time