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veronica

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Posted: 12 years ago

Res
(Ms india- no pm's??
Now remind me to edit :P)

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Muskan Verma

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Posted: 12 years ago

amazing os Aishaa

why didn't u send pm's???

anyways...coming to the os

it was a nice concept

and beautifully penned down

u described swayam's emotions so well

hmm...Arnav and Aadya...nice names

update the next part asap

nd plz do send pm's for that

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nidhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

beautiful os

you had neatly expressed

the pain he went through

it made me cry

update soon

want to know more

why did sharon leave?

what is in that letter?

+ i liked the names arnav and aadya

pm me when you update

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darshita

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Posted: 12 years ago

it was sad but well written wonderful... liked it

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Nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

That was beautifully written :)

Please continue

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pooja123456

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Posted: 12 years ago

Beutifully written os!

Sad but nicely penned down

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rosy kohli

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Posted: 12 years ago

res

unresing

it was a very emotional os 😭

n the song was very apt

it definitely made the whole environment more emotional

it was gud blend of many elements pain, longing to be wit ur partner

but the portion i luved was the way swayam was narrating his marriage

n the ending was a heart-breaking moment

those lines were very beautifuuly penned

do write more looking forward to ur updates 🤗

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