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srishty

@shankrishty

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Posted: 11 years ago

hi guys
How r u all?Hope you all are good actually more than good.
i dont think many people know me.
So let me introduce myself.
I m srishty.i m a MANVEER FAN like u all.i know there are many nice ff in the forun and i also know i am not that good for writting FF.
but I want to write a FF on manveer.I will update the prologue soon.
plz tell me should i continue.
If you are reading than please please and please press the LIKE button and leave you precious comment

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srishty

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Posted: 11 years ago

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PROLOGUE
A girl was shouting:ham unse shadi nahi karenge agar who is doniyaka akhri larka bhi hoya na tohbhi ham unse shadi nahi karenge.sona aplogo ne.
A lady tried to clam her.
Lady:ek yuvrani itni jorse bath nahi karti.
Girl:aaphi bataiye ma hamme kaise bath karni cahiye.ap kaise react karti jaabh apko pata chalti ki ap jinse shaadi karrahin he unhe har raat ek naiye larki cahiye night spent karne k liye.
There was a silent for a few second.
Lady:rajkumario ko apni marjise marne kibhi parmission nahi hain.so it will be better ki ap jo jaise horaha hain hone dijiye.
Saying this the lady left the place.
Girl:ham kabhi nahi karenge uss inshanse shadi.jise larkiyo ko isjaat dena nahi ata.han nahi to.
She started crying.
A voice shouted:manyata
The girl turned
M:dadisabh
Ds:han ham.what happened with you?Itni si bhi trust nahi hain kya ham par.
M:aise baath nahi hain dadisabh
Ds:to kya baat hain
She didnt reply.
Ds:uday ajarahai hain.ham kise vi tarhaki lapawarhi nahi chahte.

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MAHIMA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#3

u r a good writer
don't underestimate urself
loved it loads
plz do update
and that too regularly if possible
update soon

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NAVINA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#4

Hi Srishty, the prologue was awesome! Do continue soon, would love to read more😳.

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Nishaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#5

Good start!

It does sounds interesting, do continue!

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ask me.....

@RatiTheAngel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#6

very short and nice start i think u should continue and thaxx for pm soo all the best

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srishty

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Posted: 11 years ago

#7

Originally posted by: MAHI1198
u r a good writer
don't underestimate urself
loved it loads
plz do update
and that too regularly if possible
update soon

Thank you
I'll try my level best

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srishty

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Posted: 11 years ago

#8

Originally posted by: ...navina...
<font color="#993366" size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Hi Srishty,
</div>the prologue was awesome!
Do continue soon,
<div>
would love to read more😳.</font>

Hi navina
Thnx for support
I'll try my level best
would love to write more 😳

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srishty

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Posted: 11 years ago

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