SWARON OS:THE WAIT - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update, I liked how Swayam guessed that she must be dancing, her joke that he can't be better than her, surprise, kiss demand and finding others around them 😲, Rey's comment 😆 and the last part slamming door on our faces was awesome I am still smiling.🤣. Great job 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: TaareynSwaron

Awesome update, I liked how Swayam guessed that she must be dancing, her joke that he can't be better than her, surprise, kiss demand and finding others around them 😲, Rey's comment 😆 and the last part slamming door on our faces was awesome I am still smiling.🤣. Great job 👏

glad u liked that slam part...i thought it might be funny to read😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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"The wait" name itself defined sharon's mind state that how much she wanted swayam to be with her on her birthday!! i loved how sharon's dad aka swayam's would be father in law adored him!! and that surprise and sharon's demand😆 she should listen first and then speak!!😃 but it is fantastically written and thanks for pm!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sooo cute awesome os thanks for pm😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rinkubathija12

"The wait" name itself defined sharon's mind state that how much she wanted swayam to be with her on her birthday!! i loved how sharon's dad aka swayam's would be father in law adored him!! and that surprise and sharon's demand😆 she should listen first and then speak!!😃 but it is fantastically written and thanks for pm!!


wanted sharon's dad to adore him...apna baap toh karta nahin...sasur hi sahi😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Grt Os loved reading it 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

THAT WAS FANTASTIC AND AWESOME OS... LOVED IT...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Mihi4VruShan

Reserved.

Unres..
Wow wow wow.. you write so beautifully.. I hope you have written more for I would love to read more of your works..
Coming to the OS, it was beautifully penned...Loved the SwaRon convo and the way he surprised her..
I wish you could continue it..
Flawless and beautiful OS.
Keep writing..😳

thanks mihi means a lot coming from u

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