SWARON OS:THE WAIT - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow it was amazing dear I loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
soo cute ...it ws lovelyy😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
It was nice os

sharon longiness for swayam was beautifully portrayed
she carving for him while dancing her heart out.

Swayam call her nd both of them know each other very well.
Swayam came back on her bday as her gift nd she belated happy

Sharons dad surprised her as her gift being swayam.
Gang teasing her nd her dad smirking at her
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

Goshhh...Medha...that is so not fair...
To write so so well...
It was beautiful...
the way you portray their emotions and the characters seem so real...
Her Wait...her longing...for him...
I loved the way you showed Mr Raiprakash's POV...
Who won't adore a Son-in-law like Swayam...
Awww...loved the moment she opened the door and was pleading for kiss..
Diva sharon...lover boy Swayam...so perfect together...
Loved her father's gift to her...SWAYAM..
Just that he didnt wrapped her gift in a box ...😆
U can make ur reader smile and cry with ur write ups...
They are simply PERFECT...
Ur write ups are like poetry in motion...
So beautiful...
I am officially ur fan now😳

Luv
Deep

honoured deep...that you called yourself my fan...cause i definitely am one of urs.
and i'm blushing with the complimentsEmbarrassed. thanks for your feedback...and i love reading your works and your comments both so much.
love--medha
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Posted: 12 years ago
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edited comment on page 1.😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
would be son in law...
my god aaj toh tumne mujhe khush kar diya... 😊😊😊

mr.raiprakash swayam se full impressed...
aur kyun na ho swayam is just perfect...
*touchwood*

story was beautiful
well written os 👏👏👏
loved the feeling.. wether i was anger or love... 😊😊

in all it was a really cute os.. 😳😳😳

thnk u for the pm... 😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Aww it was such a cute and adorable os
Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: spongy

would be son in law...

my god aaj toh tumne mujhe khush kar diya... 😊😊😊

mr.raiprakash swayam se full impressed...
aur kyun na ho swayam is just perfect...
*touchwood*

story was beautiful
well written os 👏👏👏
loved the feeling.. wether i was anger or love... 😊😊

in all it was a really cute os.. 😳😳😳

thnk u for the pm... 😊😊

apna baap toh impress hone se raha🤢...sasur hi sahi. aur impress hona bhi chahiye...swayam to hai hi impressive😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
So cute n adorable
U really hv good writing skils do write more like dis
The os was so beatufully written
Loved reading it
Plz do pm me wen u write some more beautiful work
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Aww such a sweets os

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