SWARON OS:THE WAIT - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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how cute!!!poor sharon was in such a bad mood!!really luved how you described how much she she missed Swayam!!You did a really good job describing her pain!!!i luved the ending poor sharon didn't even let swayam finish in excitement!!!that was a cute swaron moment!!!!REALLY REALLY good job!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Shooo...cute OS
n especially wat was dat at endng...dey went upstairs while slamming door on our face...hahaha...dis makes os more cute...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow...such a cuteee n adorable update...luved it ❤️ ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vishaka45

Shooo...cute OS
n especially wat was dat at endng...dey went upstairs while slamming door on our face...hahaha...dis makes os more cute...

yeah privacy moment😉 so keep out...forumwalo.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wonderful os...it was flawless and beautiful..keep writing such amazing os and plzzz pm me when u write anything..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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comment edited-pg 2😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: swaron_pk

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wow !!it was another mind blowing OS from u 😊 i always love ur style of writing :)
sharons wait was beautifully penned down , i loved swaron convo on the phone and especially that email scene i loved it😳
i liked sharon's dad ,especially when he said that they should have wrapped swayam as a gift😆
sharon's demand and gang teasing was amazing 😳
i totally loved the OS,it was sweet 😃

thanks swaron_pk...i am glad that u liked that scene...worked hard for it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very sweet OS. You write very well. Thanks for the PM :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update loved d way u showed sharon's feelings for swayam not being next to her during her b'day.. she dancing angrily.. n swaron convo was cute... loved d reaction she gave wen she saw swayam.. loved d way she acted without realizing gand n her dad behind her.. loved d part were u explained how sharon's dad love n accepted swayam as his son-in-law coz of his character was nice... lovely os...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: vaishu88

awesome update loved d way u showed sharon's feelings for swayam not being next to her during her b'day.. she dancing angrily.. n swaron convo was cute... loved d reaction she gave wen she saw swayam.. loved d way she acted without realizing gand n her dad behind her.. loved d part were u explained how sharon's dad love n accepted swayam as his son-in-law coz of his character was nice... lovely os...

thanks vaish and love your avatar...that periwinkle blue butterfly...i just love the colour😊

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