Rang jao mere ishq mai updated part 18 page 43 on 18/1/2014 - Page 16

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Posted: 11 years ago



Maan also kept fast for Geet and that is why he faked to be angry with her...

but Annie ke samjhaane se Geet samajh gayi...

how beautifully Maan make her ready for pooja...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice story..Maan love Geet a lot..Now Geet also feel love for him..
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 14
awesome...
nice one...
so Geet is getting possessive and the attraction has started...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow.. superb.. that was long one too..😃 Maan making Geet ready himself N their romantic moments... 😳 hayee maar dala .. Amazing part.
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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 15

Morning at breakfast table

Priya : maan geet hum sab kuch din ke liye Mumbai jaa rahe hai

Maan : mai nahi aa sagta yahan ek important meeting hai aur mera rehna zaruri hai

Priya : thik hai phir geet yahin ruk jayegi kyun ki mujhe pata hai ki aap aapna khane pine ka bilkul khayal nahi rakhte hai aur late aaoge toh agar geet hogi toh aacha hoga beta geet aap annie ke saath shaam ko shopping pe chali jana

Geet : ji maa

At afternoon geet went to maan's office to speak something important

Geet was waiting for maan in his cabin

Maan came after a long meeting

Maan : arre geet tum yahan iss waqt

Geet was scared and as he came she just hugged him tight

Maan : geet kya huwa sab thik toh hai na tum itni pareshan kyun ho

geet doesn't say anything and she started crying

maan was getting worried

maan : mishty kya huwa kisine kuch kaha kya tumhe

but geet was no where to stp

maan makes geet sit on sofa and hold her face

maan : geet please mujhe bolo akhir baat kya hai

geet : maan subha se koi mujhe call kar raha hai aur koi respeonse nahi aur aab mujhe laga ki koi mujhe follow kar raha hai maaan mujhe bohat darr lag raha hai

maan : geet kuch nahi hoga mai hoon na tumhare saath mere hote huwe kuch nahi ho sagta tumhe

and then suddenly geet's mob ring

geet : maan uska hi call hai please maan kuch kariye na

maan picks the call but no one was speaking

maan cuts the call and takes geet home

annie see maan and geet together

annie : kya bhabhi mai aapka yahan wait kar rahi hoon aur aap bhai se milne chali gayi no fair

maan : annie aabhi nahi

dadimaa notice that geet was not in her sense at all

dadimaa : maan aap geet ko room mail eke jaiye hum juice bhijwate hai

maan : ji dadimaa

maan was seeing that geet was not at all walking now

he carries her in arms and take her in room and make her lie on the bed

maan : geet dekho kuch nahi huwa hai sab thik hai

geet : nahi maan mujhe kuch thik nahi lag raha hai mujhe bohat darr lag raha hai

maan : mai hoon na mishty kuch nahi hoga

nakul knocks on the door

maan : aa jao

nakul brings the juice and gives to maan and leaves

maan : chalo aab thoda juice pi lo

geet : nahi maan

maan : mere liye

maan made her drink the juice and she slept

maan went downstairs and told the whole family

maan : mom mai chahta hoon ki yeh trip kuch din aap log cancel kar do agar aap log chale gaye toh geet ghar mai akeli rah jayegi joh mai nahi chahta hoon

ram : haan maan tum thik bol rahe ho hum log kuch din baad chale jate hai

geet : maaannn

maan rush towards his room and was shock to see geet crying

maan holds her

maan : geet kya huwa tum chiki kyun

geet shows her finger towards a paper

maan goes and pick the paper and read it

he was shock to read but did not say anything to geet


maan : geet kuch nahi hai kuch bache wahan khel rahe hai na bas kuch nahi tum rest karo mai maa ko bhejta hoon

geet was not at all convience with what maan said

maan went down and told priya and annie to look after geet

there went upstairs

maan : papa yeh dekhiye geet iss waje se chiki hai nakul jake pure guards ko yahan aane ke liye bolo

ram : maan yeh sab kaise ho sagta hai jab ki humari security itni tight hai

maan : wohi toh mai jana chahta hoon

all the guards came and was standing in line

maan : mai tum logo ko yahan humare security ke liye rakha hai na ki koi hum sab ko pareshan kare iss liye yahan ho kya raha hai agar tum logo se koi kam nahi hota toh chale jao mai kisi aur ko rakh lounga but yeh sab mai bardash nahi karunga koi bhi aata hai aur yeh sab wahiyat harqat karta hai kaun aaya tha garden mai huh

there was no one to answer his question

maan : agar yeh dubara huwa toh mujhe se buara koi nahi hoga jao yaha se

ram : maan kaun ho sagta hai joh aisi harqat kare who bhi geet ke saath

maan : pata nahi papa but joh bhi hai mujhe jald hi pata lagwana hoga mai geet ko aise nahi dekh sagta lekin who joh koi bhi hai usse yeh nahi pata ki geet akeli nahi hai who aab maan ke saath hai usse insaan se bht badi galti kar di aab usse MAAN SINGH KHURANA ka samna karna padega

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Edited by Zeba702 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
someone following geet
hope maan catches d culprit soon
do cont soon
thnx fr d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
kaun hai jo geet ko pareshaan krha hai?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing concept
loved d straight n simple story
pm me pls
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb ...
is someone threatening geet ...?????
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb! Who is calling Geet i wonder.. Loved the way Maan supported Geet... And Geet trusted Maan to tell her problem and came to office

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