Rang jao mere ishq mai updated part 18 page 43 on 18/1/2014 - Page 18

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wow maan angry ab toh maza aayega
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wow zeba... its awesome update...
full of suspense...
great work,,,
loved it...
kon hai ye log jo meri geet ko tang kar rahe hain...
nazzuu... mar khaye gi agar kch bura kia to maaneet ke sath...
update son
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part 15
lovely...
who is the person?
poor Geet...
cont soon dear...
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awesome..

some one is stalking geet..
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Interesting someone is stalking Geet but who. Maan wont leave them as they are messing with his Gaat.
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Part 16


at night in km at dinning table

maan came downstairs alone

ram : maan aap aleke kyun aa gaye geet kahan hai

maan : papa geet room mai hi rehna chahti hai

priya : maan aap geet ke saath hi dinner karle upar hi hum nakul ke haatho khana upar bijawate hai

maan : ji maa

maan goes upstairs

maan : geet chalo kuch khalo

geet : nahi maan mujhe nahi khana

maan : geet please mere liye

geet : maan kya mai aapse ek baat puch sagti hoon

maan : haan geet pucho

geet : maan woh letter mai kya likha tha

maan was now not looking towards geet

maan : kaunsa letter geet

geet : maan aapko pata hai ki aap jhooth nahi bol sagte

maan : geet mai sach mai nahi janta kit um kaunse letter ki baat kar rahi ho

in mean time nakul comes with dinner

maan (s.t) : bach gaya warna geet woh letter ka topic hi nahi chodti

the dinner was done in silent

maan was going to wash his hands

geet hold his hand maan turns towards geet

geet : maan mujhe aabhi jana hai ki woh letter mai kya tha

maan : geet maine kaha na tum kaunse letter ki baat kar rahi ho mujhe nahi pata

geet puts maan hand on her head

geet : maan aapko meri kasam hai aab boliye kya baat hai

maan with no other way sat beside geet

maan : geet usse letter mai kya likha tha woh important nahi hai lekin kis ne likha tha woh important hai kis mai itni himmat hai ki woh maan singh khurana ke ghar walo ke saath aisi harqat kare

geet : maan aap shant ho jaiye aur mujhe boliye kya aap mere saath nahi share karenge

maan : geet mai tumhare saath share nahi karunga toh kis ke saath karunga

maan goes towards the cupboard and take out the letter and handover to geet

letter

geet bohat badi galati kar di tumne dusri shaadi kar ke

iss galti ki saza toh tumhe milegi hi aur woh saza hum denge

after reading the letter geet was hell scared

geet : yeh sab humari shaadi ke waje se ho raha hai

maan : nahi geet aise nahi hai

geet hugs maan

geet : maan na mai aapse shaadi karti aur na yeh sab hota

aapko meri waje se kitna kuch dekhna pad raha hai

maan : chup geet maine phale bhi kaha tha aur aab bhi bol raha hoon mai sab kuch bardash kar sagta hoon jab tak tum mere saath ho lekin tumhare aankho mai yeh aansu mai bardash nahi kar sagta chalo aab rest karo bohat late ho gaya hai

geet : good nite maan

maan : good nite geet

next morning

everyone was behaving normal as it was order of maan

geet comes downstairs raam notice geet

ram : aacha huwa geet aap aa gayi dekho yahan aab koi mujhe chai bhi nahi de raha hai

geet : mai aabhi leke aati hoon

priya from kitchen : yeh kya aap koi chote bache ho jo geet se shikayat kar rahe ho

ram : aab tum mujhe chai de nahi rahi ho toh mai geet ko hi bolounga na

geet smiled : maa mai de deti hoon roz toh deti hoon na

priya : thik hai jaa

annie comes in kitchen and geet comes back after giving tea

geet : annie tu yahan kya kar rahi hai woh bhi iss waqt yeh time toh tu soti rehti hai na

annie : kya bhabhi aap bhi waise bhabhi mujhe na thodi si cooking sikhao na aaj mai sabke liye nashta banaougi

geet and priya was hell shock after hearing his

geet touch annie's forehead

geet : maa annie thik toh hai na aanie tujhe bukhar toh nahi hai phir yeh aisi baaten kyun kar rahi hai

priya goes towards hall

priya : maan dekh na annie ko kya ho gaya hai woh aab humari annie nahi rahi usse sab ke liye nasta bana hai

maan : nahi maa please mujhe uske haath ka nashta nahi khana hai

Vicky : haan maa yaad hai na last time ussne kya kiya tha

Flash back

Annie made breakfast for everyone she was soo happy to do so

Maan took first bite of it and was coughing

Annie : kya huwa bhai

Maan smile : kuch nahi princess and drinks water

Annie : dad aap kahiye na

Maan : nahhhiii woh yeh sara mai kahaounga

Annie : sach bhai aapko itna pasand aaya

Maan : haan annie yeh sab pack kardoo

Annie goes from there and maan tell how much chilly and salt is there in food

Flash back ends

Everyone was laughing maan was happy to see laugh

Other end of the city

Person : tumne bht badi galti ki geet dusri shaadi karke humare samaj mai dusri shaadi woh bhi ek aurat ki kabhi nahi ho sagti iski saza toh mai tumhe dekh hi rahounga


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Posted: 11 years ago
hi dear! Lovely update! Geet upset n Maan comforts her! Fb scene was fab! well written! update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
abb yeh kaunsa twist hai...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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nice updt
who are the person now

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thanx fr update
awesome update
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conti soon

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