Agni’s Eyes - A poem for all Agni fans!

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Agni ke aanhkein (Poem)

Tumhare aankhon mein humari jaan basi hai
Hum to sirf in aankhon ke deedar ke liye bani hai

Agni hai to jaan hai
Jaan hai to jahaan hai

Tumhari ek nazar
Kiya dil pe aisa jadoo bhari asar
Hota nahi sabar
Tumhe ek din na dekhe agar

In aankhon ka nasha
bani humari madhoshi ka wajah
Hayee tere ye qaatilana adaa
ho gaye hum sab in nazron pe fidaa

Na guzre wo din
Na kate wo raat
Tere deedaar bin
mat pooche humari dil ki halaat
Kitni adhuri lage gi Kul Palace tumhare jaane ke baat
Yaadon mein tum hamesha rehna humare saath

Tumhara ek jhalak

Dil ko deta hai itni thandak

Marenge tum par tab tak

Chalenge ye saasein jab tak

Lo suna di humne apne dil ki poori dastaan
Agni jaan...ab to mita de ye doori humari dilon ki darmiyaan

Luv,

Shaheen

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shariefah

Hi guys,

One of my tasks (gift for MOTW) is to write 4 lines on agni's eyes😛. Well i thought why not make a whole poem😊

Thanks Maleka....for this idea ...😉

This poem is first for you ofcourse😳, and after that for all Agni fans.

Especially dedicated to the crazy agni ke deewanis in this order of crazyness...Wasima (sallulover), Shazeen (miss5stars) and Priscilla stalker (pc84).....i will never forget their chit chats on Kul Chat😆...fighting for the right to be the mother of agni's children😛....well kya kahe guys....kehte hai pyaar aur jung mein sabb jayz hai😉

Ok don't throw tomatoes at me and forgive all the mistakes😳!

Enjoy!

(I'm gonna try and make something nice of this....but now first read it )

Agni ke aanhkein (Poem)

Tumhare aankhon mein humari jaan basi hai
Hum to sirf in aankhon ke deedar ke liye bani hai
Agni hai to jaan hai
Jaan hai to jahaan hai

Tumhari ek nazar
Kiya dil pe aisa jadoo bhari asar
Hota nahi sabar
Tumhe ek din na dekhe agar

In aankhon ka nasha
bani humari madhoshi ka wajah
Hayee tere ye qaatilana adaa
ho gaye hum sab in nazron pe fidaa

Na guzre wo din
Na kate wo raat
Tere deedaar bin
mat pooche humari dil ki halaat
Kitni adhuri lage gi Kul Palace tumhare jaane ke baat
Yaadon mein tum hamesha rehna humare saath

Lo suna di humne apne dil ki puri dastaan
Agni jaan...ab to mita de ye duri humari dilon ki darmiyaan

Luv,

Shaheen

OMG Shaheen my dear👏😳👏 , what have you done😳, fabulous lines👍🏼 for fabulous eyes belongs to a fabulous person, you are too too too SWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET👍🏼,i love you.❤️thanxxx a lot ,Muah,muah,muah to you and Agni ofcourse.❤️u make my heart Garden garden

MALEKA

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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG Shaheen my dear👏😳👏 , what have you done😳, fabulous lines👍🏼 for fabulous eyes belongs to a fabulous person, you are too too too SWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET👍🏼,i love you.❤️thanxxx a lot ,Muah,muah,muah to you and Agni ofcourse.❤️u make my heart Garden garden

MALEKA

thanks for the lovely comments maleka, i am soo happy that you liked it....i was so scared to write it 😳.....luv yo toooo😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~bella~

awsumm poem Sharifah!! 👏

thanks bella 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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So sweet ..... Shaheen 😛
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Originally posted by: Zhasan

So sweet ..... Shaheen 😛

thanks, i am so happy no one attacked me with tomatoes😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Bewafa sanam Shaheen ji, you didn't include my name in the list of crazy agni fans

so I am not going to comment on the poem😭😭😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kimi_dost

Bewafa sanam Shaheen ji, you didn't include my name in the list of crazy agni fans

so I am not going to comment on the poem😭😭😳



I WILL throw tomatoes at you Shaheen!!😡

I'm not on the list!😭🥺


But apart from that, your poem was very sweet😊

~diljaani
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shariefah

Hi guys,

One of my tasks (gift for MOTW😆) is to write 4 lines on agni's eyes😛. Well i thought why not make a whole poem😊

Thanks Maleka....for this idea ...😉

This poem is first for you ofcourse😳, and after that for all other Agni fans.

Especially dedicated to the crazy agni ke deewanis in this order of crazyness...Wasima (sallulover), Shazeen (miss5stars) and Priscilla stalker (pc84).....i will never forget their chit chats on Kul Chat😆...fighting for the right to be the mother of agni's children😛....well kya kahe guys....kehte hai pyaar aur jung mein sabb jayz hai😉

Also for my friends Kiran (Kimidost), Dilly (diljaani) 😛

Ok the shourya camp now suddenly turned into agni lovers 😛 so this poem is also for them😆

Ok don't throw tomatoes at me and forgive all the mistakes😳!

Enjoy!

(I'm gonna try and make something nice of this....but now first read it )

Agni ke aanhkein (Poem)

Tumhare aankhon mein humari jaan basi hai
Hum to sirf in aankhon ke deedar ke liye bani hai

Agni hai to jaan hai
Jaan hai to jahaan hai

Tumhari ek nazar
Kiya dil pe aisa jadoo bhari asar
Hota nahi sabar
Tumhe ek din na dekhe agar

In aankhon ka nasha
bani humari madhoshi ka wajah
Hayee tere ye qaatilana adaa
ho gaye hum sab in nazron pe fidaa

Na guzre wo din
Na kate wo raat
Tere deedaar bin
mat pooche humari dil ki halaat
Kitni adhuri lage gi Kul Palace tumhare jaane ke baat
Yaadon mein tum hamesha rehna humare saath

Tumhara ek jhalak

Dil ko deta hai itni thandak

Marenge tum par tab tak

Chalenge ye saasein jab tak

Lo suna di humne apne dil ki poori dastaan
Agni jaan...ab to mita de ye doori humari dilon ki darmiyaan

Luv,

Shaheen

omg jaanu im just crying remembering those days, we had soo much fun dont know wat will happen once kulvaddhu ends,

i luv ya all guyz

and just keep in mind that agni is only mine

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Posted: 18 years ago
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and ur poem is touching yaar 😳

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