fanfic _ kya yehi pyaar hai updated part

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey guys i thought to start a fanfic it is a story of a small town girl gauri she belongs to a middle class family he had a father alok and a young sister kaya and he also had a brother but they dint have a good relationshp with him gauri is a very sweet and simple girl and deserves a loving and caring husband so read to know that what the fate has store for her part 1   ; ; it s tarts with durga puja then .............

alok...beta kaya kaha reh gai thi itni der kyu laga di

kaya..baba voh traffic mein phas gai thi

alok..beta tumhari behen kaha hai and a voice from the back says gauri ma ki puja main gauri kaise nahi aati

Gauri....baba gauri ma ki puja mein me kese nahi aati (she was wearing a simple but a nice churidaar suit with matching chodiya and earings ) when aarit was over

Gauri..acha baba mein office chalti hoon thoda time hi liya tha

alok.. acha beta aur haan aaj sham ko mahen mere dost mumbai se aa rahe hai sare parivaar ke saath sham ko jaldi aajan unke aane ki taiyaari bhi karni hai haan aur shiv beta bhi aa raha hai bohaut chota tha jab dekha tha patanahi ab kaisa dikhta hoga kher tum ghar jaldi aa jana

Gauri..kya bade papa aa rehe hai vo bhi pure parivaar ke saath kitni khush ho main ki aapko bata bhi nahi sakti acha baba mein chalti ho shaam ko jaldi aa jaoingi bya

alok..acha beta bye

and there shows shiv wearing goegles and putting his stylish jacket on its none other then shiv (iqbal khan) and there gauri thinks that how does he looks and is he will be a good and nice guy and then there is a double screen one side gauri thinking and othere side shiv a hot and a handsome guy .

ok guyz do tell me should i continue or should stop it here do reply soon i am waiting šŸ˜•

Edited by tanyaaaa26 - 17 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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please do continue with a long update so that we will hook to it 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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good start šŸ‘ continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it is great šŸ‘ ........ plzzzzzzzzz cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part2
it starts with gauri who wasin the office
gauri..he bhagvaan late hoogai bade papa ke aane ki taiyaari karni hai
gauri in mahens house she was making some delicious recipies and cleaning the house ans suddenly she heards cars horn
gauri..lagta hai bade papa aa gae she came down running and finally she reach to the door bade papa aap aagae kaise hai aap
mahen..i am fine and how are you gauri beta
gauri..i am also fine arey dadi dadaji kaise hai aap donu
dadi..hum bilkul dhik hai beta aur aajkal tere paas hum se phon par baat karne ki time he nahi hai
gauri..vo dadi office se time he nahi milta sorry and suddenly there was a very hevy thunderstorm and a guy entered in yes its none other than shiv
mahen..shiv beta aagae
shiv..yes dad finally i came here i dontwant to come but for yoursake i came. here beta meet her she is gauri my friend alok daughter
shiv..ok hi gauri
gauri..hello shiv ok everybody come on the dinner table dinner is ready everybody was eating the food and when shiv looks at the food he said i am going to eat this so oily food
gauri..hamesha jo jaisa dikhta hai vaisa hota nahi
shiv..what??
gauri..i mean ek baar khakar to dekhie ho sakta hai tasty lage
shiv..ok and when he eat one bite shiv says ya its good kabhi kabhi change bhi acha hota hai
gauri..kya
shiv..i mean change of food
gauri..ok dadi ab main chalti hoon late ho rahi hoon
alok..arey gauri beta akeli kaise jaegi rok saath chalenge thodi der baad
gauri..nahi baba main chalti hoon morning mein jaldi udhna hai aap baad main aajana
dadi..acha beta shiv tujhe chod dega
shiv..k.k.k kya main main kaise
dadi.. nana nahi chalega gauri raat ko akeli ghar jaegi chalu jao chod kar aao gauri ko
shiv.. ok alright
gauri..dadirehne dijie kyu unku pareshaan kar rahi hai
dadi..chupkar aur jaa kal morning mein zaroor aa jaana
gauri ji ok dadi bye
dadi ..bye
precap..gauri and shiv in the car talking about themselfs

hey guys do reply šŸ˜•

Edited by tanyaaaa26 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 3
IT STARTS WITH SHIV AND GAURI WHO WERE IN THE CAR
GAURI..SHIV APNE BAARE MEIN KUCH BATAIYE NAA
SHIV..WELL MAIN KYA BATAO WELL GAURI EK BAAT BATAO TUM ITNI OLD FASHION KYU HO
GAURI..ASE HE ROKO ROKO GADI ROKO
SHIV..OH MY GOD KYA HOA
GAURI..HONA KYA HAI RAIN HO RAHI HAI AUR MUJHE BHIGNA HAI
SHIV..WHAT NO NO YOU WILL FALL SICK
GAURI..MAIN TO KEHTI HOON KI AAP BHI AIEYE BAHAUT ENJOY KARENGE
SHIV..ME NO WAY
GAURI.. WAS ENJOYING VERY MUCH IN THE RAIN AND SHIV WAS WATCHING HER
SHIV..IN HIS MIND AJEEB LADKI HAI ISKE TO AJEEB HE TASTE HAI BUT PATA NAHI KYU YEH MUJHE PHIR BHI ACHI LAGTI HAI AND SUDDENLY SOMEONE PULLED SHIV IN THE RAIN YES IT WAS GAURI
SHIV WAS TRYING VERY HARD TO GO BACK BUT IN VAIN HE WAS TRYING VERY HARD TO GO BACK AND SUDDENLY SHE PUSHED GAURI AND GAURI WAS LIKE TO FALL ON THE WET GROUNG INTHE HEAVY RAIN BUT OUR SHIV CAUGHT HER AND GAURI WAS IN SHIV,S ARM AND BOTH OF THEM WERE STAREING AT EACH OTHER AND THEN GAURI GOT UP AND SAID LETS GO BACK
SHIV..YA WE SHOULD LETS GO BACK
AND THEN SHIV DROP GAURI TO HER HOME AND HE TO CAME BACK TO HIS HOUSE
PRECAP..GAURI AND SHIV LOOKING AT SKY AND THINKING ABOUT THAT RAIN SEEN
SORRY FOR THE SHORT UPDATE BUT ITS LIKE THIS ONLY IN PARTS I WILL UPDATE THE NECT PART SOON
Edited by tanyaaaa26 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 4
GAURI AND SHIV THINKING ABOUT THE RAIN SCENE
SHIV..IN HIS ROOM THINKING ABOUT THAT INCIDENCE WHAT HAPPENED TO ME AT THAT TIME WHY I WERE LOST IN HER
GAURI..YEH KYA HOGAYA THA MUJHE MAIN UNME KHO SI GAYI THI YEH KYA HOGAYA THAT MUJHE
SHIV..OH GOD I WAS LOST IN THAT GIRL WHOM I HAVE NEVER SEEN IN MY LIFE
GAURI... MUJHE YEH KYA HO RAHA HAI KAHI MAIN UNSE PYAAR
NAHI NAHI AISA NAHI HO SAKTA HUM DONU KABHI NAHI MIL SAKTE UNKI AUR MERI SOCH MEIN BAHAUT DIFFERENCE HAI
SHIV..OH NO WELL IT WAS JUST AN ATTRACTION NOTHING ELSE
NEXT MORNING IN MAHENS HOUSE ON THE DINNER TABLE
GAURI..GOODMORNING EVERYBODY
DADI..GOODMORNING BETA AA HAVE BREAKFAST
GAURI..YA DADI
DADI..ACHA GAURI BETA KAL TO APNE OFFICE SE CHUTI LE LENA HUM SAB PICNIC PE JAENGE TUM BHI CHALUGI
GAURI..LEKIN DADI MAIN KAISE
DADI..CHUPKAR AUR PACKING KAR LE ONE WEEK KA PROGRAMME HAI
GAURI..THIK HAI DADI JAISI AAPKI MARZI
DADI THEEK HAI KAL TIME SE 9 BAJE AAJAEIYO
GAURI..JI DADI
ACHA DADI OFFICE KE LIYE LATE HO RAHI HOON CHALTI HOON BYE
DADI..BYE PHIR KAL MILTE HAI
PRECAP..ALL THE FAMILY GOING TO THE PICNIC
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Posted: 18 years ago
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GUYZ DO REPLY I DONT KNOW HOW I AM GOING TELL ME GUYZ SO THAT I CAN GO FURTHER SO DO REPLY SOON
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 5
THEY ALL   ; ARE GOIGN TO THE PICNIC
EVERBODY WAS SITTING IN THE CARS
DADI..OHO GAURI TO LATE HOGAIE AISA KAR TO SHIV KE SAATH AA JA
GAURI..JI OK DADI
SHIV..AAO GAURI LETS GO.
THEY BOTH IN THE CAR
SHIV..GAURI..KUCH KHAOGI APPLE OR ANYTHING
GAURI..NAHI SHIV AAJ MERA VRAT HAI
SHIV.. OK AS YOU WISH BUT DONT SAY ME AFTERWORDS BEC THAT TIME NOTHING WILL LEFT AND THE JORNEY IS VERY LONG
GAURI..OK SHIV NAHI KAHONGI
AFTER A LONG TIME
GAURI..SHIV HUM KITNI DER MEIN POHONCHENGE
SHIV..I SAID YOU JORNEY IS LONG I CANNOT SAY IT WILL TAKE MORE TIME
GAURI..OK
SHIV..ARE YOU OK NA
GAURI..YA YA
SHIV..SURE
GAURI..YES
I THINK GAURI YOU SHOULD SLEEP ON THE BACK SEAT WE WILL REACH TOM ONLY AND YOU ARE NOT LOOKING ALRIGHT BEC OF THAT VRAT MAYBE
GAURI.. NO NO ITS OK SHIV
SHIV..PLEASE GAURI
GAURI OK AND SHE SLEEPS ON THE BACK SEAT NEXT DAY THEY REACH THE PICNIC PLACE
PRECAP..NEXT DAY SHIV WATCHING GAURI WHO WAS SLEEPING AND SAYING SOMETHING TO HIMSELF

GUYZ DO REPLY SO THAT I CAN GO FURTHER

Edited by tanyaaaa26 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ur going great 😃 , eagerly waiting 4 the picnic part šŸ˜› so continue soon

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