Risthey..AK - KYPH.FF Part 35,36,37 Pg 23

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This is my fanfic on Angad and Kripa of Kaisa Yeh Pyar Hai...hope you like it😳

Part1

Gayatri and Suryaban Sharma, Naina and Dilip Khanna, are childhood friends and live in one small town, Nainital.

Suryaban is an English lecturer in one of the good private colleges in the town. Gayatri is a housewife, a philosopher and a guide in Suryaban's life.

Dilip is working as an accountant in a small company and very ambitious to become a great playback singer some day in his life. Naina is a house-wife, kind hearted, social worker, and women lib fighter. They have a 3 year old son Kartik who is taken care of more by his Dadi, Damayanti.

Dilip falls in love with a co-singer, who gives occasional programmes in the city and set up a second family secretly..

Neither Naina nor Sharma family is aware of this affair till the co-singer died.

Naina witnessed an accident while returning home from a women's club one late night. She left 3 year old Kartik in Damayanti's care and went for a meeting with a women freedom fighter in the women's club. She is heading back home and found an auto rickshaw ran over a women and she hurried her to hospital reporting the incident to police, against the auto driver. At hospital the co-singer got a few minutes conscious and introduced herself as Avantika Agarwal and her relation with Dilip Khanna and requested to help her one year old son, Angad and died in Naina's hands.

Later she found out that Avantika is Surya's distant cousin. Sharmas had a serious fighting with Dilip for cheating Avantika and Naina at the same time.

Naina is startled to hear about Dilips' affair and decided to leave him but her pregnancy with Aaliyah stopped her to take the step forward. Dilip apologised Naina, Sharmas and promised to change his behaviour on Damayanti's advice to him.

Naina decided to adopt Angad and pay for her husband's sins.

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Naina pampered Angad more than her own children out of her kindness and sympathy on him as a motherless child. Angad loves and respects Naina more than his own mother rather goddess. For his affection, Naina would die to do anything for him.

Dilip diverted his mind into developing his career in music field and took the first opportunity from Mumabi to climb the ladder in his life. From then he never looked back.

Naina had another child Anittah after Aaliyah. Dilip decided to settle his family in Mumbai.

Suryaban and Gayatri are blessed with a beautiful daughter, Kripa after a year.

Dilip and Naina forced Suryaban to celebrate Kripa's first birthday in Mumbai.

From that day, Sharmas made it a habit to celebrate Kripa's birthday in Khanna House as her birthday falls in summer and spend whole summer vacation with Khannas.

Dilip works for Bose music industry and its founder and owner, Damini Bose became a close friend to Naina and well wisher from the time Khannas moved to Mumbai. Damini, a single mother has a son, Prithvi and a daughter, Misthy. Prithvi is Angad's age and Misthy is Anittah's age

Dilip pampers Misthy and Kripa a lot along with his own daughters. Whenever Sharmas visit Khannas in summer Misthy also spends most of the time in Khannas house on Dilip's wish. The day Sharmas land in Khannas house all three families meet at dinner.

That evening the first scene would have always been that Dilip holds his hands out and asks Kripa and Misthy "Tum donon mein kaun banegi humara princess? Humara bahu rani? Humara Prince Angad ki dulhan ?"

and always Misthy runs before he finishes his sentence, with a big scream "It's me…It's me" and hugs Dilip.

Kripa also wants to run before Misthy but clinches to her mother with shy.

"Mein iss darpok sey shadi nahin karoonga" Angad says pointing at Kripa with a disappointment than anger.

Naina supports Kripa and carries her "Meri princess to Kripa hi banegi, yeh darpok nahin hai sharmili hai. Haina Kripa?"

Kripa cry and runs to Gayatri with fear. Khannas, Sharmas and Bose enjoy this scene every year ies since Kripa grown three years old.

Later while all kids playing together, Angad pulls Kripa's hair "Batao, meri dulhan banogi ki nahin?" and Kripa used to cry loudly without giving answer.

Dadi tries to compromise them "Arey Angad! Beta! Chodo Kripa ko kyon chedtey ho? Tum meri Duniya ka sabsey pyarsa bacha haina? Kripa nahin to kya hua Misthy banegi na tumhara dulhan?"

Angad doesn't like her convincing him but leaves Kripa's hair and mingles with other kids.

Now all kids grown …Kartik13, Angad 11,Aaliyah 9, Anittah 8, Misthy 8,Prithvi 11,and Kripa 6.0

One evening after Kripa's 6th birthday celebrations, Naina told Dilip at dining table in front of everyone "Dilip! Yeh bachon ke beech ladai khatam karna padega. Angad to bahut uncontrollable hota jaaraha hai. Wo badey bhi o raha hai aur iss waqt job hi hoga wo jindagi har dil mein reh jaayega."

"It's okey Naina! Hum to summer vacation khatam hotey hi US chala jarahey hai aur yeh bachey kab milengey pata nahin, tab tak shayad badey bhi hojaayengey" Suryaban tried to ease the atmosphere.

"Oh! Surya! Mein to mazak kar raha tha, aur socha nahin tha ki bachon mein karwa hat paida hojaayega." Dilip tone sounded apology.

"Nahin Dilip Bhai saab! Hum to aapki baat seriously le rahey hai, aur aap bata deejiye kisko aap ka bahu manengey" Damini playfully asked. She dreams about Misthy's wedding with Angad.

"Hum aap sey compete nahin karengey Damini! Daro mat" Gayatri also teased back with smile.

"Yeh kaisa hoga Gayatri! Angad ko to Kripa pasand hai, aur wo jabardasti na sahi ussey manake hi rahega" Dilip teased Gayatri.

Surya took a little serious "Nahin Dilip! Main bhi nahin chaahta Kripa tumhara ghar ki bahu bane, pata nahin Angad kya banega bade hokar, hope he won't be like you"

Dilip understood his sarcacism and he meant about Avantika and offended "Surya! Tum baat ko kuch seriously le raha hai?"

"kyon nahin Dilip? Avantika mere sagi behen nahin to kya hua, mera chacha chaachi ki dard mein jaanta hoon, tum kya jaano?"

Gayatri tried to console Suryaban and pressed his shoulder and warned with eyes.

Dilip got hurt "Chalo, Aakhir muh to khula tumney, jo hua uskey liye mein sharminda hoon "

"Chalo sab mazak hi leleejiye, kyon ki bachey badey hokey kissko chunengey pata nahin"Dadi made the atmosphere easy.

Everyone laughed and diverted the conversation on other things.

After that what the reason might be Sharmas and Khannas never met again.

Dilip grown to a big playback singer and constructed a big house and started his own music academy and earned a lot of property.

Suryaban became busy in settling in new atmosphere, in New York.

AFTER 8 YEARS:

It's a night club in New York.

Everyone is celebrating Valentine's Day and most of them are having their first V Day that year. Loads of teenagers are enjoying in excitement of having first V day with their first Valentine. All boys and girls forgot their limits and responsibilities. Most of them are already drunk. Night 2 O'clock and no one seems thinking to go home yet.

Some boys are teasing and instigating girls and vice versa.

Another big group of 11 are singing and dancing and enjoying other group's tantrums. Some boys loving their girls at the spot only while some dragging their partners into side corridors, corners and dark shadows.

Boys from the teenager group took their girls into some rooms upstairs while the music group still enjoying and watching them.

The music group is more interested in watching a teenage couple. The boy from the couple is having tattoos on his both biceps, wearing tight jeans and vest, pierced ears and lower chin and the girl wore low cut short jeans with sleeveless low neck top showing all her beauty. The most important thing attracted the music group is the beautiful melodious voices of the couple. They continuously flirting with each other and singing Hindi and English songs loudly and immersed in their own world. Both are having drinks and smoking without any break. Around early hours, the boy carried the girl into a room upstairs.

Five of the music group retired and headed out to leave the place. Some of them wanted to spend some more time outside and all enjoying their chatting and crude jokes.

The girl from the singing couple came out after an hour long down pouring cream Fur jacket and walked to the parking lot.

The music group again started watching the girl and decided to leave the place as soon as the girl leaves.

A group of four tall black drunkards started harassing the girl. The girl is trying to protect herself even in her gloomy status. The music group approached the four black people and tried to send them politely away from there. But the four blacks are not in a mood of listening to the group. At last the tall guy of the music group gave some punches to the black drunkards and got some from them. All nine people had punches among each other. The girl is startled and took a knife from her dash board and started yelling at the people.

The club guys came running out to see the situation and black drunkards ran away. The music group approached the girl who is in shock to console her. But the girl startled and stabbed the knife against the group and accidentally the knife peeled the tall guy and a pool of blood sprayed all over the place. The tall guy screamed loudly with pain. The girl shocked and ran away in the car.

The club guys helped the music group to the hospital.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome ff, gr8 beginning, but jus 1 thing if avantika was surya sis, n angad is avantikas son dat means angad n kripa r cusins. Coz kripa is suryas daughter n angad is surya's sis' son, jus a bit confused about that, but gr8 ff, pls do cont!!!
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wow great story can't wait for the next part šŸ‘
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Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Awesome ff, gr8 beginning, but jus 1 thing if avantika was surya sis, n angad is avantikas son dat means angad n kripa r cusins. Coz kripa is suryas daughter n angad is surya's sis' son, jus a bit confused about that, but gr8 ff, pls do cont!!!

Thanks for liking it.

yes true they are cousines....distant....since avantika is surya's distant cousin

Edited by vallanki - 18 years ago
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sounds awesome!! it was pretty cute 😳 continue soon šŸ‘

if im not mistaken, u have also written another a-k ff in kyph section, right? 😳
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Originally posted by: erier101

sounds awesome!! it was pretty cute 😳 continue soon šŸ‘

if im not mistaken, u have also written another a-k ff in kyph section, right? 😳

You are right😳 The other ones are KYPH reverse gear and Meera....😳

Thanks for remembering them😳

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Part 2

Seven Years Later:

"Angad! Yahan aao, kabsey yeh log tumhara intezaar kar raha hai" Naina stopped Angad in mid way while Angad is climbing stairs.
Angad stepped down slowly checking the people gathered in the hall.
"Mom! What is this? Did you arrange any party?"
Naina sighed "Party!! Haan kal holi hai aur aaj holi dahan"
"Sorry! MOM! I totally forgot."
"Haan, baiyya aap ko ladkiyon sey phursat miley tab yaad hoga na" Aaliyah taunted him standing behind Naina.
Angad smiled "aisa kuch nahin hai. I'm just returning from Pune office."
Damini approached them with her daughter Misthy "Hi! Angad!"
Angad smiled at them and wished "Hi! Aunty! Hi Misthy!"
"Bhaiyya! Mom ko pata chalgaya hai ki aap kal raat outhouse mein phir sey ek ladkiko lekey aye they"Anittah whispered in his ear.
Angad surprised and felt embarrassed and apologized with his eyes.
"Tumhari Mom yahan women lib ke liye struggle karti rehti hai aur tum wahan ladkiyon ke saat phursat mein time pass kar raha hai" Damini taunted him.
Angad annoyed at Damini but lowered his eyes as Naina doesn't like him to say anything to elders in front of her.
"Chalo, late sahi aahi to gaya jaakar papa sey milo. He is waiting for him" Naina ordered hiding her smile at watching embarrassed Angad.
"Tum sach mein Angad ko baut bigaad diya Naina!"Damini complained.
"Kya karoon, angad meri weakness hai, bina maa ki bacha hai, kuch kehney ko mann nahin lagti, ab wo meri haat mein nahin hai" Naina sighed.
"Samajhti hoon Naina! Magar tum to ek wome lib ho aur Angad aisi ladkiyon sey ghoomna society mein acha nahin lagta" Damini defended her opinion.
Naina shook her head and walked to other guests.
Naina had over pampered Angad because of her sympathetic feelings on him. Angad finished his Masters in music and settled as playback singer. He has Dilip's influence a lot in his personal and professional life. Naina always taunts Dilip for Angad having his traits more than expected.
Angad spends most of the time out of the house with his friends, drinks, and girls. Naina dislikes his womanizing and feels guilty for his behavior.
"Mom! " Angad settled his head in Naina's lap when everyone gathered in Dadi's room after Holi dahan followed by dinner.
Naina is caressing his hair "Ghar kyon jaldi aajaata Angad?"
"Mom! I told I was in Pune…" Naina cut his sentence "Aaj ki baat chodo mein har din ki pooch rahi hoon"
"Mom! Mein ghar mein kya karta? Bore hojata hoon. These two sisters always phone pey gappe maartey rahtey hai aur Katik business tours mein. Papa apni academy cheezon mein busy aur Dadi apni social welfare ya spiritual meetings. Mein ghar mein kiss sey baat karuna? Issiliye I spend my time with my friends"
"Haan, girl friends ke saat" Anittah settle besides Naina. Angad slapped her playfully.
Dadi silently listening to them while reading a philosophical book.
Aaliyah came with another girl and Naina took her tablets from the girl.
Angad quizzically looked at the girl and gestured with his eyes at Aaliyah to enquire about her. Aaliyah settled besides him and put her hand on his stomach and whispered in his ears "Momki nayi assistant, personal secretary."
Angad got up and turned to Naina "Nayi? Itni jaldi?"
"Tum jaisey aulad ghar mein ho to kya karti?" Dadi giggled. Naina changes her personal assistants every month when she comes to know Angad is flirting with her or vice versa.
"Male assistant rakhleti" Angad grinned.
Anittah giggled "Lo yeh tumhari sagi behen nikli na!! tum girls ko flirt karta hai aur yeh boys ko" Aaliyah softly slapped on Anittah's head as warning her.
The new assistant is hiding her smile as she already heard a lot about Angad's reputation and now hearing personally. She turned to place Naina's pill box in the corner desk.
"Tanya!" meet my boy Angad!" Naina stopped Tanya to introduce each other.
Angad smiled and held his hand out to greet her.
Tanya smiled and waved her hand "Hi! Mr.Angad!" and walked to finish her work.
Angad looked at his hand and smiled sarcastically and looked at Tanya from head to bottom. She wore a white frilled three cut long skirt with v-neck pista green sleeveless blouse with long round ear hangings, hair tied as pony tail, bare hands.
"She looks modern but not your type Bhaiyya!" Aaliyah whispered in Angad's ears as she doesn't want Tanya to hear her.
Angad raised his right eyebrow, Anittah said in low voice "Dekha nahin Bhai! Jaisey haat bhi nahin milayi".
"Tum sab mera itni tareef jo kar rahey they uskey saamney wo kaisey haat milayegi" he smiled and shook his head as blushing. Naina stroked his hair and squeezed his ears "tumhara reputation hi aisa hai to hum kya karey? Phir bhi keh deti hoon Iss ladki sey door rena" she got up to leave the room for bed. Taniya followed her.
Aaliyah, Anittah and angad also walked out after bidding goodnight to dadi.

"Morning Mom! Morning Dad! Morning Tanya!" Angad greeted everyone at the dining table giving side glance to Tanya. She is looking so fresh in the morning in her long high neck sleeveless white and parrot green printed 3/4th long gown and hair tied pony.
Good Morning Bhaiyya!" Aaliyah and Anittah settled in their chairs.
Kartik also came and wished everyone.
Tanya walked into kitchen to bring some juice as Teddy, the chef is serving breakfast to everyone.
"Dadi nahin aayi" Angad asked as he taking his toast.
"Haan puja mein hai, aayegi." Naina answered and continued " Angad! Iss Tanya sey humesha respectfully behave karna aur tumhara ladkiya jaisey nahin treat karna. Meri izzat ki sawal hai. Jiss jagah sey wo aayi hai wo mere liye bahut important place hai and I really need your cooperation for keeping my prestige in tact." Her voice sounded authoritative and at the same time pleading.
Angad surprised for her special attention on her new assistant and he smiled "Mom! Aap aisey kehrahi jaisey main hi sab ko bigaadta hoon. Jo ladkiyan mere saat rehtey wo apni marzi sey I never forced any girls"
"Haan maloom hai kaun kaisi marzi sey aati hai" Naina grinned.
Anittah and Aaliyah giggled and Aaliyah told in soft voice "Bhaiyya! We know how girls come to you tum aisi maska lagata hai woe k hi pal mein folat ho jatey hai"
Angad blushed and concentrated on his food.
Tanya served juice to everyone and walked to Naina for her orders.
Angad is giving side glances to her as his curiosity is increasing after hearing Naina's special care.
Naina got a call as soon she finished her breakfast and walked away from the table. Kartik and Dilip left for their work. Anittah and Aaliyah are hurrying themselves in gulping their food as they already got late for their usual appointments with their friends.
Naina gestured Tanya to finish her breakfast and join her to leave for her day's activities.Tanya took seat opposite to Angad and started biting her toast.
"So aap kahan ki rehney wali hai? I mean where are you from? Earlier kahan kaam kartey they?" Angad tried to put her in conversation.
Aaliyah looked at him to warn him but Angad ignored as usual. Tanya stared at him a while aand answered in low and soft voice "I belong to Mumbai only. I worked in several different places" Angad disappointed for her brief introduction. She finished her breakfast and walked out with Naina.
Angad sighed loudly and two sisters laughed at him.
"Bhai! Aur buri khabar hai aap ke liye" Anittah giggled "wo shadi shuda hai ek bachi bhi hai"
Angad disappointed and shook his head but walked out after bidding bye to them.
Angad is driving to his studio but some mixed thoughts are bothering his mind.
He is feeling very depressive, disappointed and irritated."Yeh irritation kiss wajah sey? Tanya ki wajah sey? Am I upset coz she refused to shake hands? Am I upset coz she is married? No, something else is there." He looked disturbed whole day and tried to get rid of his thoughts from Tanya.

Edited by vallanki - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: vallanki

Thanks for liking it.

yes true they are cousines....distant....since avantika is surya's distant cousin

Excellent part!!!!! Who is this tanya?????

Btw how can they get married if they r cusins, even though they r distant cusins they r still cusins, so how can they get married?????? I think u shud change that avantika was like a sis to surya or sumfin, like he considered her a sis.

Just to tell u this is just a suggestion, Im sorry if it offended u or sumfin!!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Excellent part!!!!! Who is this tanya?????

Btw how can they get married if they r cusins, even though they r distant cusins they r still cusins, so how can they get married?????? I think u shud change that avantika was like a sis to surya or sumfin, like he considered her a sis.

Just to tell u this is just a suggestion, Im sorry if it offended u or sumfin!!!!

The comments and suggestions are always welcome😊

This relation dsnt hold much importance in the story.
Some cousins marry in some regions. All r not sisters and brothers in cousin relationship
For instance muslims marry their mausi-mausa kids, chachi-chacha kids. South Indian Hindus marry mama-maami, bua-poohpa's children.
So it dsnt matter what type of relation is this. I'm not using it anywhere else except to show A's interet in K and Suryaban's hatred on Dilip😊

Edited by vallanki - 18 years ago
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who is Tanya...... comes out soon in future parts

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