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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: tabby999

have not read this story

but many said it is wonderful
i hope u will not left it incomplete ..so please update it geetsmile

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: tabby999

have not read this story

but many said it is wonderful
i hope u will not left it incomplete ..so please update it geetsmile



Try dear i will wait for your review
N yeh I willl complete it but after some days as having exam nowadays
Edited by geetsmile - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
fab part
maan spending time with geet n mking her feel spcl😊
geet wanting to knw wat happnd that made maan change bt hesitant to ask
maan sensing geet hesitation asking her to give him smtime 😊
gud going ...hayeee maaneet n cuties lovely time 😃
heheee maan n his 3 kids 😆
awww sooo sweet n cuteee moments of maaneet with cuties n maan doing his best to make geet happy 😊
continue soon
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When will you update sweetheart
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Part 37

It was new day with the new hope for maaneet, they are gng to face ted hardships of life once again and this time they need each other support to live. Geet had the fear to be admitted in hospital whereas as maan had fear that how he will handle geet with kids, mithi n ammy are too small to understand anything for them they are happiest kids who are getting their parents love, affection and pampering which they didn't got from birth. They are 1st tym living with their parents mainly with their mother whom their tinny miny heart always missed n now once again getting parted from their mumma is gng to be one of the difficult things for them, more than them its gng to be difficult for maan to be with them n geet too. He have witnessed her fear on the name of hospital n now living her alone in hospital is gng to be worst for her whereas he cant leave kids too alone n cant take them to hospital too. His whole night spend in thinking how will he manage it.

Zindagi Hume har din ek nae wajah deti h jeene ke...

kabhi kabhi yeh wajah hi humari zindagi ban jati hai...

Yeh wajah hi toh tha jisne mujhe tumse milaya

Yeh wajah hi toh tha jisne mujhe tumse dur kia

Or aaj yeh wajah hi toh zindagi ki..hum sath hai

Hum pass hai

Phir v bhooht si dooriya hai

He was just unable to sleep whole night, his thoughts came to halt with the buzzing of his phone, he 1st made mithi sleep properly on bed n placed a pillow beside her then answered the call, it was from aniee. She was asking about Geet n kids, then assured that she and Arjun will come soon there. After talking to aniee maan made few more calls and then with satisfied heart he went in kitchen to made milk for his 3 cuties and coffee for himself. Come backs in room n made them woke and asked feet to brush their n her teeth's after brushing Geet come out from washroom carrying both kids in her arms, seeing this he ran towards her n took both of them in his arm n said in lil. Stern tone "u r not allowed to carry them, then y r u carrying them" hearing once again maan's stern voice tears came in her eyes thinking he didn't want her to carry her kids once again made her turn around to leave room whereas maan made kids seat on bed n looked at Geet who was gng out while wiping tears from her eyes, his heart sank once again seeing her in tears he grabbed her hand before she step out of bedroom n cocooned her in his arm n wiped her tears 1st then carried her till couch n made her seat on his lap n just gave a look to kids who were once again sleeping cuddling to each other. He once again looked at geet who was now not looking at him n there was slight anger in her today, he made his mind if today she is gng to say something he will hear her silently but seeing her too silent only tears were flowing from her eyes n her stiffness in his arm made him once again guilty.

He made her look at him while keeping her closed to him, his one hand was holding her firmly on her waist and other was wiping her tears n made her look at his eyes n spoke "I m sorry jaan if my words hurted you but u didn't get y I said this" on which geet spoke softly "y u always do this, what I now did that u r once again making me away from by jaans" geets words priced his heart but he softly made her look at him n spoke "jaan u r not getting me" on which geet said "then made me understand" maan smiled slighty seeing her pouting in anger n asking him questions for the 1st tym like a true wifey, he smiled his efforts are making her open up to him slowly atleast. He hugged her tightly n kissed her shoulder once again n spoke "do u know what u are behaving like a typical wifey" geet looked at him after parting her lil to him, when he smiled n pecked her lips leaving geet in pools of thoughts which broked by maan's word "u know what m loving this side of my wifey" n onces again pecked her lips but that turned into a passionate kiss of promise n taking her pain. He left her when felt breathless n kissed her eyes n drinking the tears, which sent shivers in geets spine. She hide herself in maan's neck. He smiled at her gesture n spoke "u felt some difference geet, on which geet looked at his eyes not getting his meaning. He softly spoke "when we kissed in delhi, we kissed for almost 15mins n today u was breathless in only 5 mins." Geet was still not getting him properly when maan said "ur illness is now taking toll on ur health and u r not allowed to lift heavy things or we are not allowed to be physically close during ur treatment which will make u more weak, I shouted on u while u was carrying kids becoz they are healthy kids and u was carrying both same time, this is not at good for ur health it will make u tired nd it all can increase ur breathing which can lead u too soo many complications geet and now I cant take risk with ur health geet" hearing this all geet eyes filled with tears n she spoke softly n hide herself in his warmth when maan spoke "plzz jaan tum mujhe sorry mat bolo its me who should ask sorry its due to me u feel insecure about kids, but I promised u geet I will not let u cry more I will fill the gap of our relationship, make u trust me love me n more over secured with me its promised from heart n kids they are ur more than me they will always will be always urs.

They spend more time in each others arms n then maan told her to wake kids n made them drink milk n hers too n get ready for her 1st appointment in hospital on which Geet asked worriedly "Bache akele kaese rahege" maan smiled n replied " they wont be alone, they are gng with us okh n don't worry everything will be alright n kissed her forehead. Both went n did their work n then get ready did bfast n all four went to hospital.


Edited by geetsmile - 10 years ago
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Part 38

They reached hospital lil. Early,but before entering in hospital maan took geet n kids in a house near hospital. It was beautiful house which was hired by maan soo that he can check on kids and geet too. He asked geet to come with him 1st she was confused seeing them entering unknown house, she waited till door open, to her utter surprise when gate was opened there was km's most trusted servant Nakul who was maan's personal servant. He smiled seeing geet n kids n wished geet on which she just nodded whereas kids shouted "natull unttel" nakul smiled at kids asked "kaese hai baby n baba" both smiled at nakul n said "theeekth" he smiled n welcomed all inside the house but suprise was still not over for geet, maan held her from shoulder n both came inside together n came in living room which brought tears in geet's eyes seeing them standing near her after a long , see ran in their arms n cried her heart out n complained "y u left me there alone dadi maa, i missed u soo much" dadi maa kissed her forehead n wiped her tears consoled her n said "sorry baccha really sorry" but both ladies cried her heart out. When in past dadi n dadu had returned from their haridwar yatra they got the one of the biggest shock of life that their maan did that to his wife, they were angry on him n decided to leave km once again but aniee stopped them n said they needed to her for the sake of kids as they need someone's care which she didn't accept from tara n sneha n she was unable to give her full tym to them as disha is also small n she was not quite well that time. These things made dadi n dadu to leave their anger n stay with maan to take care of kids which was needed soo much that time. Back to present dadu voice made both ladies to look at him "hum v yah ape hai, humse nahi miliega geet bahu" geet smiled to hear bahu from dadu, he is the only to call her bahu otherwise dadi to call her beta no bahu n geet loved to hear this from dadu. He caressed her head and hugged her 1st n he too asked forgiveness when geet nodded in no from them.

she covered her head from dupatta n bend to take blessing on which dadi stopped her this tym geet pouted n said "that tym i was pregnant thats y u stopped me but not today i will take ur blessing n u have to give this time." Dadi smiled at her childness n said "ok this tym i will not happy" geet smiled widely n touched both dadi n dadu feets n they blessed her heartily. All sat together whereas geet was sitting in between dadi n dadu smilingly and asked "aap yaha kaese aae" on which dadu replied "bahu maan called us her to be with u n kids" geet smiled at maan when dadu once again asked lil. Loudly "where are two naughty kids of mine" hearing dadu voice both came out running from one room shouting "big daaadu" dadu smiled to seeing their shouting n both jumped on him n kissed his checks either side then seeing dadi maa beside their mumma they went towards dadi shouting once again "big daddiii" dadi smiled n kissed their cheeks. They laughed n shouted n jumped on sofa itself, but once again they was about to run when geet voice caught their attention who was calling them "mithi ammy come hear babies" both came near their mumma when geet said "did u both touched the feet of ur big dadi n dadu" both nodded -ively, she smiled n said camly "its bad manner babies chalo touch their feet n take blessing then go to play" they smiled n touched their big daadu and big daddii feet n went away running once again.

Whereas dadi smiled n thought "they never told them to touch their feet but geet told them, it is correctly said more than a mother nobody can teach her child and today their mother is teaching them basic of life to them." dadi thoughts were broken by maan's word "geet we should move towards hospital its ur appointment time" geet nodded when dadu said "m too coming with u too n savitri u be with kids okh" savitri nodded at him n patted geet head n said "don't worry everything will be fine" geet nodded her head n went towards hospital with maan n dadu, dadu was moving in front while maaneet were together when maan slowly slipped his fingers between geet, she looked at him, maan smiled at her n consoled her with his eyes movement n clutched her hand tightly n geet to held him, this was the 1st tym geet was moving with maan for her checkup not alone, there was some type of satisfaction on her face. They confirmed their appointment n went in doc. Chamber where doc. Was waiting for them. He smiled at them n greeted, dadu n maan to greeted them but geet silently sat beside maan still holding his hand.

Doc. Checked her all reports n started asking some questions, geet was answering them silently, then he prescribed some test to geet n told to go through these test 1st then he will decide how to start her treatment, all nodded n went toward other section of hospital where geet went through all the test prescribed then all came back homs as results were coming tomm. N they have once again appointment tomm. Before leaving doc.gave some advice n diet plan for geet to be followed. All came back after 3-4 hrs to home all tired n geet was looking lil. Tired n exhausted due to different tests.

Maan help her in waking n bring her in home, dadi was waiting for them but seeing tired face she didn't asked any question just ordered maan to take her in room, maan to scooped her this tym in her arms as she don't have energy to walk more n bring her in room n make her lye on bed properly n removed her shoes n covered her with comforter n caressed her face. Dadi came with a glass of milk full of dry fruits and some fruits for her asked her to take them but geet nodded her head in no but one stern look from dadi n maan made her node in yes them maan helped her in sitting comfortably on him, n made her drink milk 1st then gave her fruit plate but she made face n said "i don't want to eat this plz dadi maa" dadi sat beside her n patted her hair lovingly n said "but u need energy n these fruits will give u energy" but once again geet made face n said " i want to eat panner paratha" dadi n maan smiled at her when geet continued "i miss it dadi maa bana do na plzz, aapke hath me mumma ke hath wala taste h or bht din ho gae h maine panner paratha nahi khaya hai plzz" dadi smiled n cupped her face n said "1st eat some fruits i will make for u okhh" geet nodded happily n started eating some fruits n dadi went smiling from there.

(panner partha wala incidence yaad hai kisi ko yah bhul gae, i think bhul gae ho gae let me remind u all, when dadi dadu entered in this ff that tym 1st tym geet went downstairs for bfast that time she have told its her fav.)

Maan made her eat more as she was making faces in 2-3 only n said "geet if u will eat all then i will bring ice-cream today for u" geet smiled widely asked "sachii" maan nodded his face n said "but u 1st finish ur fruits" geet accepted n had all fruits. After having fruits she asked "maan ji bacche kaha hai dikh nahi rahe hai" maan replied "maine v nahi dekha hai geet, tum aram karo mai dekh ke aata hu okh" he made her lye once again n went to check them n find them sleeping in dadi maa's room n dadu was sitting there with them. He went once again to his room to find geet to sleeping, he settled beside her n caressed her face n smiled n went to once again in past.

Precap - from next part some past too... or i can say will give full past then only present

I will try to give 3-4 updates more as my mind is now running on track now after long tym...lolzzz pure old update padhne pade mujhe iske lie.

But m really sad with the response i will give next update after 150 likes only. If anyone has lost interest then say me happily but i want response this time who all read silent readers plzz like n comment n plzz no more 2-3 words comment becoz it make me feel update is not gud i know i m not regular as all writers but m bindded in my college lyf still i will try to finish this ff this year only i cant promise for next year soo plzz give some response

Thanks for my all readers who always encourage me loved all the comments but unable to reply from phone now to charu dii is posting updates for me.

If likes n comment will be fulfilled i promise to give another update tomm. N i will really give.

Edited by geetsmile - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi dear! hw r u? Thanks 4 updating! terrific emotional update! beautifully written! Maan's inners thoughts well portrayed! Geet gng 2 hospital n she is scared! Maan tensed as to hw he will b able to handle the kids n Geet! Annie calls n says Arjun will b der! Maan gets milk 4 Geet n kids n coffee 4 him! Maan shouts her seeing her carry the kids! Geet cries n assumes he didn't want her near the kids! Maan holds n explains wt he sed! he says sorry! her helath is worsening! she needs to b careful! update soon
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Geet still insecure abt kids & even lil bit sterness frm Maan makes her scared ..bt i liked it that both slowly opening up & sharing their feelings ..
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Fantastic Update

I really liked how Maan takes time now to explain to Geet and he also knows that he had hurt her in the past so her insecurities about the kids are still there .
When Maan told Geet about not carrying the kids she was hurt again thinking he does not want her near the kids or she should not carry them but Maan made her understand and that was awesome .
But what made Maan turn into this good husband suddenly , he always hated Geet and when she was in hospital he read her diary and then we learned about certain of his thoughts but still what had caused him to behave with Geet in that manner and now where is Sameera because he did love her as he had once also in front of Geet told Sameera that .
every action of Maan's previously and now makes no sense is it because Geet was in hospital and he had to be with her at Arjun's house but still that is not reason something must have happened that changed Maan

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