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Part 35
Present
Maan came near bed n slept his side while hugging misti, but the pain he gave to geet is past was too much, he know his only a mistake broke his house, his life, made his kids motherless, he did heartless act n now he need to mends every damn things to make geet and babies happy, give them his full tym, care and most importantly love which geet have missed in her life. He took gee than which was resting on kids n kissed her n promised to be with her from now on. He once again drifted to past the black day of their life.
Past
After arohi went from room, maan looked at kids n caressed their head lovely n patted them so that they can sleep peacefully. Whereas somewhere in temple geet was still crying and wanted to run n cocoon her babies in her arm n made them sleep by singing lullaby for them. But her condition was getting worse due to continues crying and fever and the wheatear was also chilly outside that was also not helping. Whereas arjun was searching for geet, he know she don't have anyone n she needs her brother now, he was searching for her madly in every corner and was passing from same temple n heard some noise n thought to check if geet is also there or not, when he went inside he saw geet was unconscious there n ranting only mere bache. Arjun went toward her n took her head in his lap n patted her check but there was no response from her at last he carried her in his arm n took her to hospital where doc. Checked her n informed that she is suffering from viral fever n in some shock. They have given her seductive to sleep peacefully. Arjun went in the room n caressed her head n saw tears stricken face n the only two words she was saying mere bache. His heart cried to see her in that state, she was alone but never this much broken, he have seen her happy with her kids, he have seen her laughing whole heartly with them, now he can understand what she is gng through, in that small age, he have seen a caring mother in her, dng every single things for her kids n now she was thrown out from them, separated from her have hearted her too much, broken her. Some tears dropped from his eyes n he took out his phone n informed that he got geet n in which state she is.
Aniee was truely helpless she cant go to geeet as mithi n ammy to will need her as shew know maan is not that much cabale of being taking caring of two kids alone, how much she hate her brother but she cant overlook the kids who too are suffering from fever and someone to take care of them. She prayed to god to take care of geet n asked arjun to be with her.
Days were passing n geet was once recovering but once again went into isolate world, the day when she gain her consciousness, the only thing she asked from arjun was about her kids n cried her heart out to let her meet or atleast see her babies, otherwise she will die, she didn't told him that handas didn't alloweded her to stay with them but in somewhere in deep of heart she wanted her papa to be her side, keeping his hand on her head n just saying "m with u beat" which she always wanted to hear in her life but she know this cant be possible in her this life. Arjun was feeling too helpless to see her crying bitterly and to calm down her he said he will make her see her kids. On which geet asked between her hiccups "sachi" on which arjun nodded n asked her sleep becoz he know she needs rest n he promised that he will make her see kids in evening.
Whereas maan was spending his full tym with kids, pampering them, playing with them but still kids were gloomy n searching for their maa and maan was trying to divert their mind to him, but he cant take the place of geet for them, he was not there in this 6 months continuously with kids so kids are not that much attached with him. Maan was spending time with them playing with them and taking care of them n he was not leaving them alone for a sec too.
Whereas aniee was waiting for time when maan leave them alone for a sec and aniee make geet see kids as promised by arjun. N somewhere geet was waiting impatiently for seeing her babies.
Present
It was new morning, mithi woke up 1st n saw trio sleeping peacefully, she is in the protective arms of her father and ammy was sleeping half on geet.
She pouted seeing all sleeping n shook maan to wake up n feeling soft hands patting him, he woke up n saw his pari pouting cutely, maan embraced her more to him n rubbed his nose on her cheek n asked "pari uth gae itni jaldi" on which mithi pouted n said "papa mumma n ammy etill tleeping" maan smiled n said "lets wake them up okh" on which mithi gave full smile, n maan murmured something in her ear, she nodded n started mission waking her lazy bhai n mumma. Maan took ammy in his arms n wake him slowly by patting him 1st he was irritated n was snuggling more in maan to sleep more but maan murmured slowly in his ear "baby wake up sona, don't u wanna to wake up mumma" hearing this he opened his one eye n looked towards geet who was sleeping peacefully n smiled n nodded.
Kids n maan slowly came near geet n sat in circle n trio started showing kisses on her face n hands. Geet stirred lil n open her eyes slowly to only see the most beautiful moment of her life, her love, her jaans were all beside her n showering her with morning kiss. She smiled n was about to seat when maan helped her n sat lil. Behind her to support her as she is still weak. She smiled
n kept her head on maan's shoulder n make both cuties seat in her laps n kissed them on which maan pouted n said "mumma meri kissi" on which kids laughed n geet was shy n blushed but she slowly kissed his cheeks making him smile broadly. They all sat there for some time, enjoying togetherness, hearing babies' cute talks n asking maan take them out n play in garden with their mumma, Both maaneet nodded. After spending some tym maan asked geet to freshen up, geet nodded n woke up from bed, when ammy n mithi too tagged them with their mumma n asked her to make them fresh up too. She smilied happily as these were the moments she always wanted to live, to make her kids change, bath them, make them eat. Maan smiled n said " u 3 get fresh up, m gng to look after breakfast" kids shouted in joy when maan came near geet n asked "what would u like to have in bfast" for a sec geet was stunnded speechless, she don't know how to demand anything from him, as she was not habituated of these things. Maan understood her hesitation and said "tell me geet, i know i have never asked ur opinion but today wanted to cook for my wife n our kids, their fav." Geet smiled n some tears drop from her eyes, when maan hold her shoulder n said "bht roe lia gee tab ek din v tumhe rone nahi duga, i want to give all the happiness that u deserved long back but unable to give u, plzz geet" geet smiled n hugged him and said "i will eat anything u will cook happily" maan smiled at his cute wify n said "but didn't u wanted to have something spcl." On which geet nodded no, then cutely said "i wanted to have ur fav. Food, will u cook that for me" maan was delighted hearing her n nodded n kissed her forehead
n went out whereas geet went in washroom to help kids.
Geet and kids came in open kitchen of their house which faces pool, and found maan cooking for them, geet made kids seat on chairs n them gave them milk which maan have kept on counter for them, n geet. Then she went near maan to help him, but what she saw made her eyes teary, she hugged maan n sobbed in his arm, the only thought that was running in her mind was that he made her fav. Dish, which her mumma used to make for her, she cried n cried when maan patted her back n ruffled her hairs to calm her down n spoke "i didn't make this things to make u cry jaan, i wanted to see u happy" on which geet said "nobody did this things for me after mumma left me, i miss my mumma, i miss her maan ji" maan understood her pain, kids to came near her n hugged her leg seeing their mumma crying they started asking "mumma tya hua, tu roe rahi ho aap" maan spoke in geet ears lovingly "geet babies are too crying seeing u crying see jaan, n calm down i can understand what u feel" geet wiped her tears n looked at kids n knelt down till there level n said "bacha see mumma no crying, soo babies too no crying chalo chalo smile" she tickle them to make them smile, maan hugged her n said sweetly "u seat with them dear, i m just coming after getting freshup then we all will have bfast together" geet smiled n nodded.
After maan went, geet sat with kids n thought about her life how much pain she have seen, n now getting this happiness she is unable to take it, seeing maan loving side, doing everything that she always dreamed are smoothing the pain which she is bearing from childhood but still she want to know y did maan did that things in past.
Precap - pata nahi
I wrote after long tym, i don't know how this update is as i lost the sink of my story but wanted to write from last 2-3 days soo wrote plzz say me how was update, n sorry for not updating n m not gng to promise for next update, i will try just i can say that.
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