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Posted: 11 years ago
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The story starts with a girl named Antara living in Kashmir with her family. Her life takes a turn when her father dies because of a terrorist blast as a result of which her mother loses her mind. For her mother to forget memories and to become normal, they moved to Mumbai to live with her uncle. Her brother finds it difficult to adjust in a small house. One day she was saved by Raghu from a fight in the surroundings. She comes to know that he is a goon but is infatuated with him. Meanwhile, Raghu breaks one of the windows of her house and then a second one again while saving Antara. She goes to him with the bill for the entire damage and gives him an hour. After one hour she goes to him and calls him a goonda for breaking the windows which was her uncle's mehanat ki kamaayi according to her. This angers him and in this fury he goes to her house and breaks all the remaining glasses of the house leaving Antara aghast. Antara's uncle comes to know of the incident happened and he warns her to stay away from Raghu and to adjust with the surroundings. The following day her uncle was humiliated in front of the whole colony and made to say sorry to Raghu's uncle which was noticed by his wife and Antara. Grown by anger and hurt, Antara complains against Raghu to the police and was later made to back off by her uncle in order for the family to live safely. An angry Raghu locks Antara's home and goes to bar. Locked inside the house was Antara's mother shouting and crying uncontrollably as she was unable to see her daughter for a longtime. Antara's brother(Ishaan) got hurt after seeing his mother in such a state. Later Antara and uncle comes back and enters the house by breaking the door. It is now shown that the hurt Ishaan throws a stone at Raghu for making them suffer and Antara sees it from window and is shocked.Antara then goes to Ishaan and shouts at Raghu for locking the door and says that she would never say sorry for what Ishaan has done, because according to her it was right.Raghu then remembers his childhood sufferings and becomes emotional.The next morning Antara along with her uncle takes her mother to the doctor, where it is revealed that her mother is in trauma because of not accepting her husband's death and is still living in the past.Raghu tries to interact with Ishaan but Ishaan gets frightened and starts running away from him. Ishaan then jumps over the balcony boundary, meanwhile Antara arrives and sees Ishaan falling down from the balcony.Ishaan is saved by Machmach. Antara gets humiliated when Battery says that next time he will get bigger football for Raghu Bhai rather than Ishaan.Antara then slaps Raghu in front of everyone and leaves.Raghu fuming with anger stops the water supply for Antara's house and says he will starts the supply only after Antara says Sorry to him before sunset.But Antara arrives 5min late, so he denies forgiving her and ask her to come early the next day. The next day follows Antara going to Raghu for saying Sorry, but he ignores her again and again and tells her to say sorry in front of the whole society.This made Antara angry and she again yells that he is not a respectable man and do not deserve a sorry.The very next moment Raghu locks her uncle and aunt in the house and warns Antara to leave his "basti" with her family as soon as possible.His anger results in mental disturbance of Antara's mother and she begins to shout but soon is soothed by Antara and they leave.Later Machmach opens the door and starts the water supply.Saroj then goes to Raghu with the medical reports of Antara's mother and shouts at Raghu for being rude with her.She requests him to get them back as they were new to Mumbai. Meanwhile Antara with her family were sitting in a park, and Antara decides to check-in some hotels nearby. On the way, she is chased by some goons but is saved again by Raghu and they have their first romance scene in the rain. Raghu then takes everyone in his jeep but denies allowing Antara back into his colony. So Antara and Noor appa stay behind.The next morning while Ishaan was roaming around, Raghu approaches him and tries to soothe him.He reveals to Ishaan about the death of his father.This shocked Ishaan and he decides to go to Srinagar to his Papa.He leaves in a taxi, making his mother promise about not telling anyone about his whereabouts. Antara becomes aware about Ishaan's disappearance and starts yelling at Raghu again stating that he is only responsible for all this. Raghu and Antara both goes searching for Ishaan and finally found him in a restaurant. While on their way back to home, they get attacked by Shetty's goons. Raghu takes them to a garage and hides from Ramaya Shetty and other goons with Antara and Ishaan. Gradually, Raghu and Antara form a friendship through various other minor events, which usually involved Raghu helping Antara in times such as, taking her mother to the hospital for check-up and then giving her a job as Caretaker of his Daya Mai's Aayi. As the story progressed, Raghu and Antara began to start caring for each other. Antara found solace in Raghu and was able to share her sorrows towards the loss of her father. On the other hand, Raghu shared about his past and supported Antara to move ahead in life by expressing her pain and telling her that he will always be there for her.

Their friendship has now turned into a very strong bond and they have started to realise their feelings for each other subconsciously. The major twist in the show has arrived, in the name of Daya Mai who is known to be Raghus' God mother and raised him. She returned from her time in jail and has already taken a disliking to Antara, who made minor mistakes in front of her. Raghu worships Daya Mai and does as he's told but recently he has started to question the minor orders that Daya Mai gives him due to the influence of Antara. He's doing it subconsciously without realising why. This causes Daya Mai to fire Antara from her job as Caretaker and she makes the decision of sending Aaji to their "gao"(village) sends Raghu to go as well, drop her off and then come back after a day. However, Raghu had promised Antara he would be there with her to help on her Noor Apaa's wedding as she had told him that she will need him for the big day. Raghu helplessly leaves with Aaji without being able to speak with Antara. After again questioning Daya Mai's decision and failing to change her mind, Daya Mayi gets angry. On the day of Noor apaa wedding, Antara is upset of being told that Raghu had to go by Machmach, but is told Raghu will come before the start of the wedding as he promised. On reaching the Village, Raghu drops Aaji and plans to leave to come back. However, Daya Mayi calls and says to do a job which results in Raghu being late and arriving afterwards. Antara comes out to see if Raghu has arrived as she feels his presence, they both share a hug which ends in Raghu promising to never leave Antara alone again.

Rasika had poisoned the sweets which Antara made at Noor aapa's wedding to make Antara go to jail. The guests begin to shout at Antara the next day as people get unwell, from which Raghu comes to her rescue. Aaji hears from Machmach that Raghu and Antara had a small argument because of a misunderstanding and plans to bring them together. Antara and Raghu travel to a village near Delhi as planned by Aaji and they start speaking to each other again. Antara misses the bus after it stops for a break whilst Raghu was sleeping. Antara meets her friend Simran from (Kaisa Yeh Ishq Hai) and they both get kidnapped. Raghu and Rajveer rescue them and Raghu and Antara share another hug.

Aman plans to tell Raghu that he's the reason Antara's father died in a bomb blast, by writing in a letter and gives it to him.

Daya Mayi plans to get rid of Antara as she feels that Antara is a weakness for Raghu and a threat for her losing him. When everyone in the Kaul house except Ishaan leave to go out, Manohar based on Daya Mayis' orders calls 'pest control' and deliberately smokes the Kaul house to kill Antara and her family. Ishaan begins to cough and calls Antara but collapses and becomes unconscious. Antara calls Raghu for help and they take Ishaan to the hospital. Raghu calms Antara down and promises not leave her side. Ishaan makes Antara realise Raghus' importance and caring actions from which Antara remembers previous scenes where Raghu save her. Antara finally realises that she has fallen in love with Raghu.

Daya Mayi finds the letter Aman wrote to Raghu drop out of Raghus shirt pocket and reads it. Antara thinks how to tell Raghu she loves him. Raghu is all confused seeing Antara behave in an unusual way so he reaches her and asks the reason behind her behavior.Antara keeps smiling.Raghu leaves the place and meets his friend Ruskana who asks few questions about Antara and declares that they both are in love. Raghu and Antara meet each other on the street. They confess their love for each other and share a third hug. Meanwhile Daya mayi son, Satya comes home. Satya and Raghu hate each other a lot. Raghu and Antara meet each other in the night. When they hug, Daya mayi sees them. She accepts their relationship. When Satya sees Antara he falls in love with her. And he also comes to know that Raghu has a girlfriend. Satya comes to know that Antara is Raghu's girlfriend. He do conspiracy against Raghu and Antara's relationship. Raghu asks for a kiss from Antara but she runs away. Raghu and Satya have a fight because Satya says something bad about Antara. Antara tends to Raghus wounds and asks him the reason. He doesn't tell her. Raghu sees the phone which was distributed in celebration of Satya'a home coming,in Antara's hands. Antara needs to go somewhere but Raghu can't come so Satya offers to drop her. When Raghu finds out he doesn't talk to Antara. She persuades him but he doesn't listen. On dandiya night Satya is planning to reveal his love to Antara. Raghu tells Antara to give a kiss if she really wants him to talk to her. They play dandiya on the song "Aankhon ki gustakiyan...maaf ho.." Antara runs upstairs and Raghu runs after her.They get really close and he is about to kiss her. Raghu and Antara kisses while Satya watches them holding Antara's dupatta.He plans to defeat Raghu by insulting him in a five star hotel in front of Antara. He does that but it doesn't care Antara. When Raghu and Rukhsana go to the bathroom Satya holds Antara's hand. Rukhsana sees this. When they go home Antara tells Satya that she will go with Raghu. Satya takes her to an isolated place and orders her to leave Raghu. When he touches her Raghu beats him.

Rukhsana soon realizes she has also fallen in love with Raghu but has to hide it because rantara are together! Satya takes Advantage of this and tries to make her on his side and separate them but rukhsana doesn't agree. Soon Aman is kidnapped bu Daya Mai.

Rantara wedding is fixed and the arrangements are going on. The kaul family have a little problem trying to get Mamaji's consent. But finally raghu gets his consent. Soon it is the day of the Engagement and Raghu finds the letter Aman has written to him and is heart broken he tells Daya Mai about it and says he will not get married and will tell antara the truth but mai stops him. and tells him to get marries.

On the day of the engagement Raghu is very queit and is very upset antara notices this. on the other hand satya mixes bhaang in the sweets and feeds them to rukhsana and raghu so they can have sex. but is unsuccessful. He takes raghu to KM and leaves him there and tries to find rucksana but raghu calls antara and tells her to come to KM and they meet up and are talking. Rucksana see's them and is upset and leaves. They both than get romantic and have pre-marital sex. Satya finds out about rantara in there and is really angry. On the other Raghu is upset about having it because of the mistake he had previously commited and he stops talking to antara. Antara gets upset knowing this. The next day is karva chaut and antara keeps a fast for raghu. Satya tells antara it will be only him who will break antara's fast.

Soon raghu realizes he is wrong and heads for home. in the basti the moon has raised and all the women are breaking there fast only antara hasn't. soon raghu is on the road when the road is blocked he sees some goons in front of him laughing. He gets of his jeep and gets ready to fight but is hit on the head from behind, he is than beaten up and left on the floor, the goons get the gift raghu has brought for antara and start to get personal this gets raghu angry so he gets up and fights them. Mean while in the basti antara is feeling dizzy and is about to fall when satya catches her and makes her dringk water, antara family comes out and satya leaves, later antara spits the water out of her mouth and says that only raghu will break her fast. raghu observes all this and is happy. He walks towards antara and everyone leaves leaving them two alone, they share another hug. Raghu gives antara the gifts he has bought and he breaks her fast.

The next day it is haldi and they are both getting haldi done. Later they share balcony romance as it is the last time they are going to see each other from there. Daya mai visits aman and tells him to tell antara the entire truth otherwise she will harm his family. Every one is in the wedding hall and daya mai goes and tells antara to go and seek blessing from outside and she tells a maid to take her, the maid leaves-leaving antara alone, slowly aman turns up and says he is a terrorist and that raghu has killed her father, antara is shocked, on the other hand satya is going to tell mrs.kaul the entire truth about mr.kaul but is interrupted by antara's scream.


Later antara ask raghu if he had killed her dad...WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT KEEP WATCHING DO DIL EK JAAN - MON-FRI AT 9.00PM.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nicely written yaar.!
Viewers who didnt watch it 4m beginning will b very thankful 2 u.!
Excellent work! 😊
Edited by shivam4387 - 11 years ago
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Cool... Well done yaar... N thanx fo this update... :)
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awesome hello999, yeh 999 lines mai tumney kya mast ddej story lekh diya hai...
sab suhani yadein taji ho gayi...

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