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Hey guys😛😛 Will finally update chapter 1 of AkdhaFF: Nafrat ke piche chupe hue ankahi jazbat aur chahat ka!!!
Disclaimer:They will be some scenes or dialogues which are inspired from other shows so please don't bash or hit me😆😆😆, their will be lots of grammatical mistakes as it's the first time that i am writing an FF^^ and Enjoy the story:):)😳😳😳
~Chapter 1~
Jalal has heard a lot about Jodhaa's beauty even the people of Sultanat who usually doesn't use to praise Rajputs, when it comes about Jodhaa, no one care even if she is a Rajput Princess being hit by their reactions toward her, he decided to go to see her in Amer with his own eyes with his faithful minister Atgah Sab!!!!
Voice over: Kismat aur dastaan dono saath milkar, itihas ki panu mein ek aisa prem kahani likhne jaraha hai, prem ki ek mahagatha, woh bi ek hindu Rajkumari aur ek mughal badshah ki, jise log parte rahegi, lekin kisiko bi yani dono ko bi nahi pata ki dastaan ki itni choote parne se mohobbat ki Itni bari dastaan khool jayega!!!
At the night, on their way to Amer, Jalal couldn't wait to arrive in Amer, he is impatient and so excited so he asks Atgah sab:
- Kya apne us Amer ki shehzadi ki bare mein kuch suna hai?
-Apka matlab hai huzur Rajkumari Jodhaa?
-Beshaq Atgah sab, chaliye bataye kya suna hai apne unki bare mein kyunki ap ko unki naam malum hai!!!
- Ji huzur!!!
- To farmaye!!!
- Gustaakhi maaf Shahenshah!!! Par apki iss sawal ko jawab dene se pehle hum apse ek sawal puchne ki ijazat chahti hai.
- Ijazat hai!!!
- Shahenshah Ap ko Aamer janeki wajah jan sakte hai hum?
- Zarur Atgah sab, zarur!!! Hum Amer mein kisiki noor dekhne keliye jaraha hai, jiski noor dekhne keliye sab bekabu aur betab hojati hai!!!
- Woh Rajkumari Jodhaa hai na?
- Bohot khub Atgah sab!!! He smirks and says:
- Par apko kaise pata?
- Duniya mein us shehzadi ki jaise khoobsurti nahi hai, har rajvanshiyon ka dil sirf aur sirf uskeliye darak rahi hai!!!Amer ki noor hai woh, uska chehra, roop sab kuch khuda ne hi banaya hai!!!
After this Jalal becomes more impatient and excited to reach Amer and to see Jodhaa and he smiles by thinking: "Amer ki noor ka roop hum kal hi dekhenge" and he thinks proudly that one more time no one will succeed to impress Hindustan ki shahenshah JALALUDDIN MOHAMMAD!!!
- Ap hum ijazat chahte hai Shahenshah!
- Shobha kher Atgah Sab, ache se aram kariye ga kal ki din ek naya rang layega and smirks!!!
Voice over: Jalal ko bi nahi pata ki iss din uske dastaan hamesha keliye badalne wala hai!!!
~Tomorrow Morning~
Atgah Sab and Jalal reached Amer but before they two disguised as Hindu by wearing hindu Rajvanshi dress and than they arrived near the biggest temple of Amer where hindus are celebrating Holi!!! Jalal and Atgah sab were a bit lost until they see lots of market on the other side and come near a sweet shop and ask to the shopkeeper by taking a hindu accent where they are??? He says:
- Oye ek hindu hone ki nate ap ko yeh bi nahi pata ap kaha hai aur aj ki din mein hum kis tyohar mana jata hai???
Jalal says:
- Ji hum abi abi umarkot se aya hai isliye!!!
- Acha ab samajme agaya!!! Ap log yahan Amer ki sab se bari kali ma ki mandir ki jagah par hai aur aj yahan Holi yani ki rang ki tyohar mana jata hai!!!
- Acha thike !!! Par kya ap humari ek sawal ko jawab desakte hain???
- Ji poochiye!!!
- kya ap humhe Rajkumari Jodhaa ki bare mein bata sakte hai???
- Zarur!!! Kya kahe hum apse uski bare mein, woh itni khoobsurat hai ki Rajput logo ka kehna hai: "Ap mahurat kya dekhna hai chehre to dekhliya Jodhaa ka", uski har ada aur har roop mein khoobsurti chupa hai aur..."
- Kyun rukgayi ap??? kahiye!!!!
- kehna kya hai woh arahi hai!!!!
Jalal is surprised and turn back to see but there is no one as she is running from far, jalal asks little bit annoyed:
- yeh kya mazak hai???
- mazak nahi hai, woh holi ki tyohar mein hamesha pehli hi ati hai mandir mein aur bhajan gati hai, uski awaz itni meethi hai ki sab ke hothon pe muskurahat aur sab ke dil jiti hai aur yahi raha woh!!!!
Jalal being annoyed by his nonsense says:
- kahan hai woh and angrily turn back and than he sees Jodhaa for the first time and his angry expression get erased!!!!
Jodhaa's introduction voice: "Aur jiske bina uski mohobbat hai adhoori while jodhaa is running holding in hand arti thali for puja, jiski khoobsurti chehre mehi nahi man mein bi basti hai while she is running toward the temple."
Jalal is deeply mesmerized by her beauty, for the first time someone succeed to impress him!!!!She is wearing a white ghagra choli, kamarbandh around her waist and has made a braid with her long black hair which is laying infront of her shoulder, she has worn gold jhumkas and her hair which is on the side of her ears and forhead is blowing by the wind same with Jalal for him: time has stopped, he has stopped breathing and the whole world becomes silencious and he can see only her!!!
Her maids are following her by saying :
- Jodhaa rukjaiye, saans to lene dijiye hume!!!
Jodhaa sweetly laughs while Jalal is continously gazing at her romantically, she says :
- Jaldi aao na tum sab!!!
- Jodhaa apki bapu sa ne kaha thana ki humhe apki saath jana hai apki surakshat keliye warna koi bi ap par...
- Aj khushi ki din hai, isliye tyohar mana jaraha hai to iss khushi mein koi bi bure bat nahi kahegi aur koi bi hum par umli nahi uthayegi hum Amer aur unki logoko apna sa manti hai aur woh bi humhe unki apni manrahi hai to aisa kuch nahi hoga aur chalo mandir mein as she runs, her maids follow her while running fast, her kamarbandh falls but she doesn't notice it!!! Jalal sees it, he comes and pick it up from the ground by recalling her face and thinks: "Duniya ki sab se khoobsurti aur kheemti chand yahan Amer mein chupa hai aur humhe pata bi nahi!!!"
He approaches the temple and is about to enter to see her once again!!!🤗
Precap: Jalal gives the kamarbandh back to Jodhaa 😉 and Akdha's first eyelock❤️❤️❤️
P.s: Ok guys, I am ready for your stones, eggs and tomato as i know it's such a flop FF but even please do hit likes 😆😆, comments and share your views😛😛🤗!!!! SHOULD I STOP IT OR CONTINUE AS I DON'T WANT TO WAISTE NEITHER YOUR TIMES AND NEITHER MINE 'S^^ WITH MY NONSENSES!!!!!
INDEX :
CHAPTER 1 : page 1
CHAPTER 2 : page 4
CHAPTER 3 : page 7
CHAPTER 4 : page 10
CHAPTER 5 : page 13
CHAPTER 6 : page 14
*NEW PROMO* : page 15
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