RagNa FF:stay with me forever ( part 6 on page 16)Discontinued

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Hi everyone 😃 this is my first attempt so please forgive my grammatical mistakes 😆 So here it goes...

PART-1


It was a cold night of November as she walks straight down the street. Kalpana, a young and beautiful girl with a golden heart was thinking about her worst nightmare, happened 3 months ago.The nightmare that scares her soul which make her heart filled with fear .
But she have to move on in her life coz now she is a free bird with happiness all around.She can do anything whatever she like ,no here to stop her and made her a caged bird.Her family is her strength no one has the right to harm her family as she thought that and murmured something in her mind,she heard some kind of footsteps behind from her but the noise of the footsteps was quite familiar to her but the similar noise made her heart again filled with fear but may be it was just an illusion or it someone else's footsteps! But as she made her steps faster the sound was coming towards her more than faster she walks.That made her soul more scared but after sometimes later with lots of courage she tried to look back but as she looks back, she saw...!



So this is my first ff 😃 please let me know how it is and please hit the like botton if you like it and if you want pm 😊

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Short Update
Still I Luved It 😊

I Want Long Updates From U...😳


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Jo hukum mere aaka 😆 still glad you like it n tomorrow's will be long and also regular updates 😉
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short update but it is very interesting
now waiting to find out about what comes next
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Awsome.
But Please Write Longer Updates. (:
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Short update and very intresting will wait for next update 👍🏼
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Thank you so much guys for liking it and next update is coming in one hour 😉
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Hey guys can I write this ff in Hindi plz means I will write in English but the language is Hindi regular English language will be there plz this is an request

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