SS - Liberation updated Ch 4&5 on 29th Nov - Page 7

Originally posted by: punam2712

it sent shivers up my spine

it is dark and an untouched topic

hats off to you to touch it even

but one question - the first two chapters and this are they in the same time frame or past and present mixed

Originally posted by: tanuja.siri

Even though i knew and was prepared to read this but still when i was reading it sent a chill in my spine. Many child homes are in this state and many times no saviour would turn out to help them...

Originally posted by: bikeshsngh03

This update pricked my heart. I was feeling so sorry for Rishab.
But alas it is a evil world where we live in our own bubble oblivious to danger because we have our loving parents to protect us.

Originally posted by: mansiahmed

Omg wat is that rishabh n madhu gone through😭.wow fabulous job n icely written👏

Originally posted by: sweetysour

Awesome concept...feeling bad for kids...hope that b*****d gets a guud punishment for all his wrong doings death would be easy something like dying everyday its not just a crime its a sin a non forgivable sin...ur writing is just fantabulous...

Originally posted by: Desire6

🤗 Luvu wen I said dat am on for it...I thought it would be some dark story...
but wen I read jus felt terrible. .it jus sent chill In my spine yaar...
Good I wanted you to connect with the story... I want you to not only sympathise with Rishab and Madhu but empathise with them...

it really is an untouched topic..hats off u brought out ..
Hey did u showd past n present thru both chapters. .

Girl... you know me.. hopefully!!! I like to go where no one has gone before... It sounds like I am promoting Star Trek here - To boldly go where no man has gone before... or something like that...

Anyway you know how much I like PSA's Public Service Announcement... This is something like that...

just a doubt how old are dis kidss??

Around 8 yrs old...
Wen I was readin wat Rishabh, underwent. it prickd feeln terrible...thnking...it is a sum cruelest reality of dark world...
Yes it is cruel.. It robs the children from their innocence.. their childhood and gives them a lifetime of grief.. and this grief can be manifested in terrible ways.. something I am going to explore in my story..
reading both chaps I thnk dey both hav managd to run nd leavn 2gthr...lov each other bt nt able to overcome past..
a wild guess

the mechanics of it is yet to be decided and will see to it as the story proceeds.. And I am soooper happy that you are quite the chatter box... it makes me happy to read your comments...

muuuaaahhh..

waiting for next part


P.S. I AM NOT A SILENT READER..I AM A FULL TO CHATTER BOX...HEHEH 🤣