tere liye jaan de bhi sakta ho aur le bhi sakta hoon last part@pg20 SS

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It was bright morning in the Kashmir. Antara was standing in her gardern and thinking Y she went ot Mumbai. Y she met with Raghu Y she fallen in love with him.HE is murderer . he has killed her father her heart was crying suddenly ishu come andsays- Didu kya kar rahi ho aaj ka newspaper pada kya


antara- nahi koi kuch khas baat

ishu- haan didu who Raghu bh par article print hua hai

antara- ishu tum usko bh bolna band karo tumhe pata hai na usne hamare papa ko maara hai aur phir yahan ka sab se bada terrorist ban gaya hai. .aur ek terrorist se hamara koi rista nahi

ishu left the gardern as he knows her didu is very much hurt after the shadi drama. how Raghu could leave her in middle of marriage.by giving one letter he has written the truth of papa death. he left Mumbai. didu really miss him. ishu thought in his mind.

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after leaving ishu antara pick up the paper from table and read the article that Raghu is coming to Srinagar . For what purpose no body knows.

antara thought - Raghu tumkya sochte ho tumhare anne se mein shadi nahi karo gi . haan mein shadi kaogi us satya se. kal meri bharat hai Raghu aur mujhe pata hai tum yahan is shadi ko rukne aa rahe ho lekin tum kamyab nahi hoge


NEXT DAY

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All kaul house was decorated as antara was getting married today. mama mami ishu noor aapa, arshad miyan all were busy in preparation. suddenly Ph ring. Mrs geeta kaul attended the Ph

DM- hum Daya Mai bol rahe hai hum log Srinagar paunch gaye hai

Geeta- ji Namaste . ji mein abhi arshad aur antara ke mama ko wahan hotel mein bhejti ho . aap log ready ho jaye. kuch der mein apko bharat le kar aana hoga


DM- sahib ready ho jao aaj tumhe tumhari antara milne wali hai

Satya- aayi pehli bar aise laga ki tum meri aayi ho

DM- beta jo bhi maine kiya tumhare liye kiya. us Raghu ko agar mein bolti antara ko chodne woh kabhi nahi chodta lekin meri ek chal se sab thik ho gaya

Satya- Mai tumne chal kya chali thi

DM- bte tum aam khao gutli mat gino

satya get up and start getting Ready.


DM phone ring

DM- hello

RAaghu- Mai apne mujhe pechana

DM- Raghunath

Raghu- haan mai mein wahi apka ek Payida jo apko bhagwan samjhta tha

DM- Raghu tum kya keh rahe ho mujhe kuch samaj mein nahi aa raha hai

Raghu- main apka qaidi Aman kahan hai. woh mere saath hai . ab apko samaj mein aaya mein kya bol raha ho

DM- tum mere kuch nahi bigad paoge Raghu nath

Raghu- MEin apka nahi bigaro ga bas ek chitwani de raha ho Ms. Kaul ke ghar par bharat mat jaana koiki apki dulhan wahan nahi hogi

DM- matlab

Raghu- apki dulhan mere pass hai


DM got surprised and see satya who was very happy for wedding


30 Min before


antara was sitting inher room in her bridal dress. She was not happy but because of her family sake she was doing this marriage. she don't want ki satya should harm his mama mami. how after cmng to Kashmir satya use to cal her and ask her to maary othr wise he will disturb the life of her mama mami.

so atlast she get ready for this marriage.


suddenly she hear one noise in the attached terrace of her room.


she open the door of terrace and found on person there. she asked who are you

but suddenly that man kept handkachief in her nose and she fainted .


At Raghu place

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Raghu was seeing her beauty. in last one year her beauty has not change. she was luking more preety in this bridal dress. after one year he was seeing her. when he left Mumbai he has not met her. he was not having guts to meet her but he has promised himself antara will be his only and so he never allowed in Mumbai and as well as in Kashmir to come near to her. he tried to contct her many times but she refused to talk her.


he came out of his thought when he see antara is trying to open her eyes.

antara was slowly opening her eyes. slowly slowly she able herself to sit. she tried to recognize the face which was surrounding her .

suddenly she saw one face and she was surprised to see him . it was Raghu


Part 2 @pg3

part 3@page6

part 4@pg 7

part 5 @pg 10

part 6 @pg 13

part 7@pg 14

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Part 8@pg 18
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow superb yaar...pls.continue😛
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OMG wow...aur woh ending ek dum mast thi...hayee i know u just updated but guess what?? Update soon plz😆
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kya kamal ka likhaa hain tumne dr...dil khush kar diya...👏👏
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superb os
please continue
i'm eager to read more
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Finally ek SS 😃 Itne din se forum ke saare writers gayab ho gaye hai yaar, mujhe itne pangs aa rahe the ki koi toh ek OS/SS/FF likhde 😊 Kisine haal filhaal me updates bhi nahi diye! 😭 So first, thank you for writing this 🤗
Aur jo aapne likha hai, kya likha hai, wah wah 👏 Raghu ne hi antara ko kidnap kar dala 😲 Kal ke episode me satya ne kidnap kiya... uss maha episode me DM ne kidnap kiya tha... sab mere antara ko kidnap karne me hi lage huye hai yaar 😆 Ab jaldi se ek update bhi de do 😃
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Originally posted by: MysteryLove

Finally ek SS 😃 Itne din se forum ke saare writers gayab ho gaye hai yaar, mujhe itne pangs aa rahe the ki koi toh ek OS/SS/FF likhde 😊 Kisine haal filhaal me updates bhi nahi diye! 😭 So first, thank you for writing this 🤗

Aur jo aapne likha hai, kya likha hai, wah wah 👏 Raghu ne hi antara ko kidnap kar dala 😲 Kal ke episode me satya ne kidnap kiya... uss maha episode me DM ne kidnap kiya tha... sab mere antara ko kidnap karne me hi lage huye hai yaar 😆 Ab jaldi se ek update bhi de do 😃

chinta mat karo next week you will get couple of updates from me!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: alishamerchant

chinta mat karo next week you will get couple of updates from me!😳


Thank you Alisha 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ahhh what a great start... Im loving it already.. Awww Antara is marrying for the safety of her family.. Haaaye Raghu is back.. For his Antara.. Awesome..!! Continue soon.. Great concept.. Finally a kashmir track 😃
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Wowww! As i told u before it is awesome! Ur imagination is very good and ur way of sequence it clears each and every picture in mind...update soon...and thanks 😊

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