tere liye jaan de bhi sakta ho aur le bhi sakta hoon last part@pg20 SS - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow raghu kidnapped antara i hope ki to ab kbi use apne aap se juda na hone de...lovely update continue soon n pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow awesum loved it very interesting raghu kidnap antara wow :) pls updte soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh teriii...kitna pyara th...yar jaldu se mila do inko
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb yaar...plz update soon...abhi se next part padhne ka mann kar raha hai😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank you all of you for your liking my writng . Here is my second Part
antara was surprised to see Raghu. she become pale because of angry and scare.
Raghu was coming near to him and she was trying to move back in bed but she was unable because till now she was not in her proper conscious .
Raghu- lo pani pee lo tumhe theek lage ga
antara- nahi peena mujhe aur mujhe jaane do . ghar par sab mere intezzar kar rahe hoge
Raghu- tum kahin nahi jaa rahi ho
antara- tum hote kaun ho mujhe rukne wale. kaun ho tum mere
Raghu- sab kuch
antara was shocked to listen this and they had a mahi moment.
antara - Raghu yeh tum haq kho chuke ho . tum mere papa ke khatil ho aur jis din tum mujhe akele chod kar aaye gaye the us din se hamara rista khatam .
Raghu- maine tumhare papa ko nahi maara . mein khud us halat ka saazish mein fass gaya ho aur..
antara- mujhe tumhari baat nahi sunani and she was about to leave the room suddenly Raghu grab her hand tightly.
antara got angry and said- mere haath chodo . mujhe nafrat hai tumhari chune se bhi.
Raghu- nahi chu ga tujhe lekin tu is room se bahar kahin nahi jaogi
antara- yeh tumhara basti nahi hai jahan ke tum bhagwan ho . yeh mera Kashmir hai jahan mujhe rukne ka haq nahi hai tumhe
Raghu- tum par mere haq pehle bhi tha aaj bhi hai aur hamesha rahega.
In between antara was trying to free her hand but she was unable.
she loose her temper and given one slap to Raghu
all men standing their point their gun to antara
antara got scared and hold Raghu hand tightly and try to hide herself Raghu's behind and closed her eyes
Raghu was surprised to see and suddenly start smiling that when ever antara feel scared she always hold his hand like that and try to hide behind him. he was happy to know that antara still believe that Raghu will not alow anything to harm her.
Raghu by eyes ask every 1 to put down the gun and to leave the room
after leaving evry body Raghu turn to antara side
Raghu- antara ankhe kholo
antara slowly open her eyes and see no body in the room except Raghu.
she was little bit relief but suddenly feel that she is holding Raghu hand. she left her hand and start crying
Raghu- hey Ms. kaul dekh tu ro nahi pls maine kaha na ro mat tujhe rote dekh kar meri jaan nikla jati hai
antara- Raghu aaj sab kuch badal gaya hai . pehle mein tumhare saath apne ko safe mehsus karti thi lekin ab mujhe tumse hi darr lagta hai. dekha kaise abhi sab ne mujh par gun uttaya. koi Raghu koi tumne sab kuch badal diya
Raghu ne kuch nahi badla. AAJ BHI WOH TUMHARE LIYE JAAN DE BHI SAKTA HAI AUR JAAN LE BHI SAKTA HAI
Raghu and antara both see towards the voice
it was non other aman and machmach
antara- machmach tum yahan tum to mai ke saath mera barat le kar aane wale the . kya Raghu ne tum ko bhi kidnap kar liya?
machmach- nahi re meri yedi behna. mein tu hamesha se bhai ke saath tha.bhai se door tha lekin bhai ke kareeb tha
antara- to tum bhi bhai ke saath mil kar mere kidnapping karaya
machmach- nahi bhai ke saath mil kar tujhe us janwar se bachaye jo srif tumhe taklif dene ke liye tumse shadi kar raha haiantara- kitna bhi takleef de lekin jo takleef Raghu ne mujhe diya hai woh takleef ke aagey sab fika hai
Raghu- antaraaa maine koi gunah nahi kiya ahi maine tumahre papa ko nahi maara hai. tum is baat ko samjho.
antara- tumhare chilane se saachai nahi badlegi Raghu nath naik
Raghu- srif Raghu nath hai mere naam
antara- haan jin logo ne tumhe pala ab tumhe unka naam jodne mein bhi takleef hai. sahi kehta hai satya tum kisi ke nahi ho sakte , jab tumhara matlab nikal jaye tu tum samne wale ko chod dete ho jaise tumne mujhe choda us raat saath bitane ke baad.
Raghu- antaraaa cchup ho jao nahi tu mein
antara- nahi to mein se kya Raghu, mujhe bhi maar dalo ge mere papa jaise.
Raghu twisted her hand pineed her to the wall and seeing her angrily.
tabhi aman speek
jo khud maar chukka hai woh tumhein kya marega. uski haar saan mein tum ho antara aur isne tumhara saath kabhi nahi choda. tumahri har waqt madad kiya. aaj jo tum job kar rahi ho usme bhi Raghu ka haath hai. aaj jo tumhara bhai aaram se apne sapna pura kar raha ha criceter banana ka usme bhi Raghu ka haatha hai.jis din se Raghu tumse door hua hai utna hi woh tuse kareeb hua hai. har pal ki khabar hai tumhari zindgi ka. tumhe kya lagta hai Kashmir aa kar tumhari zindagi jo itni asani se chal raha hai woh sab itna assan tha nahi tumhare har kadam par kaatein ko chunkar alag kiya Raghu ne.
aur jo tum is par ilzam laga rahi ho daya mai se namak harami ka to suo woh daya mai hi asli khatil hai tumhare papa ke.
so guys pls like and cmnt
part -3 will be updated soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Woww!! Thanks for update...
Its so nice...gud support by aman and and mm..update sooon yr! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Perfect.. You wrote it awesomely... Kya likha hai re... I really want this to happen in our show.. so much accurate prediction that would be.. 👏 👏
update soon... 😊 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
hayeee loved it richu muaaah :) cute lovely update jaldi se next part update karna
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
Aww..shooo shweet luved ur update continue soon 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
richu next part kab tak mlga 🤣
Edited by divzz29 - 12 years ago

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