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aquagal

@aquagal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#631

UnRes!!

"Friends only" won't do with them, how hard they may try. Arnav can't see another man even sitting next to him, his possessiveness knows no bounds and Khushi can't tolerate the sight of another woman with her, even be it his fiancee.
Anjali should take a step and Manav is not wrong in asking her to take a decision. shyam is clearly just taking from her in monetary terms without giving her any love or sense of security. there is no point in sticking to a loveless marriage.
Everyone is scared of Arnav even Sheetal's friend Sahil. I wish La tells Arnav soon about the design thing lest he gets angry on Khushi for hiding it.
I love how you bring moments of jealousy, love, desire so naturally.
I loved how Arnav didn't leave her alone, keeping in mind to send NK to hospital. Sheetal & drugs!! How can Arnav be with such a spoil brat? Leave her already Arnav!

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kondhili

@kondhili

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Posted: 12 years ago

#632

Res 😊

*edited*

Kavi you enthrall me every single time with the intense chemistry that exists between arnav and khushi.

Damn they are not even touching or kissing each other but u can feel their intense longing by just a simple glance. 😳

Needless to say i loved this update. Its funny how arnav is so mad with all the men that flock around khushi but will not accept the simple fact that he can't do without khushi in his life. He has to find obscure reasons to ensure khushi's presence. 😆

After reading this update i am absolutely convinced that Arnav is with sheetal more out of obligation to her father...i can't see any other reason why a man like arnav will tolerate a fluff like sheetal in his life.

I loved the scene on the dance floor...it was just fabulous...two people who are not together but still connected to each other at so many levels. Their eyes only for each other. ❤️

Khushi can always count on Arnav to be with her at her troubled times. No surprises at the fact that he left the party to be with khushi in her hour of need.

I am glad that khushi and arnav are safe...maybe now sheetal will leave the country and go away for some time to get over the shame of an arrest.

And ya i forgot so where is Mr. Raizada taking his entire team...after all he has to do some team building exercise with his PA. 😆

Kavi was out on a vacation hence did not comment on the last update. Apologise for the same.

Looking forward to the next update as usual...

Edited by kondhili - 12 years ago

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Sj236

@Sj236

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Posted: 12 years ago

#633

Thank god! Arnav and khushi are safe :) and d last sentence is kinda ur trademarks!
I love dat sentence!
Reminds me of desert rose last chapter!
Ders sumthing damn wrong wid sahil, arnav should hav stopped her frm dancing wid him!
Den mayb she myt hav argued wid him!
D gas incident was inspired frm d panipuri incident ,ryt??? ;)
great update! Waiting for d next one!

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lostintheashes

@lostintheashes

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#634

That was intense 😳
LOVED IT! 👏

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l.savitree

@l.savitree

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#635

love this well written update

eagerly waiting for next

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Ayesha

@stunning.ayesha

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#636

Sheetal is a dayaan
Loved the update though

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riafna

@riafna

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#637

Anjali knew her marriage is not normal. She is under depression.

And her husband had no idea about the same and he never interested to take care ...

Dr. Manav is here too. Hope he will help Anjali come out from her current phase of life.

Jealous Arnav. Possessive Arnav. Protective Arnav. Caring Arnav.

His laugh. ...

Sheetal very cold.

Awesome update.

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shona136

@shona136

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Posted: 12 years ago

#638

Awesome Kavi... I truly love the slow building relationship of Arnav Khushi in this story. Theay are so aware of each other all the time...!!! So cute of arnav to come and help khushi with her buaji. and enjoying talking about gas with buaji, that was hilariousss...😆

what i enjoyed the most was that ow easily arnav said sorry to her, when he noticed khushi was crying ans thought it was because he had yelled on her earlier...Sheetal is now staring to be a pain in the ass...always behind khushi for one thing or the other... why cant she leave her alone...

i wonder how arnav will react when he comes to know that all the design were made khushi khushi and it was khushi's hard work that gained his appreciation on the dresses and not lavanya's. I now like lavanya very much. 😃

anjali and manav's conversation was very touching. i feel so bad for anjali. stuck un in a maze and not finding her way back into life. i wish to see more of manav and anjali in this story. they seem to make a promising couple since akaash payal are not there as well... excited to see how they move forward withtheir relationship. as manav says its not appropriate for him to comfort his patient, but sometimes we should overlook what's appropriate for the other and oneself... just think about self and the other one... life demands some selfishness at some point of time i guess, not in bad way but just feel how beautiful life truly is...

great update kavi... wanted to write a lot more things, but seriously got to catch up with some work... will do it in the next update hopefully..waiting for the next...hope it will be on next friday if you are not caught up with other work. otherwise we will wait with enthusiasm as always...

cheers

👏

Edited by shona136 - 12 years ago