FF:When Past Comes Calling : Chap 1 pg 5 : Who Is She ? - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was awesome! Thanks for continuing it.
Ooh so Anahita is Kumud and she is here to meet Saras!
But everyone thinks kumud is dead, I wonder what happened? Well you'll reveal it later.
Nicely written
Excited for Samud meeting!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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1st of all thank u so much 4 updating it.plz update this regulrly n dont discontinue it without giving it a proper ending excusing that there r only a few readers.This is a beautiful ff.Danny trying 2 close d company?Hop he is still -ve.He is married 2 Kumari.i'm so happy.but how did Dugfba n Guman agree 4 their marriage.i wonder.Saras had broken his ties with d vyas family.rt?Then how did he patch up with them?I thought Anahita is Kumud who lost memory n Gauri is Saras-Kumud's daughter.but this sentence confuses me.
In twenty five years of service at Chaudhry house she had seen Anahita grow from child to lovely young maiden.
How can she b Kumud if she is brought up there?Was Anahita Kumud's look alike?Waiting 4 Saras-Kumud's meeting.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

1st of all thank u so much 4 updating it.plz update this regulrly n dont discontinue it without giving it a proper ending excusing that there r only a few readers.This is a beautiful ff.Danny trying 2 close d company?Hop he is still -ve.He is married 2 Kumari.i'm so happy.but how did Dugfba n Guman agree 4 their marriage.i wonder.Saras had broken his ties with d vyas family.rt?Then how did he patch up with them?I thought Anahita is Kumud who lost memory n Gauri is Saras-Kumud's daughter.but this sentence confuses me.

In twenty five years of service at Chaudhry house she had seen Anahita grow from child to lovely young maiden.
How can she b Kumud if she is brought up there?Was Anahita Kumud's look alike?Waiting 4 Saras-Kumud's meeting.



i have given the ans, jesmine repetedly of that question in the chapter only😆...read between the lines ...the fears mrs chaudhary r a clue to it...rest i will explain in coming chapter all mysterys will be solved...yes will take up gumaan dukh baa in next chapter itself😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Well well well... Simply Nailed It..! Your so expressive and narrated very well with a lot of precision.. That's really great of you.. Great talent you've got..!! 👏

Continue it.. You will get encouragement fr sure , frm my side.! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting concept ... would love to read more ...please PM me when you will update .
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Pro-

Well well well... Simply Nailed It..! Your so expressive and narrated very well with a lot of precision.. That's really great of you.. Great talent you've got..!! 👏

Continue it.. You will get encouragement fr sure , frm my side.! 😃



will continue soon ,hope my passion keeps burning and cvs dont massacre it by killing samud
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Shanadi please continue it...I'm waiting eagerly to read next chap...it is fabulous...!!!!!

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