FF:When Past Comes Calling : Chap 1 pg 5 : Who Is She ?

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Posted: 12 years ago
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****When Past Comes Calling *****



Hello Guys this is my humble attempt to complete the incomplete love story of Saras and Kumud.

My Samud FF starts from the point where actual novel Sarswatichandra somewhat ends !


Which means after the point when Kumud asks Saras to marry her sister and herself decided to live a widowed life.


But whether Saras marries her sister or not and how destiny set them against each other again will be something u will know further in my FF


So here it goes...




A story of two souls made for each other but seemingly destined apart and decision of a little six year old angel to bring them together .

Saraswatichandra Vyas

A multimillionaire and a business tycoon in his early thirties. A suave gentleman whom the business community awes. A man sanyasi at heart and gateway between rich and poor. His passion for social responsibilities resulted in a phenomenal trend pursuing people to have better business ethics .A man lost in his past but feigning best to live the present and make better future for people around .

His work is his only solace as somebody very close to his heart told him that Sanyas is all about taking responsibilities, not running away for them. So here he was ,living in concrete jungles of Mumbai fulfilling his responsibilities as an able son and trying to make the world a better place .The life seemed a never ending pathway and he often pondered will I ever get the mukti .

Anahita Sumairjeet Singh

The only daughter of a rich landlord Sumairjeet Singh.A beautiful elegant young lady in her mid twenties who has nothing from her past but a six year old daughter Gauri . People love her for her benovalance and class.. She lives for her daughter and over protective father her only world she cares for .

There were many unanswered questions in her life that worry her sometimes but little Gauri's smile always ward them off. She is happy in her small world and loving city Palampur

But the world of Anahita is soon shaken and she crosses path with people who r key to her unanswered past .These people are strange ,conniving and manipulative.She soon realizes that she needs to save her daughter and herself from there hideous plans.

But here is an interesting twist in the tale too


Little Gauri has a dream ,she wants a Papa!


Its this desire of the little girl and some life changing events that brings Anahita, Saraswatichandra under same roof. What happens when these two meet and how there interconnected past soon unfold

Index

Chapter 1 : Who Is She ? (page 5)

Chapter 2 : Have we met Before ? (coming soon...)



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Shana

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Shana wow thats a suonds interesting...so this Anahita must be Kumud for sure hai na ??


btw my name is anahita too lol

Guari is she saras kumud daughter or from her fist marriage...now shana write it yaar i want to know what is cooking in your mind ...pls pls aagey likho ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sabse pratham vishay toh yeh hain ki aapko humaara dhanyaad!
Humare naam ka upyog karne ke liye!!

Waise I am going to play a role in bringing them together! hayyeee!! well kidding!!

Well why did u change the name to anahita?? then the couple saraHita or chandraAnah or SarasAna?? Wht would it be? well nice name!

And give the title the board of ff!! otherwise ppl will think it to be a post on dukhba or guman! :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -The_Tomboy-

Sabse pratham vishay toh yeh hain ki aapko humaara dhanyaad!

Humare naam ka upyog karne ke liye!!

Waise I am going to play a role in bringing them together! hayyeee!! well kidding!!

Well why did u change the name to anahita?? then the couple saraHita or chandraAnah or SarasAna?? Wht would it be? well nice name!

And give the title the board of ff!! otherwise ppl will think it to be a post on dukhba or guman! :P



pehle to tomboy ki bachhi like maar !!

yes i took names of two people i know very well online !! ...anahita and u gauri r both my online friends...but then i like anahita and gauri names a lot 😊...well here u r six year old dear so u can do all bekar ki chapar char lol


well i am starting my ff where the novel ends...which means after Kumud requests sars to marry her sister and herself decides lives a widowed life...and novel ends...so now i start...but whether saras marries her sister...who is Gauri...and how Kumud became Anahita are the mistries i will tackle in my FF


thats a good advice now i add that board of FF
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Posted: 12 years ago
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News and different and interesting concept :-) would love to read more, please pm me when you continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: 1D_D3-Crazy

News and different and interesting concept :-) would love to read more, please pm me when you continue



thanks dear at least u replied will pm u sure as i continue 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this is my humble attempt to complete the incomplete love story of Saras and Kumud.
really,u r gonna finish it..yohooo..plzzz do continue..i'll b more thn happy to read d "puri dastaan of saraswatichandr
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -bornalee-

this is my humble attempt to complete the incomplete love story of Saras and Kumud.
really,u r gonna finish it..yohooo..plzzz do continue..i'll b more thn happy to read d "puri dastaan of saraswatichandr



thanks for the encouragement bornalee...will write the first chapter very soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I want to read more...it sounds interesting...if u send PM's ...can u add me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Stupidcupid1234

I want to read more...it sounds interesting...if u send PM's ...can u add me



Thanks cupid...will write first chapter soon and pm u 😊

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