FF:When Past Comes Calling : Chap 1 pg 5 : Who Is She ? - Page 2

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i read it 3 times to understand what is going on n who is gauri or anhita . i dont know anything about the original story or ending . all i heard about the ending is , its sad n none of us want that to happen 😕 .

but if that happens now i know shana is here to change it 😳 . very very interesting concept n cant wait for the next update . 😃 n i hit the like button 😆

Originally posted by: shana0127

pehle to tomboy ki bachhi like maar !!

yes i took names of two people i know very well online !! ...anahita and u gauri r both my online friends...but then i like anahita and gauri names a lot 😊...well here u r six year old dear so u can do all bekar ki chapar char lol


well i am starting my ff where the novel ends...which means after Kumud requests sars to marry her sister and herself decides lives a widowed life...and novel ends...so now i start...but whether saras marries her sister...who is Gauri...and how Kumud became Anahita are the mistries i will tackle in my FF


thats a good advice now i add that board of FF

hawww!! meine maara!! lekin jab jab maarti hoon it goes to the top most part of the page mein kya karoon!! phirse maarke dekhti hoon!! ohhh accha!! theeke theeke toh apne doston ke naam liye hain!! haan haan mujhe tho chapar chapar karna pasand hain!! :P mere dston se pooch lo!!

Originally posted by: -The_Tomboy-

hawww!! meine maara!! lekin jab jab maarti hoon it goes to the top most part of the page mein kya karoon!! phirse maarke dekhti hoon!! ohhh accha!! theeke theeke toh apne doston ke naam liye hain!! haan haan mujhe tho chapar chapar karna pasand hain!! :P mere dston se pooch lo!!

Well that is nice ohhh !!! ohhh!! toh this is mystery aur secret waala kyali pulav!! accha hoga bohut accha hoga!! ase toh aapke prologue par mogambo khush hua!! buhuhahahah!!

its ok keep trying 😆

hope this mogambo likes what i write further 😊

interesting..!!

Originally posted by: Shruti21

interesting..!!

this is my first samud ff that i am reading...

continue soon

thank u shruthi will continue soon , this is my first samud FF too , do try to hit like button too dear 😆

Intresting prologue...Pls send a pm when u update...I cant wait to read more...😃

Originally posted by: huntinchild

Intresting prologue...Pls send a pm when u update...I cant wait to read more...😃

just wait a little will update first chapter soon 😊

*removes sweat from forehead* fueee finally 15 baar page ke upar jaane ke baad finally like buttin ne meri maang accept kar li!

Originally posted by: -The_Tomboy-

*removes sweat from forehead* fueee finally 15 baar page ke upar jaane ke baad finally like buttin ne meri maang accept kar li!

👏success at last

please do continue soon...love the concept👏