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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 1:
Kashmir

A woman of about 22 years was enjoying the fresh morning air in kashmir

After a while a boy of about 5 years came running towards her and hugged her lovingly

Sameer : Mum aap yaha kya kar rahe ho?????its so cold here u will catch cold come on come inside

Antara : awww!!!!! My baby kitni care karte ho aap meri sometimes i feel that u are my dad she stopped as sameers face fell down

Antara :I am sorry

Sameer - aap kyun sorry bol rahe ho i know dad bohot busy hote hai isliye he doesnt hav time to meet me but mum is this the really reason he doesnt stay with us

Antara was expecting this but not this early

Antara: there is no other reason he will come to see u soon with that she hugged him and sobbed lightly I am sorry Sameer

At the same time in Mumbai

A man of about 23 years was walking in his office in his usual style and attitude...the girls working in his office just forgot to breath as he was so handsome


But he ignored them and entered his cabin

After taking a seat he opened his drawer and took out a photo and started asking her the same question which he daily asks her

Jaan,where are you...


plz tell me whether i should continue it or not


And can anybody think of a name for this because my mind has gone blank 😊



The actual writer is nazia (naztheasyalover) she wrote this on asya on qubool hai forum but i thought it would be nice to have it on rantara too 😊😊 But im changing a few bits so that they dont be exactly same 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res for index 😊
Edited by princess555 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome start
of course do continue dear
looks damn interesting

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great concept!!! Haw she didn't tell their son the truth..Btw.. Title can be Jaan or Dooriyan (as they are far from each other) 😆
Continue soon 😃
Edited by Sophia21 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice concept
you should for sure continue it
i also think that jaan would be a good title 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ayaazukideewani

awesome start

of course do continue dear
looks damn interesting

Thanks 😊
Will continue should i post the next part now because ive already written a few parts 😊😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sophia21

Great concept!!! Haw she didn't tell their son the truth..Btw.. Title can be Jaan or Dooriyan (as they are far from each other) 😆
Continue soon 😃

Thanks and yep she didnt tell him and the title dooriyan seems nice and will do 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: princess555

Thanks 😊
Will continue should i post the next part now because ive already written a few parts 😊😆



yeh bhi koi poochni ki baat h???😆

jaldi update karna😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Wahian4lyf

nice concept

you should for sure continue it
i also think that jaan would be a good title 😊

Thanks 😊
Will do 😊
I might keep it as jaan or dooriyan not sure yet which one but it will be one of the two 😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ayaazukideewani



yeh bhi koi poochni ki baat h???😆

jaldi update karna😉

Okay update will be up in a few mins😊😆

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