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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG WOW I AM SO HAPPY I READ PART 1 AND PART 2 TOGETHER AND NOW I CAN'T WAIT FOR 3!! YOU BETTER UPDATE SOON! or else i will pm you and annoy you! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks 😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pampz

very short update ...😭...bilkul jee nahi bhara yaar ...next time plzzz gv us a long update ...n ur ff was awesome ...loved each n evry bit of it ...the story is sooo fresh n sooo beautiful ...

Sorry will try making it longer but i will update a few parts today and thanks 😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: srujanahpvr

nice update

loved it
continue soon

Thanks
Will do next part will be up in a few mins 😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: alishamerchant

OMG WOW I AM SO HAPPY I READ PART 1 AND PART 2 TOGETHER AND NOW I CAN'T WAIT FOR 3!! YOU BETTER UPDATE SOON! or else i will pm you and annoy you! 😆

Thanks and it will be up in a few mins 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 3:



A-R Constructions :

Antara entered her office in her usual self

her male employees had always been bowled over by her

She wore a full length chiffon saree which always complemented her persona her hair left open(just as he liked)

and minimal makeup with just eyeliner and a baby pink lip gloss

Antara had always been very strict when it comes to business

The employees would literally shiver if they just did a slight mistake

TO BE PERFECT IN HER WORK...was her only motto perhaps which she derived from him

She was just concerned with her work she never even attended any business parties

though she was the most successful bussinesswoman in the construction business she always maintained a low profile and not even a single photo of hers was available with any of business associates

She also had changed her name and to the outside world she was just Aratna (had no other name so just had antaras name the other way)

She entered her cabin and enquired about her schedule for the day

Secretary- mam the tender of Mr Mehra has been preponed and will take place in tomorrow

Antara: fine where do i have to travel to

Secretary: woh maam woh

Antara: what is it then tell me

Secretary: maam the meeting has been held in our firm

Antara: what???????? and u r telling me now what the hell

Antara was reaaly angry there was no time left

She has to make so much arrangements she didnt want to disappoint them as she needed to get the tender

Antara: now dont look at my face go and start the arrangements be quick

And asked her the timings

Secretary: maam the meeting is scheduled for tomorrow evening at sharp 5

She sighed as tomorrow is gonna be a n hectic day for her first she needs to attend the open day at Sameers school then the PTM and finally the meeting which is held tomorrow

Antara opened her bracelet which she never separated from herself from past five years

she opened it and a tear trailed down her cheek she looked at it and said

I MISS U AND SAMEER MISSES U

Sameers school:

It was break time

Sameer and his friends were sitting in the school canteen eating their lunch

Boy 1: my mom and dad both are coming what about you lot whos coming

Boy 2: my mum and dad are coming too what about yours sameer

Feeling dejected Sameer just told them that only his mum would be coming in the meeting and ran from there as his tears threatened to fall

antara had always told him how brave and strong his father was and tht boys never cry

He came to a lonely place and cried his heart out where are u da..da...da...i miss u plz come home soon all my friends dads come with them but you never come with me or do anything with me


Meanwhile in Mumbai

Naik Mansion:

Raghu was on his phone talking to his manager as to at what time his flight is

His flight was around 2 am and it was still evening and had also finished his packing

He came to the living room and chatted for a while with his ajji and helped his brother in his project work

Seeing his brother making the project reminded him their first project together


Flashback:

It was a month since college had started and everyone was busy in their own lifes

but there were two souls who were have been deprived of sleep for past one month

They were Raghu AND Antara

Raghu nights have been full of Antaras dreams

and the same thing was with Antara

one could easily say tht they were both in love each other it seemed that they had fallen in love with each other at first sight

They had not met each other since that incident

sometimes Raghu used to steal glances at her but she never saw him for past 1 month

Raghus friends had seen changes in him coz the person who never laughed even at meaningful jokes now used to smile even at smallest things

they never took it seriously instead were happy tht he is changing but there was one person who knew the reason and tht was Rukhsana

yes Rukhsana was in same class with Antara and had developed a great bond with her within a short span of time

she was the one who has always seen Raghu sometimes following them and stealing glances at Antara

she was happy for them because they seemed like they were perfect for each other

and just prayed that they get together soon

It was another day in college when a teacher announced that there will be a project where one person will be form one teacher and another from a different teacher

Next day the boys and the girls met each in the canteen and were thrilled that they would work together

and prayed tht they would get their boyfriend and girlfriend as their partners

even raghu and antara were praying to b together and were occasionally looking at each other

They entered the class and sat making a huge group of their own

The professor made chits with a freshers name on each one of them and kept them in a bowl and simultaneously another bowl with the names of the others

And as the luck favoured them all the boys got their respective girls as partners

Now only Raghu , Antara , Zubair and Tasneem were left

The professor picked up the chit with Antaras name and the next chit was that with Raghus name

Tasneem was very furious at this as she wanted to be raghus partner

she had been in love with him since school times but raghu always considered her as a good friend not more than that

but since he saw that new girl antara she had notices changes in him for that damn girl

and had developed a particular hatred for her

The project was to be submitted after a month and just to spend a month with Antara made a chill run down his spine

but how was he to control his bubbling feelings for her

Raghu: (in his mind) How i m gonna control myself now around her her one glance makes me go crazy what will b my condition aftr a month please help me!!

Antara to herself

Antara tu paagal ho gayi hai kya ek mahina uske saath woh bhi dinbhar u already such become flushed just by his gaze how will u work with him plz help me!!

The next day they met both were unable to talk with each other

But eventually Raghu broke the silence

Raghu: so erm how are u

Antara: m fine wbu

Raghu to himself: kya bataun ki kaisa hu raato ki neend udadi hai tumne sab jagah tum hi tum dikhayi deti ho

Asad: so have u decided anything

Antara: yeah i have a topic about the decreasing number of animals in India its a very crucial and serious topic and can fetch us good marks

Raghu: as u say

Antara: fine so we can start our work from tomorrow bye see u tomorrow

Raghu: hey listen aise kaise ek coffee ho jaaye

Antara: ji abhi nhi fir kabhi aaj mujhe bohot zaroori kaam hai

Before going further into the flashback his brother called him


Machmach: bhai ajji is calling you for dinner lets go

He had his dinner and left the Naik Mansion bidding goodbye to his mum and brother

His flight was delayed by a few hours due to bad weather later on he caught the flight and no sooner did he step into the airport he felt a familiar gush of wind but he shrugged it off and checked into his hotel

He then rested for a while after he got up it was still morning and thought to take a view of this breathtaking hill station his nani used to stay here and a small part of his childhood had been spent here in kashmir

he thought to take a visit to his school and met his teachers and principal there they were surprised as well as shocked because a student resembled him

This was also the reason why Sameer was really liked by his school teachers because he reminded them of Raghu same eyes, same persona, same style and attitude

he was exactly a replica of Raghu

He asked whether they need any kind of donations for the school but they told him tht they have more money than required

He was taking a look of his school when he found two boys fighting

Boy 1: how dare u say about my father

Boy 2: huh tell the truth to everyone sameer that ur father is dead

Sameer: no my father is alive and u will see him in today's PTM

Boy 2: lets see then

Raghu came there and stopped their fighting and held both of their hands and separated them

No sooner did he hold his hand he looked at him as if he was his own part




Precap:

Father and son

Edited by princess555 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OH...MY...GOD!!! i have no words! i feel so bad for sameer yaar!

Btw plz eidt and change asad and zoya and tasneem..and all that lot!😆
Edited by alishamerchant - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg Sameer's part broke my heart!! Bless him.. Ahhh now i get why he hasn't found her.. She changed her identity .. Looks like they going to the same meeting.. Awwwe Sam is a little Raghu.. Looks like they gonna bond.. Hope Raghu finds out soon.. Great update.. Continue soon 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: alishamerchant

OH...MY...GOD!!! i have no words! i feel so bad for sameer yaar!

Btw plz eidt and change asad and zoya and tasneem..and all that lot!😆

Thanks 😊😆

And already did but tsneem i had to use her cuz im bad with making up names 😆

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