ArSha Poem:Sathi mere..mere Hum-kadam... :) :)

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chetna

@crazysky

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

i never read any poem but ur this poem is just awesome

keep writing poems

u have talent of writing poem

loved it really n thanks 4 the gift

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prateek

@prateek.007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Truly,kya poem likhi hai yar,i just loved it..
Sach me deepika Excellent poems,perfect wordings and imagination..Hats off
Now i am reserving my comment,I am from cell..But kal subah me edit karunga..Pakka..
Pls dont like it before edit..😆

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SaNa Rahim

@SSsanasonu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

EXCELLENT!!
All that ArSha experienced and said it out in the IV is explicitely told by this poetry piece.
Reading and associating was amazing. Well done

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DocSNair

@Mukthaa

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

so beautiful..
thanx a lot for this wonderful poem

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Don't even know anymore

@Death_Memories

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

deepu dii🤗
sorry for being super late😳
coming to the poem wowww👏
i really loved how you explained their journey till now in just a few lines.Iloved these lines specially
Wo taaliyon ke gunj me teri ek awaj...
Yaad dilati he un beete lamho ki baat...

I could seriously picture their DID days.IT brought back so many old arsha memories.Just fantastic.

Waqt ke kasauti pe roshan hua he ye dosti. ..
Aaj bhi yaad aati he har wo beete palon ki masti..
Asmaan ko chu ke ..badlon pe chalte he...
Fir bhi dil se zameen se jude he...

These lines were just amazing it perfectly showed their sweet bond of friendship and how even after becoming so successful one thing that did not change was their relationship.They correctly potray their humble and down to Earth nature .Just loved it dii...

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934800

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

OMG this was awesome and deep, its was quite emotional as once again i m missing ArSha, even though am hard core swaron fan but i just love ArSha alot too, they are adorable... this was such an amazing poem with emotional feeling that transfers to my heart straight away

beautiful deep absolutely beautiful

P.S. its so sweet of u to write about ArSha