poojie, my co-poster on the eklavya-lakshya-kt-triangle/square postings! how are you? nice to see you in this posting. 😆
Originally posted by: Poojie
still I don't think he should have put the ring on her right away. He should have made some excuse and excused himself. Then when his family members asked him what's wrong he should have told them the truth, saving himself from further humiliation.
you are so right! i've become too sucked into this ridiculous show -- i forgot that in a drama, the characters can easily do drama! i was thinking of what i would do, not what eklavya character can do! ☺️
so to make up, how's this?
eklavya's reaching out for kt's hand to put the ring on, when suddenly..
he starts swaying slightly, his eyes blur.
eklavya's hand moves slowly up to his forehead.
kt's weeping too much at the floor to notice. but damini-mom can see beyond her own 1000-watt happy smile that something's going wrong with eklavya.
damini-mom: eklavya? what's wrong, beta? eklavya!
the swaying has become more pronounced, eklavya's practically buckling at the knees, both his hands are out groping for support. the ring drops out of his hand and goes rolling on the floor.
as eklavya falls back, mihir-daadu and karan-chachu move forward to hold him, eklavya's eyes close,
the ring keeps rolling, unstopped by all the crowd that are surging towards the falling eklavya, rolling..
the buzz around eklavya has finally penetrated kt's misery and she's standing at the edge of the crowd around the prostrate eklavya, horrified, while still..
the ring rolls and stops at the feet of another hurt heart, who slowly bends down to pick it up, and moves towards...
water is brought for eklavya, mihir-daadu is patting his cheeks gently "eklavya, open your eyes, please..", while kt's still at the edge of the crowd, her eyes and being drawn towards...
lakshya silently coming closer with the ring in his hand, eyes only for kt, while eklavya's eyes...
flutter open to the sight of anxious faces all around him, mihir-daadu helps him up to the glass of water that tulsi-daadi is holding out to him, and through the gaps in the crowd, eklavya can see ...
lakshya has reached kt, who stands motionless and accepting while he gently slides the ring onto her left hand finger. and eklavya's lips edge out into a smile, ever so slight.
hmm. is that what eklavya (and the balaji scriptwriters) could've done???? 😆
thanks poojie, i need to be reminded of this.
Edited by estee - 18 years ago