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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi guys
me again

sorry..................u have to bear me šŸ˜†

ok
todays epi was both, good and evil

well good part was of DNšŸ˜› and evil................as u know...........Shrivastav Kids

well the epi starts

Dn enters Maa ji room and maa ji was not there.................DN asked chandu where is Maa jii..............Chandu said that when he went outside........Maa jii was there

An asked her where he go................he felt like.............Chandu asked DN not to beat him..............but DN runs behind him and follow him in entire room.............

Jhumru came and said that he had searched in the house..............and maa ji is not there while bacha party is sleeping

DN think where can Maa ji goo

Chandu sit in front of hunuman pic and said that he will leave all the evil deeds of him and even left sweets if after Maa ji will be there.........................Jhumru asked him that he is witness of his saying.........and remaind him that if he will break his promise then bajrangbali will be angry of him................Chandu said that he is a man of will

DN sit in front of idol and pray for the coming back of Maa jii............as last night Maa ji start to be normal.............and hug all the kids............

the bacha party come inside running and shouting that dadi is here

DN asked her where is she..................bacha party said that the tree which was planted by dada jii, dadi maa was sitting under her selter

DN thanks God and give all of them the Prasad.................Chandu too come and asked DN ko forgive him as dadi is here.................DN teasingly said

DN:jao................then turn and winked at bua.................tumhain maaf kia

Chandu got happy and asked DN to give him prasad too but Jhumru come there and said

Jhumru: didi patah hai chandu ne kaha tha k dadi maa k milne pe woh apni sari buri adatain choor dey ga........................yahan tak k maithai(sweets) bhi

Chandu got šŸ˜• and said that he said of sweets..................this is prasad and eat it instantly while other laugh

right then the phone rings and DN pivk it up

it was kshitij call.................Kshitij ask her to get ready as he had sent his car who will pick her up to the office...................DN thinks now what happen in office

DN went to office but a security guard stop her and asked her who is she

by hearing this another security guard come there and said who allow DN to come inside

DN recognize the other security guard as bheem sngh and intro herself.
the security guard was from the opposite village of Lal ganj.............and said that why she is here...................she was about to tell him when kshitij come outside of the conference hall and see her...........

he went to her and said that he was waiting for her ...................an tell bheem singh that she is from now the new chairman of Shri industries.........Kshitij take DN inside while security guard got confused and asked other guard to give him a glass of water (moving his hand on his head in confusionšŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†)

in the room, assem amrit and priya's husband was sitting..........kshitij made DN sit on chair and said that today in court hearing.................our doc admit that he had given some medicines to Maa jii to make her normal 4 a min.................the doc also admit that maa jii disease is not that big and she will be normal in 30 days.....................thats whu court delayed the final decision till next 30 days

DN said that if Maa ji will not recover then

kshitij tells her that then maa jii will be consider as abnormal and then this will be proved wrong and u will not longer a trusty...................Assem said that court also said that the money which they got in the end of every month, will be given to them and there rooms too................if DN is a trusty or not

DN said that they only care for money....................the time which they spend in making plans against her..................if they had ever spend that time on Ma ji then Maa ji will not longer like that......................all look at him like😔

then DN said but right now i m trusty...............

DN:abh tum teenon yahan kia kar rahay hoo................chaloo utho or mujhay yeh office dekhaoo or yahan k karamchariyon(employes) se mara parechay(introduction) karwaoo......................

all stand up and take her to the employes.....................all employs stand up on seening amrit and assem..............and look at DN with "who is she" look

DN said assem bhaiya to introduce her ................assem said helplessly to the employes that now she is our new chairman

all look at him with open mouth................but DN said that she didn't hear it clearly and may be the employes too................speak loud.............amrit leave in anger while assem said louder that she is the chairman................

DN thanks her and turn...................she see a door on which Assem Shrivastav (M.D) was written..............she asked aseem what is this..........assem said that this is our rooms

DN went towards that and take off the name plate...................the she put down the name plate of Priya Shrivastav(MD) and Amrit Shrivastav(MD)'s name plate too....................all look at him with shocked while kshitij wasšŸ˜†

DN said that all were might be thinking that why she put it off................she said that in my village, the panchaiyat and all the members of the village sit in a feild so that there will be no wall b/w the panchayat and the mem and they can talk on anything...........................thats why we live happily...................now i m applying this rule hear too

all were shocked

Kshitij take him to Narindra Shrivastav Cabin and DN enter with teary eyes................she first stand in front of the pic and pray..................the kshitij ask her to sit on the chair..............DN refused and said that this all belong to Shrivastav family.....................then give an example from maha bharat aof Ram and said that she will sit beside the pic and the chair................Kshitij said her that she is innocent

DN:shayad issi wajha se babu ji ne humain iss kabil samjha................or hum babu ji k iss karya main safal hoon gain....................aye baat samjh maa

kshitij:sweetly..........😊...............aa gai baat samjh main

DN move from there and kshitij said that i get the point that Shrivastav family will gonna bbe striaght

in the conference room..................Priya's husband asked then that from now on............have they should follow her

amrit:nahin jeeja.................aisa nahin hoo ga....................hum ne tu usay bhagaya ka aik plan bhi soch lia hai............kyoun bhaiya

assem:haan...................likin koi chamatkari plan nahin hai.................choota sa hai...................likin jhatka...............bara lagay ga..........

with an evil grin

so the part ends
hope u guys like it

lolz
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rajinder_rp_s thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks, it was awesome. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Cool job with the update. I have a request though...

Can you not write in dialogues? I have a hard time reading them. Also, can you write the whole thing in English? Hindi takes me forever to read. 😳 Great job nevertheless. šŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome update......šŸ‘ ............those evil brothers 😔

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