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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: les-miserables

I want to apologize for the delay in my reply.. I was busy studying.

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Chapter nine: This update started the hell out of me.

Poor Ashtha, she could've have kicked in their groins or bit their palms or scream loudly..

I am glad Shlok came on time :) my hero! I hope he kicks their ass, and show them how to treat a lady properly.

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Thank you for writing this chapter! :)



Awww!U dnt need to apologise at all!😳I dnt mind!Nd studies do come first!😉Astha was too scared..Thank u!😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: les-miserables

Chapter ten: Oh ho! He kissed her, ab toh maar padegi mere hero ko. 😔 This was a nice update, he should have punched the other scoundrel too. I wish Ashtha get's a chance to slap both of them! They deserve it :)

I forgot to thank you for the pm, thank you! 😛 Hope you have a wonderful weekend. Take care!



😆Hope Bappa saves our hero fron da heroine!😉Thank u!😃Its a bit late to say happy weekend..😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tintin0602

i read till chap 7...

amazing is the only word... i loved it yaar...

aastha is so cute and shlok is as usual gettting annoyed by everything ...lol



Thank u so much!😛
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Thank u!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rocking-girl123

plz plz pm me ur nxt update... :)



Will do!😉
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Thank u!😊
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Chapter-10,page-71:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/93723486



CHAPTER-11.

Astha tried to push him away,whimpering out,against his lips..Trying to get herself free from his grasp,but Shlok,cupped her cheek,and hugged her tight,as he whispered against her lips.

"Not now Astha..This is important..Please.."And then went on kissing her lips.

Astha was stunned by his words..

Important?!!KISSING HER WAS IMPORTANT TO THE HATEFUL LOATHESOME SHLOK AGNIHOTRI?!She thought at first,not able to believe her own ears..

She would have pinched herself,to see if this was really happening..Seriously,she would have..If she knew WHERE actually her stupid arms were,at that moment..Right then when she needed them the most,her arms had left her,figuratively,as she could not feel them anymore..Nor could she feel any of her vital body organs,except her brain-which was thudding like insane,her blood-which was soaring,and her lips-her suddenly highly sensitive and reacting organ,was the most active organ of her body at that moment..Her stupid lips were tingling as the male lips caressed them,and slowly she was forgetting everything..Then all thoughts seem to leave her mind altogether,as he ran his tongue along them,and went on kissing her..

"Damn that Shlok Agnihotri!A lucky bas***d he is!"Muttered Rohan Sharma,from a dark corner of the building from which Astha and Shlok had left only a few minutes ago.

"I'm not going to stand here and watch them making love all night!"He said to himself angrily,as he passed a last disgusted look at the clinging couple,kissing in the rain.

It's time I find a new amusement..Cause the rate at which these two are going,they will soon be making babies,and the babies will come running to me calling me uncle,and screaming for chocolates,before the rain even stops-if I keep standing over here and watching them!Rohan thought angrily,as he turned to leave the scene and re-enter the building..

The doubts he had been having,thatShlok had lied about being the girl's fianc was clear now..They were truly lovers..That embrace and kiss was not of two strangers'...He had followed them quietly,just to check that..He had really set his eyes on that girl..Now,unfortunately he had to look somewhere else.

Rohan chuckled nastily,imagining a writhing female body,helpless below him..Someone had to take his wrath now..Rohan Sharma did not forgive or forget..His feet moved faster towards the party..

Cascading rain fell on them,plastering their cloth and themselves to each other,as close as possible,as Shlok's demanding lips moved on Astha's.Softly,tentatively at first,and then as she gasped out and leaned onto him for support,it started moving more demandingly..Taking her breath away,and his own all at the same time.

His body heating up,at a fast pace,despite the cooling rainwater dripping him wet,he tasted her sweetness..Her soft lips,making him lose his control.What he had started to stop her..From giving out the truth to the scoundrel,spying on them,was turning out to be something else altogether..And Shlok was helpless to the consequence.He had meant it to be a light kiss,but he was not being able to stop himself.

He pulled her closer to himself,his one hand snaking round her waist,while the other hand moved behind her head,raising it slightly,so that he had better access to her lips..His male lips caressing and suckling her soft dewy ones endlessly,possessively,passionately..

Rain water soaked them through the skin,but Shlok was unaware of it..Unaware of everything ,but her soft lips,that tasted like heaven..

He felt something pushing and biting into his chest..It was her nails..But he was not ready to move or let her go..Not yet..Not ever..

He went on kissing her,drinking in her sweetness,like a drugged man.She tasted so good,he had to go on kissing her..Her essence mixed with rainwater,so sweet and ..Salty..And stingy..A sharp stinging pain pierced his drugged state finally making him pull away.

Breathing harshly,he stared down at her wide angry eyes,when rainwater falling on his now free lips stung again.He placed his fingers against his lips,and winced..As he looked into his fingers,he realized his bottom lip was bleeding.

He could just see the drops of blood ,before it got washed away by the rain..

Amazed at the discovery,Shlok,looked at an angry Astha,sending burning dagger looks at him..

She has bitten my lip!The hell cat!He thought to himself.

He brushed his bottom lip,with the back one hand,while the other curved tighter round her waist,and pulled her closer to him.

"What.. did ..you just do?"He asked n a soft husky voice.

Astha did not reply,but in response tried to squirm free from his grasp.Her eyes scorching with hatred.

Shlok was losing his control on his temper too.Illogical as it was,he felt a strange anger at her unexplained hatred for him,that he could clearly see in her slanting hazel eyes..It was too deep considering they had just two chance meetings.

"I said..What..did..you DO?!"He asked through clenched teeth,as he pulled her closer and tighter to his body.

"I thanked you!"Astha hissed out,surprising Shlok.

"You WHAT?!"

"Are you deaf?!Along with being a loathsome,disgusting,arrogant,self-centred bas***d?!Consider this as repayment for forcing yourself on me,and trying to kiss me against my will!"Astha's voice rang with fury.

"If you are so in the mood to repay..Then what will be my payment for saving you from those scoundrels?!Will that be.."He let his words hang,as it slowly pierced the fog of her anger.

Astha's eyes rounded,as his words brought back a series of flashback..

Those men..Those loathsome men were about to..And then-..Her eyes moved up to his,understanding dawning finally.

She had been saved by Shlok Agnihotri..

Her eyes looking into his wary dark ones..Thankful was the last thing Astha felt at that moment..She loathed Shlok more at that moment for saving her,from that horrible fate.She did not want to stay indebted to him for anything whatsoever.Cold fury at her own stupidity,made Astha,clench her jaw tight,as she pushed Shlok away..Her feet set to flee and run from the memories,and run from Shlok Agnihotri..She just had to run..

Her feet moving her suddenly numb body and brain..

"Where are you going?!"The husky voice called her back,and pulled at her hand..Astha tried to set her self free,and finally managed to do so,by digging her nails hard,into his hand..

Her eyes and ears blind and deaf to everything..Her brain refusing to accept the reality,she just ran..

Astha was halfway down the road when,she slipped on her own saree..She fell backwards,closing her eyes,ready for the painful fall onto the concrete hard road..

The pain never came,as she landed on a hard solid male body,instead..

"Oh no!Bappa!Please not again!"She prayed in vain..

Chapter-12,page-87:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/95602798


Edited by TehsinaJFJ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG EEKKK
HOT
uff yaar both losin control
Aaww aashlok
One thing i would do is MAKE IT LONGER MAN 😆
Edited by HallyH - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I read it in one go and man this is just wow.
You do know how to play with words. Why does Astha hate Shlok so much? Where is her father?
Why do I feel like it's not Shlok who saves her it might be someone else?

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