Ashlok FF:DESIRE CALLS...Chapt-24,pg-149 UPDATED!

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xxDaydreameRxx

@xxDaydreameRxx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#551

Oh man! You and your cliff-hangers! It's just not fair. 😳

Hahha...but seriously this was a fantabulous update - I don't know how you are able to fit in so much passion in one kiss but you done it! I knew I called you the Queen of Romance for a reason.

I'm happy you gave Shlok a reason for the kiss. :) And did I mention that Rohan's commentary in his mind was hilarious! 😆 The rate at which these two were going...LOL!

But then he is SUCH a disgusting person and I hope that if he does appear anymore in your story (if he has a bigger role) we can see him getting punished for being such a sick-minded disgusting man! 😡

As for Astha and Shlok - Astha needs to get out of her dazed mode before she ends up in more trouble. Can't blame the girl much though - just having being kissed by Shlok Agnihotri. 😆

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music1

@music1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#552

hot and passionate...loved it...😊

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latha72

@latha72

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Posted: 11 years ago

#553

lovely...awesome... u keep us wanting more... love ur writing style

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Nikki

@cherry.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#554

Fantastic yrr.. so hot 😳

Plz update soon.

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Angel1618

@Angel1618

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Posted: 11 years ago

#555

Loved it... and the kiss 😳 haaye maar hee dala 😆

I hope its shlok not another pevert...

Edited by Angel1618 - 11 years ago

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rhearuhi

@rhearuhi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#556

OMG it was awesome loved the kiss

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tamanna-azaan

@tamanna-azaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#557

superb update...
it was hot...
once again astha fell in shlok arm...

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CrazyBilli

@CrazyBilli

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#558

You are a fabulous writer!! Just loving this ff.Rohan's thoughts,while seeing AaShlok kiss,cracked me up.😆 I hope that disgusting Rohan gets punished badly!!😡

continue soon!! And thanks a lot for the PM!! 😃

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ArVi-licious

@ArVi-licious

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Posted: 11 years ago

#559

Wow I felt I was standing right there watching them smooch away to glory! :-D fantastic chapter yaar,
Shlok seems swept away by Astha's beauty n simplicity n intrigued by her hatred towards him,
Why do I have this feeling we'l see more of that roHan jerk..
Great work...:-):-)