Ashlok FF:DESIRE CALLS...Chapt-24,pg-149 UPDATED!

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jeenia123

@jeenia123

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#561

OMG...It wa shot.the kiss was really really hot...😉... kash main bhi itni achi trah se romatic secnes likh pati...but my unluck..😭...just loved your creation.please update soon... 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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niki795

@niki795

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#562

awesome update
loved it
the kiss is hot!!!!!!!!!
waiting for next part
continue soon
thanks for the pm

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LuvStrk-001

@LuvStrk-001

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#563

Lovely chapter dear!!!!Thanks for pm and sharing!!!

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Mystery Girl

@mysterygirl06

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#564

OMG they kissed...awesome update...update soon...

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#565

Hot sensuous rainy romance..😳. Fabulous update shlok kissed astha to convince that jerk who was spying on them and he forgot the reason why he kissed her in the first place the moment their lips met..😆.
Fiery astha and sensuous shlok and she again fell over him waiting to read more of them so update soon..😊.
Thank you for the pm..
Love,
Kashmi..

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Riddhima

@Khushi_Dillse

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#566

Superb...amazing and mind blowing...

Aastha fall on the road...

But thr man is come there I think it's not shlok...

Waiting for your next update...

Please continue soon...

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aliahayse

@aliahayse

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#567

hi ,

Wooowww their kiss was really hot😳

First of all thank you very much for accused for the new chapter, otherwise I would never have found. To come to your new chapter , nothing to say except that it is fabulous. Just a question of why Astha Slok hate so much? could you give us a little hint? You ecris really good CV will ask you for help when they are short of ideas . When I read some of the FF I feel that the CV IPKKND have also read the stories , because I found some scenes of which were already " written in FF .

Sorry for not always comment but I do not know write English ( I use Google translate and I do not know if my comment is translated that way you know what I mean) and in addition I have 3 children who attend school with homework and then all this take me too long .

So please do not think I'm not interested in your stories .

I look forward to following . Good luck.👏👍🏼