Jalal Amer Trip : small FF

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Jalal was leaving Agra. One could notice the splendid pride on his face while sitting on the elephant. His high stature was proof that no one could come close to him when it came to power or elegance. Riding on his very right was his faithful emissary- Maham Anga. His badi ammi'. He looked at her his eyes filled with pride and then turned to his left and there she was-Jodha'. He could see her face behind the transparent veil that seemed to reflect the brightness emoting from her familiar sharp glare.

That very moment Jodha looked up and Jalal looking at her. She turned her face away and looked at the cloud of dust that had arose due to the stomping of feets of hundreds of horses and soldiers. A tear rolled down her cheek.

Hamida: Jodha, jaldi wapis aana. Thumharay bina ye harem suna lagega

Jodha payed her respects to Hamida and hugged her.

ji ammijan main jald wapis aaungi'

aur jodha, meray jalal ka khayal rakhna' said Hamida in a wishful tone.

Jodha looked at her with sadness filled in her eyes. Her ammijan expects some sort of miracle from her. How am I to discover a heart of a heartless man?' she thought to herself.

Jodha turned over the parchment on which she was writing down something while casually sitting on the Palki'

She always found it pleasurable to pen her thoughts down while long travels. This was something that her brother sujamal would do.

Many hours had passed. She noticed her Palki slowing down and then coming to a hault. There was some sort of commotion going on.

Sainik' she called out

Ji huzur'

Kya samasya hai' she asked peeping through the veil and looking around.

Huzur, Shehenshah nay hukm diya hai ki yahan per sabh raat tehrengay'

Jodha looked surprised. She knew that they the regular stop that was made while travelling to Amer had already passed. What did the shehenshah have in mind?

Moti' she called out

ji Jodha'

Thum jaker shehehshah ko bolo ki hum unsey milna chahthay hain'

Moti let towards Jalal's tent. Jalal was standing besides Maham and telling her to rest while ordering soldiers to stand guard.

Seeing Moti, Maham's facial expressions changed. She wanted to stay and listen to what Moti had to say but it was too late as she had already started to leave. Not wanting to create unnecessary doubts, Maham left.

ijazat hai' said Jalal after listening to Moti's request.

While waiting for Jodha, Jalal started to take his crowned turban off and placed it on the table besides his bed.

hum yahan isiliye ruke hain Jodha kiyunki, hum nahi chahthay ki kisi dushman ko ye khabar ho jaye ki yahan sey mughalon ki toil nikal rahi hain. AUr unko aap per yar hum per hamla kernay ka mauka mil jaye' Said Jalal in one breath looking at Jodha's parted lips.

He walked closer to her and while Jodha stared at him questioningly as to how he found out what she was about to ask him.

Hum aapko jan chukay hain jodha begum aur aapkay sawalon ka humain pehlay sey hi andaza ho hi jatha hai' he said smiling

Acha tho agar aapko sab kuch gyat hai tho ye batayiye ki abh hum kya soch rahe hain?' she asked smugly

Jalal smiled at her and took a step closer towards her with his hands tied behind his back. Jodha looked a bit startled and moved a step behind but then she stood her ground as if challenging him to come forward with his intentions

Jalal moved his face closer towards jodha and whispered in her ear

sahih samjtha aapnay' he said with a cunning smile

Jodha's cheeks flushed and she could feel the heat coming out of the back of her ears

Kya sahih socha humnay jodha begum? batayiye ki hum sahih hain ya galat' he asked smiling

Jodha did not know what to answer. She knew that she could not bring herself to say what she thought jalal was thinking. Even if she were right it would just be embarrassing to state anything of that nature. She did not trust him not to turn her words into something more sinister than it is.

She turned to leave

Just them Moti bai arrived and made her presence known.

Moti bai , hum chahthay hain ki thum jodha ki jagah yahan ruko aur hum thumharay khaymain main jodha kay saath rahengay.'

Moti bai looked surprised at Jalal's request. She turned and looked at Jodha, who was equally shocked but did not say anything.

Jalal turned towards Jodha

aap humaray saath chaliye'

Jodha and Jalal reached a smaller tent, which was made for the special servants. It was not huge as Jalal's tent or Jodha's but it was considerably comfortable. There was a table with three chairs and a bed that could accommodate four people.

humay kushi hui ye dekh ker ki Moti nay humari baat bina hichkichahat kay maan li. Agar dushman aa bhi gaya tho voh aap thak nahi pahunchayga' said Jalal

Jodha became worried thinking about Moti.

humari wajay sey Moti ko kuch ho gaya tho? she started

Fikr math kijiye jodha begum. Hum ithna tho samaj chuke hain ki aapko Moti bai ka khaas khayal hai. Unki zimmedari humaray uper hai. aap araam sey so jayiye.

Jalal started to go towards the tent's exit but before leaving he said

hum thodi dair bahar intezar kerthay hain. agar aapko ...' jalal turned around and smiled at Jodha

hum andhar nahi aayengay jab tak aap nahi bulayengi' he said.

Jodha looked at jalal with her unsparing glare and then she looked away.

Jalal shook his head and left smiling.

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Its really Nice start Suchi!! Good Job!!👍🏼
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